Sparrabeth Stories

LoveJackSparrow

Alright here it is:
inside Jacks cabin on the black pearl.
Jack: What do you want luv?
lizzie: Nothing Jack, what are you doing?
Jack: Noting that opens to your mind I would think.
Lizzie looks over Jacks shoulder and sees a box with a bow on it.
lizzie: What is that Jack?
Jack: ELIZABETH! Stop looking at my personal stuff. Its very personal.
Lizzie: Oh Jack I already saw, its just a box with a bow. What could be soo cool for me to want to know whats in side it?
Jack: well its for someone of course, luv but not for anyone you would think of.
Lizzie: Well whos it for Jack.
Jack: Uh nobody.
Lizzie: Oh Jack you said it was for somebody now whats inside it and whos it for?
Jack: NOBODY!!! Now leave my cabin!
Lizzie: No, not until you tell me everything about that box.
Jack: No, now leave.
Lizzie: Can I try to get you to tell me at least before i go?
Jack: Hmm, try me, but nothing will work.
Lizzie: Alright then.
Elizabeth steps closer to jack until they are inches away from each other.
Lizzie: Am I close an eough so you can tell me?
Elizabeth's lips are inches away from Jack's.
Jack: Nope, not yet. You can try everything and I wont tell you.
Lizzie: Alright then.
Elizabeths lips touch Jacks lips nice and slowly. The kiss was a long sweet nice kiss until it was intruted with Will coming into the cabin.
Will: Jack I need you to..........Elizabeth?????
Lizzie: Oh my god Will! This isent what it looks like!
Will: Oh I think I do know what it looks like Elizabeth.
And Will leaves the cabin angrily.Elizabeth looks back at Jack and Jack starts to smile with a twinkle in his eye.
Jack: That kiss of yours was nice darling, but not enough to let you know what the box is for and by doing that I beleive you just lost the man you love terribily, luv.
Elizabeth: That's not true Jack!
Jack: Then why dont you chace after him? Or are you too involved with me to let me go because maybe you have some feelings for me?
Elizabeth: No! I would never have feelings for you Jack! I love will and thats that! You cant change my mind about Will!
Jack: What ever, luv, then I guess you dont want this box I was giving to you then.
Elizabeth: What? That box is for me? Oh Jack, you remebered!
Jack: I did remeber luv, and this is for you for your birthday.
Elizabeth: Oh Jack!
She starts to cry happily and sadly.
Elizabeth: You were the only person to remeber my birthday! Not even Will remebered that it was today!
Jack whispers to Elizabeth: Open it.
Elizabeth slowly opens it and finds a ring in it and relizes what its all about.
Elizabeth: Oh Jack! Yes I do! I will marry you! I do! I do! I do!
They start to make out in the cabin for a very long time. And then Will comes in again but this time Jack and elizabeth dont seem to notice this time and the 1st thing that caught Will's eye was the ring on Elizabeths hand, it wasent the one he gave her it was a different one, it was Jack's ring, and Wills heart began to break.

Sifzensinril

lol, Will's heart began to break

LoveJackSparrow

Yea I liked that part lol

LoveJackSparrow

My 1st story wasent exactly on what I was hoping for but o well i will try again to make a sword fighting against the 2 love birds oooo i get it Swanns and Sparrows types of birds.

lovethemtigers

i think try to write a sparrabeth fanfic...so we can get the AWE ending that t and t and disney did not give us.....

aelizabeth

good idea, lovethemtigers. I need that ending. So. Much.

I've just started one myself actually.

PS. Great fics everyone! Why is everyone here such brilliant writers?!

LoveJackSparrow

Acatally my friend and i are actally making something like that! cause well i made a story about Elizabeths and Jacks daughter and Will had a different child with someone else not elizabeth and it was a boy and the girls name is Sarah and the boys name is Jeremy and they fall in love. And Me and my friend are trying to make a story on how thats going to happen because Elizabeth had a boy maybe I could say that he died of someting idk. Well Ill try to put that on here later.

willofthewisp

It sounds fun. I would read it as soon as you post it.

LoveJackSparrow

Ill go ahead and post a little bit of it, it sorta starts out as a story:
Once there was a girl who didnt know who she was. She thought she was part of a royal family, but wasent. She wondered why everyone treated her rudely, but she could firgure it out. She also wondered why she talked like a pirate, it scared other people and everyone called her Pirate at her school. She didnt understand her life she thought that she never would. Her name was Sarah. She was beautiful but even her beauty didnt change peoples minds about her. Everyone thought she was strange, she barly had friends. Her soft green eyes and her long silky brown hair with the caribbean skin showed why everyone called her Pirate, besides that she talked like one. She thought she was alone in this dark world, she thought nobody cared except the king and queen of England.

