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I know I suck at poems but I've strived to try my best on this one. Give me your feedback!

Helping Hand

I am the hand
I came to replenish your land
I notice you are weak and meek
And I am the help you seek

Your willing to go on your own
You try to make do with the path you have sewn
But you don't understand
I am the angel sent to give you another chance
Enjoy the fancy life I blessed you with

This just might be the only life you'll get
Don't forget I did you a favor
Im not only a angel
But I am your one and only savior. JESUS CHRIST.

Has anyone read this poem yet? I want your honest feedback!!

THANK YOU.

My only problem with it is the rhythem is a little off. I love the meaning behind the words and the words themself, but yeah.

The poem is good. Very Nice