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This is awesome

Seconded

you guys think so? coming from two esteemes members such as yourselves that means alot. more to come.

well.. their comments mean much.... ah, just gonna say keep up the good work in here..

ah, but yours is the sweetest opinion of all!!!

i was just being a bit dramatic.

looking forward to read more though... great job!

Originally posted by Rogue Jedi
you guys think so? coming from two esteemes members such as yourselves that means alot. more to come.

It's really, really good. I was disappointed when I scrolled down and realised I'd read it all. I'm not a 'Star Wars fan' as such, but I am enjoying this. Looking forward to the next update

clapping

Excellent... also, hope you don't mind us commenting?

comment away, babe....BTW: my next installment will pay tribute to epidose 4.

good job RJ..

what happens next?

more to come, love. patience.

Although I'm not into Star Wars, I liked this story. I hope you meant it when you said "more to come"...

...I've been waiting for this and am sorry that i didn't see it earlier.

just finished reading, AWEsome and can't wait for the next part!

((Ok so when is this story set?))

The first part that i read was really good...I write SW fanfiction myself lol

Originally posted by Jedireaper
((Ok so when is this story set?)) See the opening post, timeline and character descriptions are there.

((I would like to help write this story. Here is an example of my work: http://www.fanfiction.net/~jedireaper It wont be finished for a while but I would lend a hand. Even write bits if you like. Free help at hand.))

no thanks, I roll solo yo.

I'd still like to help. Hey! i do anything

That was GREAT. Don't stop. no2

Originally posted by Disturbed Angel
That was GREAT. Don't stop. no2 you mean the story? haermm

Originally posted by Rogue Jedi
you mean the story? haermm
shocklaugh

More to come.

I'm not the anal critic I should be... I want moar.

MOAR!

I am contemplating whether or not to cut out that last installation.

*waits*

Waiting on input about the last installment, shoud I delete it?

....where's the rest RJ? it's been... well, far too long since you last update.

Originally posted by Rogue Jedi
Waiting on input about the last installment, shoud I delete it?

i'm going to say that it's your choice. if you think it works with the story, then keep it... if it's steering the story to a whole 'nuther direction and you don't like it, remove it.

i'm not sure as well,lol

Working on the latest installment.

I came when Blinn stabbed Juro.

Juro is an ******* haermm

Shit I misspelled Wouldn't haermm

Also, a Bantha KICKING Seth in the guts, not LICKING haermm

licking him the in the guts sounds just wrong. -.-

nice posts, can't wait for more!

KICKING, silly.

Well, well, RJ. This is indeed a turn of events. Why, I remember the two of us in Klein Forest...'attempting' to write war stories.

If I remember correctly, our stories sucked, but they sure were funny to read.

Remember this???

"Run, run...they're coming up the mountain!"

PS Your story is quite good. I love Star Wars, always have, but I've never written anything based on it. Your work is excellent.

I got involved with the Star Wars Xwing slicing community instead, and lasted all the way through Xwing Alliance. Some of my old friends that I worked with I haven't talked to since 2000, but I stop by once in a while, and they are still editing that game!

I remember "Wolverines!!!"

Good to hear from you, man. I actually lost all those SW figures we used to play around with, bet they'd be worth quite a bit if money.

And thanx, your writing blew me away. My problem is that I get about this far into a story and lose interest haermm

You updated since September 1st and you didn't tell me? uhuh
Originally posted by Rogue Jedi
Also, a Bantha KICKING Seth in the guts, not LICKING haermm
crylaugh crylaugh crylaugh

haermm Bantha sex

Dumbass. laughcry



Still going good, tho.

Of course it is, did you expect anything less? Maybe a bit of ass salt?

I also have problems finishing some stories, as I too tend to lose interest. However, I have completed many stories, especially my series of stories that were based in the future in the Mack Bolan/Phoenix Force universe. Still not considered my best work, but it was definitely an improvement over that crap we scribbled just to make ourselves laugh at school.

If I had a place and time, I would do artwork to add to my stories, maybe even start another comic book-type story. With work, and the kids and my divorce looming here and there, it's too much to really get into right now, unfortunately.

Man, Phoenix force that takes me back.

I remember some of your sketches from our early teen years, dude they were awesome.

Thanks! You do realize that I have some pics uploaded on myspace...right?

Looking now.


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Yeah, I hate that. Always happens at the most inopportune times.

Funny thing is, after it comes back online, nothing ever changes.

Originally posted by Rogue Jedi
Of course it is, did you expect anything less? Maybe a bit of ass salt?
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hanone



Shaddap!

Originally posted by Viper2c
Yeah, I hate that. Always happens at the most inopportune times.

Funny thing is, after it comes back online, nothing ever changes. Saw the artwork

Originally posted by Disturbed Angel
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hanone



Shaddap! ass salts crylaugh

nice post... ^_^

Inside joke haermm

Originally posted by Rogue Jedi
ass salts crylaugh
Hmph. tongue_ss

Blind tiys and my punes are different from my mose.

Originally posted by Rogue Jedi
Blind tiys and my punes are different from my mose.
You are unbelievable, lol.

And predictable.

That's right.

I need to write some more.

Sometimes a good, swift, kick in the ass by the right female can get the mind working again, RJ!!

On the downside, it can also piss you off, and a fight can insue...but I digress...

Depends on the female

In this case, it will help

This is true...

So what do you think about Blinn and his men refusing order 66? I never bought into ALL of the Clone troopers just accepting it as if it were nothing.

Originally posted by Rogue Jedi
I need to write some more.
Yup.
Originally posted by Viper2c
Sometimes a good, swift, kick in the ass by the right female can get the mind working again, RJ!!

On the downside, it can also piss you off, and a fight can insue...but I digress...
That would be me. doped I do it all the time...... Figuratively speaking. mmm
Originally posted by Rogue Jedi
Depends on the female

In this case, it will help
It had better. uhuh

Originally posted by Disturbed Angel
Yup.

That would be me. doped I do it all the time...... Figuratively speaking. mmm

It had better. uhuh Bring it haermm

Originally posted by Rogue Jedi
Bring it haermm
It is SO brought. haermm Just you wait.

Originally posted by Rogue Jedi
So what do you think about Blinn and his men refusing order 66? I never bought into ALL of the Clone troopers just accepting it as if it were nothing.


Yes, and how ironic was it that the special order was 66? One more and we'd have Armageddon.

Midicholorians....W...T...F???

And Anakin a whining weiner...at least he was better in EPIII

Kill Jar Jar....hehe

Originally posted by Viper2c
Yes, and how ironic was it that the special order was 66? One more and we'd have Armageddon.

Midicholorians....W...T...F???

And Anakin a whining weiner...at least he was better in EPIII

Kill Jar Jar....hehe Well, Annie is long gone, Vader is in the house.

No Jar Jar in this story, not gonna happen.

Well, that's good. I always liked Vader...he was just ****ing cool.

My idol.

I am a Mace Windu fan. Vappad FTW.