Thats all I can give you now, maybe ill add later or something, its not all finished you know.

willofthewisp

Ooh, this is so interesting.

LoveJackSparrow

really you really like it?????

willofthewisp

I'm sucked in. I need to know more. If that's not the sign of a good beginning, I don't know what is.

shannstar79

OH I love this thread!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More More More Please smile

Sifzensinril

yes, more please, sounds really very interesting

LoveJackSparrow

Alright here somee more:

One day after school, Sarah came home after learning her favorite subject, history. she loved history, to her history was her life. That day they were learning about pirates,and she already new most of the questions from her father. she loved to learn alot about pirates from the king, for he told her stories about pirates and so she loved to talk about pirates....one reason was she was wondering why people called her pirate and another reason was because she was intrested. One day, Sarah wanted to know this question because pirates filled her thoughts. she asked her teacher,
Sarah: Why do army's try to kill pirates and why do they hate them soo much? Sarah was very intrested in this cause in her studies it was part of her history questions in her thoughts and in her history book quiz.
Teahcer: Sarah the reason why we dont like pirates is because they are thives and are bad people in ways.
Sarah: They are?
Teacher: Yes they are Sarah....now you know something new about pirates that you will never forget.
Sarah: Oh well i find them quite intresting actally.
After Sarah said that everyone in her class started to laugh and someone yelled out load:
Ben: Thats because you are one, Pirate!
And after he said that everyone was laughing at Sarah and Sarah was sad and she just closed her eyes and waited for the school day to end.
After the bell rang she ran across the hall ways and out into the open and started to cry and walked alone the whole way home. She finnally got to her house and when she did she hugged the queen and queen comforted her. she asked:
Queen: What happened my sweet Sarah?
Sarah: Ok mom ill tell you what happened.
And Sarah told the queen everything about history class and how everyone laughed at her.
Queen: Aww you poor thing.
Then the king comes in with some hot coco and some cookies.
King: How bout some nice cococ and some cookie, that always makes you feel better!
Sarah ate some cookies and drank some hot coco and she did feel better. She then told king too of what happened that day and the king felt sorry too. he gave her a hug and said its timet hat you got some rest. Sarah then went up stairs to her room.

Its not my best work but oh well ithink its bad i havent gottne to the best part but i still need to right that up....but the next part has elizabeth in it!!! Shes dead by the way shes just a ghost soo just letting you people know.

He'sAPirate

OMG. How about Jackelyn? Jack and Jocelyn. Jocelyn (That's ME!)

LoveJackSparrow

You mean you want a girl named Jocelyn???? well you can call her what ever you want. But im still putting Elizabeth but you can imagine! lol....... wink

willofthewisp

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3555580/1/

Check this short one out.

Sifzensinril

aww, it's really good one, I love it

Jaeh_JediPirate

Can i try? i'd be referring to Elizabeth as Liz.. big grin

Jack paced on the deck and constantly checked his compass. Everyone was already asleep, but Jack simply could'nt. Ever since Davey Jones' locker, he had been worrying about death.
"I know what i want, I know what i want, I know what I want." But he knows he simply doesn't know anything anymore.

Liz walked out of the cabin. "Jack?"

Jack turned around and looked at Liz. He didn't answer, instead he walked towards the bow of the ship and stared at the wide open sea.

"Jack... I'm so sorry about the-"

"Yes! You should definitely be sorry!" Jack turned around and almost jabbed a finger at Liz. "Do you know how horrendous it was for me in there!"

Liz frowned thoughtfully. "I just wanted to save everyone, that's all."

"I know." Jack said, turning back to the sea again. "If you wanted to save everyone, then why leave me?"

"You know why Jack. I don't need to tell you." Liz whispered.

Jack turned and leaned towards her, their proximity closer than usual. "I know." He smiled, and leaned in closer.

... to be continued.. wink

Sifzensinril

sounds very inteereesting, aww

Jaeh_JediPirate

thank you.. smile

LoveJackSparrow

I like it really intresting countinue on!!!!!

LoveJackSparrow

And about my story im changing the 3rd part of it.....my new 3rd part about my story is going to be even more intresting and guess what....Elizabeth is now alive and i know sarah and wills son fall in love but jack and elizabeth have their times together too.....so it will be intresting when i reach those points.

Jaeh_JediPirate

Originally posted by Jaeh_JediPirate
Can i try? i'd be referring to Elizabeth as Liz.. big grin

Will climbed up to the deck. He couldn't sleep either. He saw Jack and Liz having their little 'talk'. He noticed the proximity between Jack and Liz. He winced; he just noticed his heart is pounding so fast. He could hear the beat of his heart in his ears. He observed the two.

