SammySparrow
FINALLY a story I WANT to do. I've only written a few sentences,but I've figured out a LOT more. So I'll type it all then write in on paper later. PLEASE tell me if it's good!
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'The Pirate's Wolf'
White paws barely touched the ground as they swerved through the streets of Port Royal,missing gun shots by inches. Panting,a white wolf turned sharply into an ally way. The Navy just ran by.
'Surely those humans aren' THAT dumb.' She thought,coming out of her hiding spot. She headed back to the docks. It was 2 PM. Which meant it was meal time. Merchant ships where on there way in,and that always meant food.
She headed over to one ship that everyone knew her. Yipping,she hopped up on a barrel. A sailor looked down at her,then back to the deck. "Hey captain! Missy is back!"
The captain headed over a peered down to her. "Aye,so yer back lass!" He called to her. 'Missy' yipped again. The captain came down with a small sack in his hand. He opened in to revel four fishes.
Carefully he slipped them in a pocket she had attached to a stash around her. 'Missy' yipped happily. The captain looked at the other pocket she had. "Ye haven' been to work yet? Then ye better go!" He gave her a fish for lunch then shooed her off.
She headed over to the blacksmith shop. This was how she was known everywhere in town. By delivering swords for William Turner. She slipped through an entry way made just for her and headed over to him.
Will turned and smiled at her. "There you are Snow," The now 'Snow' walked over to a fancy looking sword, "yes girl,that's for Commodore Norrington. And yes,you have to take it."
'Snom' watched him as he put the sword in it's sheath and held it out in front of her. Ears back,she gently took it in between her teeth. Everyone in town seemed to enjoy her except for Norrington,but she wasn't about to do her job wrong. Will opened the door and she started to trot down the street towards the Commodore's house.
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Well? What do you all think of it so far?
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'The Pirate's Wolf'
White paws barely touched the ground as they swerved through the streets of Port Royal,missing gun shots by inches. Panting,a white wolf turned sharply into an ally way. The Navy just ran by.
'Surely those humans aren' THAT dumb.' She thought,coming out of her hiding spot. She headed back to the docks. It was 2 PM. Which meant it was meal time. Merchant ships where on there way in,and that always meant food.
She headed over to one ship that everyone knew her. Yipping,she hopped up on a barrel. A sailor looked down at her,then back to the deck. "Hey captain! Missy is back!"
The captain headed over a peered down to her. "Aye,so yer back lass!" He called to her. 'Missy' yipped again. The captain came down with a small sack in his hand. He opened in to revel four fishes.
Carefully he slipped them in a pocket she had attached to a stash around her. 'Missy' yipped happily. The captain looked at the other pocket she had. "Ye haven' been to work yet? Then ye better go!" He gave her a fish for lunch then shooed her off.
She headed over to the blacksmith shop. This was how she was known everywhere in town. By delivering swords for William Turner. She slipped through an entry way made just for her and headed over to him.
Will turned and smiled at her. "There you are Snow," The now 'Snow' walked over to a fancy looking sword, "yes girl,that's for Commodore Norrington. And yes,you have to take it."
'Snom' watched him as he put the sword in it's sheath and held it out in front of her. Ears back,she gently took it in between her teeth. Everyone in town seemed to enjoy her except for Norrington,but she wasn't about to do her job wrong. Will opened the door and she started to trot down the street towards the Commodore's house.
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Well? What do you all think of it so far?