Liz leaned over and closed her eyes. She almost kissed Jack, and jerked back when she realized what she was doing. "Jack! I-I- I can't."

"Why not love?"

"It doesn't feel right." Liz whispered.

Will released the breathe he didn't realize he was holding when Liz pushed Jack away. He continued to observe from afar.

"Sacrifice love." Jack said, walking around her. Liz stood frozen, as if she was cornered by an impossible obstacle. "You need to sacrifice something if you want to get what you want."

"It's not that easy..." Liz murmured.

"It's never easy love...." Jack stepped an inch closer. He stopped in front of her. "Do you really know what you want?"

Liz stared out into nothing. "I don't know what I want anymore."

"Then it's time you find out."

to be continued..... wink

AudioHeart

Originally posted by Jaeh_JediPirate
Will climbed up to the deck. He couldn't sleep either. He saw Jack and Liz having their little 'talk'. He noticed the proximity between Jack and Liz. He winced; he just noticed his heart is pounding so fast. He could hear the beat of his heart in his ears. He observed the two.

Liz leaned over and closed her eyes. She almost kissed Jack, and jerked back when she realized what she was doing. "Jack! I-I- I can't."

"Why not love?"

"It doesn't feel right." Liz whispered.

Will released the breathe he didn't realize he was holding when Liz pushed Jack away. He continued to observe from afar.

"Sacrifice love." Jack said, walking around her. Liz stood frozen, as if she was cornered by an impossible obstacle. "You need to sacrifice something if you want to get what you want."

"It's not that easy..." Liz murmured.

"It's never easy love...." Jack stepped an inch closer. He stopped in front of her. "Do you really know what you want?"

Liz stared out into nothing. "I don't know what I want anymore."

"Then it's time you find out."

to be continued..... wink

OMG IT'S AMAZING LOL YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE, WAY MORE LOL KEEEEP GOING! stick out tongue

That's sooo cute, I Love it! Keep up the AWESOME work eek!

w0w Everybody is soo Good, lol now I'm on a total blackout for ideas...*sigh*

Jaeh_JediPirate

aww.. thanks you AH!!!

this ain't because i bribed you the hallucination jack right? j/k... big grin

AH, no worries, exams do the to everyone.. smile

AudioHeart

Thanks, I don't feel so insane now big grin

(p.s PEOPLE SHE BRIBED ME!) Jokes, it Was VERY good really! ...And I'm sure Jack And Liz would be PROUD!

Jaeh_JediPirate

aww.. thanks! smile

AudioHeart

Np! lol

joanjoan

I love this story eek!

Keep writing, I can't wait to read more! wink

Jack behaves so cool eek!

LoveJackSparrow

Yea its really good! Please keep going!!!!!! oh and heres a bit more of what i wrote aslo the mother of sarah is dead and i guess her name is ahh let me think hmm how about Christine yea her name will be christine and heres a bit of the story.

It was another day after school, and Sarah was happy because today was the best day of her life. She got all A's on her report card and to her it was a miricle. When she got home she called out:
Sarah: Mom, dad, I'm home!!!!!
But she didnt get an answer. she wondered around the room and found nothing. She went up stairs to her parents room. She still didnt see them, but then something shiny lead her up to her parents desk, she looked and found a heart shaped blue dimond locket and she picked it up its was very light and heavy at the same time. she opened the locket and there inside the locket were two people. One a man and the other a woman on each side of the locket. The woman was very beautiful and the man looked very handsome. And then she turned around still iwth the locket in her hand and there were the king a nd queen. They looked at Sarah and they knew that it was time to tell her.
King: I knew this moment would come someday.
Queen: we might as well tell you.
Sarah: Tell me what?
King: Your life of course. Your a........
Sarah: Im a what? Father your scaring me.
Queen: What hes trying to say sweetie is that...were not your parents and your a......daughter of a pirate.
Sarah: Im a what??????????????? That makes me aaaaa.......aaaa....a pirate! Why didnt you tell me this? Why? WHY???
King: we were afraid that you woundent understand and you would think that your a freak.
Queen: that locket.....its your parents....its yours...take it.
Sarah then looked at the locket and she started to cry.
Sarah: Are they......alive?
King: Your father is......but we dont know about your mother.
Sarah started top cry even more and she ran out of the kings and queens room and didnt lookback.
Sarah whispers to her self: I'm a pirate. I cant beleive im a pirate.
Sarah couldnet sleep all night and she decided to open the locket and then she noticed something. There was a button on the bottom of the locket aand she pushed it....and there was music. Sweet hearing music it sounded as if the sea was calling to her. And she decided to leave the music on every time she opened the locket.
Sarah: Its now mine to keep and i will always where it.
suddenly there was a knock on the door. it startled her but she decided to see what it was. And when she opened the door there stood a woman looking down at her and she said to Sarah:
Christine: Hello, my daughter.
And Sarah began to scream. Christine then put her hand on top of Sarahs moth and came into the room.
Christine: Dont be frightened my daughter. Im not going to hurt you....i would never hurt you...not even try.
sarah then stopped screaming and she started to cry.
Sarah: Why have you come? I dont even know you. Are you a ghost? Why do you say your my mother?
Christine: Im am your mother look inside the locket and you will see that im there. That was my locket too but it was for you to keep...forever. And im sadly to say I am a ghost....i died when you wree born and your father decided to take you to an oraphange and when he did he saw the king and queen. He said take my daughter heres some money...and heres a locket for her.
Sarah: But why have you come? I understand everything but why have you come to me?
Christine: Because I have to come to warn you that the locket you are whereing has a dimond and thatJolly Roger is coming for you....to kill you.....to do what ever he can to get the dimond.
Sarah: Why dose he want it?
Christine: Its the dimond of the sea. Its the color of the sea and if he ever gets that dimond...the world will be destrode.......and he will have all power to comande everything in this world.
Sarah: Oh my! I must always keep this safe then.
Christine: Hes coming. Leave now! Before its too late hes here!
Sarah: Mother....NO! Dont leave me! Mother I dont know where to go!
Christine: Folow your heart!
And she was gone. Vanished in thin air. Suddenly Sarah heard a gun shot and she looked out and saw blood she saw the king and queen dead on the ground and she closed the door. and went to her window and quickly made an escape and she ran. she ran as fast as she could and didnt look back. She didnt know where she was going to go but she did set a plan she was going to the docks for a ride to somewhere.

I hope you like it! But yea im not finshed yet.

AudioHeart

Dude, Jack IS cool laughing out loud

=] ROTFL

willofthewisp

Interesting.

AudioHeart

What is?

Jaeh_JediPirate

Liz backed away a bit. Jack looked at her curiously. He stepped closer. "What are you afraid of?" Liz backed away a bit again, and bumped into the rail. She was cornered. "What are you afraid of... Elizabeth?" Jack whispered into her ear.

"I don't want to choose." Liz said, closing her eyes.

"You have to, sooner or later." Jack whispered back. He turned around, and walked back into the cabin.

Liz stayed there frozen.

Will watched everything. His arms turned into jelly. Wha-what were they talking about? He asked himself. He couldn't hear it, and it frustrated him. He wanted to ask Liz what they were talking about so badly, but he knew it was between her and Jack only. Will just climbed back down.

Liz stood where Jack left her. Choose? She asked herself.

to be continued?... lol.

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thanks for reading btw guys.. big grin

AudioHeart

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!! Oh, Np lol laughing out loud

LoveJackSparrow

MORE MORE PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And heres somemore of my story i guess:

Sarah was fast asleep on the dock, she dreamed of her mother and she never wanted to wake up, but something hit her on the head.
Sarah: Ow!!!!!!! What? Who goes there?
And the light beamed on her and it hurt her eyes. But as she woke up she saw some people looking at her with a strange look in there eyes.
Pete: Hello dare, are you looking for a ship? Or a you just dare waiting for somebody?
Sarah: Umm, I guess I'm looking for a ship and waiting for somebody actally I dont know why im here.
Pete: Well I'm loading up for a ship on duh Black Pearl...want a ride?
arah thought for a moment that this would be a great idea, she would be safe she could be free to the open sea and she loves the sea. To her it would be a lifetime option, to ride the waves on a ship and live her life as a pirate.
Sarah: Are you a sailor or a pirate? I know, but im curious.
pete: Hmmmm.
He thought for a moment and decided to tell her.
pete: Dont tell anyone.......i am a pirate and pirates arent alowed at the parts.......the captain needs a crew....and he sent me out to help find a crew so are you to be on duh crew or not???
Sarah: Why are you asking me to be onm the crew?
Pete: Because............
Suddenly someone riding on a horse with a cloth comes running out of the woods saying:
Person: Get that dimond!!!!!
Pete: Get on duh ship....NOW!!!!
Sarah then runs onto the ship.
Sarah: Get on! Before its too late!!!!!!!!
But it was too late the Black Pearl was released and Pete was left behind.
Sarah: NO!!!!!!!!!!!
And Sarah began to cry with sadness she didnt want that man to die and she relized that she had to stay on board and she had no friends on board so she didnt know anybody and didnt have anybody to talk to. Sarah then came apon a man and asked him:
Sarah: Excuse me sir.....
Mr. Gibbs: Aye mate? And call me Gibbs. Uhh I havent seen you before are ye a new mate on the Black Pearl???
Sarah: Yes sir..i mean Gibbs. MY name is Sarah.
Mr. Gibbs: Aye well welcome aboard Sarah and you can be my helper on the black pearl. Oh I'm the captains 1st mate by the way.
sarah: Aye so I guess I will help you then Im 13 by the way.
Mr.Gibbs: Aye well Ill show ye around and tell you what to do.
And so Sarah and Mr.Gibbs worked together for phew days. It was the 3rd day when Sarah helped Mr.Gibbs and on that day everything went wrong.
Sarah: Oh dear! Now i have to clean that up erg! Oh no!!!
Sarah then axidenly spilt some oil on the captain.
Sarah: Oh I'm sorry sir...i wasent paying attention...please forgive me!
Jack Sparrow: And may I ask who are you?
Mr. Gibbs: Ahh that'd be my helper Jack...please forgive her she didnt mean to....
jack sparrow:Mr. Gibbs i forgive her now stand up mate.
Sarah stands up to the captain and when jack saw her face he knew who she was and he gave her a look and said to himself in a whisper:
Jack sparrow: No.....you cant be.......
Mr. Gibbs: What? Is there something wrong captain? captain???
jack then steped back and turned around and went back to his cabin.
It was later that evening and Jack sent Gibbs to bringSarah to his quarters.
Mr. Gibbs: the captain will be seeing you now sarah.
sarah: Aye I will come.
Sarah went into the captain's head quarters and knocked.
Jack sparrow: come in Sarah.
sarah then went in.
Sarah: How do you know my name I didnt tell you it.
And jack came to sarrah and hugged her and started to cry.
Jack Sparrow: I thought I would never see you again after I sent you to the king. And your here...with me...in my cabin...oh you look soo much like your mother...and your all i have now....my daughter.
Sarah: F..father?
Jack sparrow: yes.
Sarah and jack began to cry together. they now have each other and now they can unite together back as a family.
Sarah: I thoughtr I would never meet you and now i have. Oh father I have so much to tell you about my life when I was in england.
Jack sparrow: Im sure you do.
Sarah then told her father about everything and wouldent stop talking until she was finished. And when she was finished jack saw someting on her that caught his eye.
Jack sparrow: That...that locket...it used to be your mothers I gave it to her...for her birthday.
Sarah: Oh father..I met mother..I saw her..she was a ghost..she came to me.
Jack then hugged Sarah and told her:
Jack sparrow: I will never let anything happen to you...i promice.

I really liked the last parts of it i hope yall liked it.

LoveJackSparrow

Hey Besides me and Jaeh....dose someone else have a sparrabeth story they would like to share?????????? cause while me and Jaeh write a little bit more of our storys....everyone is waiting on ether her or me and well it would be nice if we could read somebody elses work.

willofthewisp

The story is interesting. Is that the end then? It has a lot of heart. Do you have any more?

LoveJackSparrow

No there is WAY more then that.......remeber i said jack and elizabeth will have there moments together even though Will the 3rd and sarah fall in love??? And even though will the 3rd is elizabeths son i promice theres going to be more.

willofthewisp

Okay, good. I was confused. blink

LoveJackSparrow

O ok well i was saying there should be more Sparrabeth stories then just me and Jaeh's you know........is there any other brillant writers out there?

LoveJackSparrow

Heres a bit more of my story!! the setting is with Elizabeth and her son Will the 3rd i wiill use will3 for will the 3rd.

Will3: Mother can i go on the FD with father...please...i really want to be with him.
Elizabeth: I know son...but your father can only come every 10 years and your going to have to wait 7 more..im sorry son.
Will3: Why dosent father come? Dose he not love us???? I dont understand! Dose he not love me nor you?
And Will3 started to cry.
Elizabeth: Oh Son...your father loves us terribly..and he wouldent want anything to happen to us..i promice and next when your father comes you or you and me will be with your father and we will be a family again..i promice son! I promice!
Will3: yes mother..i guess.
And will3 goes to his room and dosent eat dinner.
Will3: I still dont understand.....mother didnt explain. Thats it...I have had it with my father....I'm leaving tommorow to exlpore and to find a ship and I'm going to find my father!
And Will3 packed his bags and decided that he wanted to leave now not tommorow.
Will3: Oh wheres a ship i can take?
And he looks onto the horizon and sees a ship with Black ripped sails and to him he liked it it was just the one he was hoping for and so he made a raft and set out for open sea to steal the ship.
Will3: Oh so much bloody water! Oh well no matter I willg et that ship no matter how I mean its just right there hmmm yes me kill all the crew thats on that ship and claim it as my own! Hahahaha!

Setting: On the Black Pearl
Sarah: Oh mr.gibbs....look out onto the horizon...its so beautiful! Dont you think?
And sarah then spreads her arms out as the rushing sea wind brushes her hair.
Mr. Gibbs: Oh aye.....it is very beautiful....yes indeed it is very beautiful.
Sarah: Hmmm...
And she closes her eyes and dreams about her mother and she dosent notice that she touched her locket and the song came on and then she sang with it. She beleived that she was right by her side with her mother and that her father was there too. Her voice was carried by the wind and her voice was very beautiful....she sang as if she was the god of song and she didnt know this but she was the god of song. As her voice carried with the wind.....Will3 heard her...he was almost to the ship now.
Will3: What is that beautiful noise? That beautiful song..that beautiful sweet voice?
And her voice lead him off his subject of why he was out there.
Sarah then stopped because the locket stopped and she looked out into the horizon.....and saw a boy in a boat listening and then his eyes met hers and hers met his...then she smiled and he smiled back and she then she relized that Mr. Gibbs yelled out:
Mr Gibbs: Man over board! Captain what do we do? Hes out on a boat near the ship?
Then Sarah barged in.
Sarah: Well we welcome him aboard...of course...right father?
Mr. Gibbs: father?? Wait whats this all about....captain?
jack psarrow: shes my daughter....and i love her with all my heart and yes we will bring the boy over board!
Mr.Gibbs: Captain??? What?? But captain its not that all easy! And its not like you.....
Jack sparrow: We bring the the boy aboard..now mr. gibbs!
Mr.Gibbs: yes captain...Bring the boy aboard!!!!
And the crew brought the boy aboard. sarah then rushes over to the boy.
Sarah: What be ye name? I'm sarah.
Will3 then began to blush but he told her his name.
Will3: Im Will nice to meet you miss Sarah.
Jack Sparrow said in a whisper: Will....that name.....it sounds so familyer. Oy boy..you look some what familyer too..have i threatned you before??
Sarah: father???!!! I'm soo sorry Will he didnt mean it.
Will3: Its ok...Sarah.
And he smiles at her and Sarah begins to blush. Jack then began to notice this and he says:
Jack Sparrow: Uhh There will be no knowing here what so ever and now sarah must leave uhh you can stay out here Will..but Sarah must eat lunch now.....good bye will.
Will3: Umm alright uhh....
Sarah: Jack sparrow you can call him Jack though.
Jack Sparrow: that captain jack sparrow to you will. now we must leave you from here...good day.
Will3 good day then Captain jack sparrow.
Sarah: Good day Will.
And Sarah smiles back at him and turns away.
Will3: Good day....Sarah.

I hope yall like it..cause i love it! well so far!

Jaeh_JediPirate

Originally posted by Jaeh_JediPirate
Liz backed away a bit. Jack looked at her curiously. He stepped closer. "What are you afraid of?" Liz backed away a bit again, and bumped into the rail. She was cornered. "What are you afraid of... Elizabeth?" Jack whispered into her ear.

"I don't want to choose." Liz said, closing her eyes.

"You have to, sooner or later." Jack whispered back. He turned around, and walked back into the cabin.

Liz stayed there frozen.

Will watched everything. His arms turned into jelly. Wha-what were they talking about? He asked himself. He couldn't hear it, and it frustrated him. He wanted to ask Liz what they were talking about so badly, but he knew it was between her and Jack only. Will just climbed back down.

Liz stood where Jack left her. Choose? She asked herself.

to be continued?... lol.

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thanks for reading btw guys.. big grin

Liz stared out the sea. "I can't choose! I'm not ready!" She told herself. She went back to those days... when everything was carefree... nothing to worry about...

Only Norrington.. then Will...
And Jack. Her kiss with Jack.

That jolted her awake from her daydreams.

Jack.

She wants Jack.

to be continued.. big grin

LoveJackSparrow

OH COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! ONCORE ONCORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jaeh_JediPirate

I'm currently busy right now.. big grin

so I'll prolly continue it later or tomorrow. sorry! big grin

AudioHeart

Originally posted by Jaeh_JediPirate
Liz stared out the sea. "I can't choose! I'm not ready!" She told herself. She went back to those days... when everything was carefree... nothing to worry about...

Only Norrington.. then Will...
And Jack. Her kiss with Jack.

That jolted her awake from her daydreams.

Jack.

She wants Jack.

to be continued.. big grin

From this day onwards...I HATE CLIFFHANGERS

LOL HOW can you do this to us!!! more more MOREEEE

lol the SUSPENSE is KILLING me!!! laughing out loud

w0w, everyone is soo GOOD at this!!! you guys ROCK!!! eek!

LoveJackSparrow

ill try to write some more tomorrow and Jaeh...WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! And now i have to go so night everyone!

Jaeh_JediPirate

yeah, i would. smile

g'night! let the Jacks bite.. wink

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Originally posted by Jaeh_JediPirate
yeah, i would. smile

g'night! let the Jacks bite.. wink

LET them bite alright!

LoveJackSparrow

Alright im back!!!!!! anymore great stories on anyones hands???????????

LoveJackSparrow

Alright heres somemore of my story incase if yall havent gotten to bored reading it:

That night Will3 couldent sleep. He tried to dream about his day...but he couldent. All that was in his mind was Sarah....about her smile....about her voice.....about her singing voice..and mostly about her. He decided to get up and walk around..he thought maybe he could get some thing to drink. As he left his room he saw someone by the rail..he decided to check it out. But then he saw..it was Sarah. She couldnet sleep nither because she couldent dream about anything and her mind was stuck on Will3....it was all about him...she couldnet figure out why she was thinking of him....so she just got up and went to the railing.
Will3: What are you doing up this late?
Sarah: Oh...your here...well I couldent sleep but the question is..what are you doing up so late?
Will3: Oh well I couldent sleep either.
And he went over by her side and talked to her for a while now. they talked abot there childhood and they got to know each other better.
will3: So you lived in a royal palace.
Sarah: Yep.
And then something caught Will3's eye....it was the locket around Sarah's neck. He stared at it for a while and Sarah then knew what he was looking at.
Sarah: Oh this...do you want to know about this?
Will3: Oh im sorry.....its rude to stare im sorry, Sarah. Please do tell me about your locket.
sarah: Its ok Will and this locket was my mothers my father gave it to her for her birthday. She died when I was just born and she gave it to my father to give to me.
And then she opened the locket and the beautiful song played. sarah then began to listen and her eyes closed and she began to sing. Will3 closed his eyes to and he listened to her. His heart began to go fast and then he relized that hes happy when hes with her..and that he always wants to be with her and at that moment he knew that he was in love. And when the song was over she looked at Will3 and smiled at him. He smiled back at her. They watched the sunrise together and they knew that they would be good friend...forever.

setting: Elizabeth is alone by herself

Elizabeth: Oh my gosh where is my son? Oh no!
And she began to cry.
I have to find him...but how and where would he be?
And she thought for a moment and then she relized what he had done.
Elizabeth: Oh dear..I must contact all the ships at once!
And she contacted everyship near by and she called The Black Pearl to pick her up.

Setting: On the Black Pearl, during the day after contact from Elizabeth.
Sarah: Oh will did that really happen to you! Oh you must have been so brave!
Will3: Well it was ntohing really...you see what happned was....
Then suddenly he got intreupted by the voice of jack sparrow.
Sarah: Wait listen....my father is talking about something. shh!
Jack: Yes we can pick you up elizabeth...yes of course...uh hm......but elizabeth why do............alright..I know your the king of all pirates but.....ALRIGHT!!! Gawd why did she have to act this way. and I cant beleive i....oh stop it ol' jack.
Will3: hmm thats weird..dose your father always talk to himself?
Sarah: Umm no i dont think soo but no matter....it wasent something important about us or me or you.
Will3: yea well lets go!
Sarah: yea lets go its almost night again..dang time flys!

I hope you like it.

LoveJackSparrow

Oh yea i forgot they didnt have phones back then so sorry i made a mess up.

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Can anyone imagine if all this happened in our time??? How cool would it be If you had Jack walking around in jeans and stuff lol! laughing out loud

willofthewisp

Lol. We need to make swords the standard weapon of choice again, though. Guns are efficient, but we can't separate our trio from their swords. Keep writing.

LoveJackSparrow

you know now i have the song "If i could only imagaine" stuck in my head!!!!!!!!! And i see pictures of jack sparrow alone.

LoveJackSparrow

Heres my webpage on freewebs:
http://www.freewebs.com/captainjacksparrow101/
Ihope you like it! Its not as good cause i started like a month ago..and i need to find a POTC background so if someone could help me with that i would really be thankful!

LoveJackSparrow

O yea i forgot to add this please sign my guest book while your at it..........im working on my story right now i will post it later when im finshed with it.

PotCGirl

Hi im new here.....and im a sparrabether and im so glad that i joined! But if someone could help me a bit...it would be great! O and i have to thank LoveJackSparrow for sending me an invattion! Thanks LJS!

PirateDiva

Welcome aboard Love!!! ^^ If u need help with anything just let us Know...we r all more than Happy to help!! big grin

LoveJackSparrow

ok heres some more of my story and your welcome PotCGirl! Oh and guess what everyone i got the PotC: AWE CD!! You know the track? Its awesome my favorite is Up is Down whitch is #5! Ok heres my story.

It was night again....and Will3 and Sarah now always went out together at night...when everyone was sleeping. To them it was like friendship hour...or for them to acttally get together..with no one seeing them. Sarah then began to talk to Will3 and they began to have a confersation as always....
Sarah: So will..you see the moon? Isent it beautiful? Its like so dark but the moon makes it soo bright?
Will3:yes it is so beautiful....just like you..your hair. Just like your hair. Heheh.
Sarah: Oh Will... your so funny.
will3:Ah yes I guess.
And they just stared out into the clear night sky. Sarah just smiled at Will3 and didnt say anything..and for once she felt something between them..that she never felt before....she felt as if what she said about the moon and the dark sky was about them as if she was the dark sky and Will3 as the moon the lighted things up for her. And then she began to relize that she was in love. And then she looked into the future and thought about the name Sarah.....wait she didnt know his last name! then she asked him.
Sarah: Will......
Will3: Yes?
Sarah: Will..what is your last name?
Will3: Oh...its Turner.....why did you want to know?
Sarah: Oh because I mean we are friends and I mean I dont even know your last name.
Will3: Right......yea its Turner.
Sarah: Hmm..its a very intresting name.
Will3: You think so?
Sarah: Yep.
While Will3 and Sarah have been talking Jack Sparrow heard voices outside you know since he is captain and all that he always stays up. HE wonders whos voices they were and decides to investicate. He then sees Sarah and Will3 together talking and Sarah smiling at Will3....
Jack Sparrow: What are they doing talking? Sarah should be in bed.
Sarah: Will...I think we should get some sleep...my father dosent know about this and hes awake right now so he come out her and find us...together...alone...talking.
And she gets closer to him.
Will3: I.....guess....your right...we should get to bed before..anything happens.....
And he gets closer to her. Jack then notices this and then begins to get kind of nervous. Sarah then began to close her eyes....but then stopped. She knew then what she was doing.
Sarah: Ah....I think I should go....I must be tired......good night Will.
Will3: Good night...Sarah.

Setting: Day light on the Black Pearl with Elizabeth on board.

Sarah woke up that morning to find her father talking to a woman.
Sarah: Father..who is this?
Jack Sparrow: Its a friend of mine...her name is Elizabeth.
Elizabeth: And who is that I might ask Jack?
Jack Sparrow: Its.....
And he turns to look at her and Sarah gives him a strange look.
Jack Sparrow: Its my daughter...her name is Sarah.
Elizabeth: Oh....WHAT????!!! You have a daughter!? And why didnt you tell me this Jack???? You have a wife!? Well let me see her! Let me meet your wife!
Jack: Uh....my wife...she...perished when Sarah was born.
Elizabeth: What? Oh you poor thing.
Sarah: Umm father..I'm going to go to Will now.
Jack: Oh alright..and dont think of anything..that might not impress me.
Sarah: What? What do you mean father?
Jack: You understand, Sarah. Now go.
Elizabeth: Did she say Will?
Jack: Yes she did.
Elizabeth: OMG! Thats my son!!!!!
Sarah then stopped after she heard this.
Sarah: What?
Elizabeth: Hes my son I must see him!
Sarah then turned and ran....she ran as fast as she could so she could get to Will3 first.
Sarah: Will!!!!!!!
Will3: Sarah?? What is it?? It something wrong with your father? He must be drunk if there is.
Sarah: uh no Will3! And thats no way for you to speak about my father like that! That was rude!
Will3: Well Sarah its true!
Sarah: Will!!!! Omg! How could you speak to me like that...espacialy about my father! He is a good man! I know he is! And now you made me mad at you! Forget it! Im not going to tell you anything now!
Will3: Sarah! Please no! Come back! Sarah! Im sorry!!
But Sarah just kept walking and she began to cry. She never thought will could be this way. And after he saw she wouldent listen to him he ran after her.
Will3: Sarah! Please! Turn around!
Sarah: Will you just leave me alone!!!!??
Will3: No..not until you except my apologie!
Sarah: No!
Elizabeth: Will!
Will3: Omg! Its my mother! Hide me Please Sarah!
Sarah just gave him a look and just shook her head no.
Elizabeth: Oh will!
And she hugged him very hardly. And Sarah began to laugh.
Will3: What are you laughing at? Pirate!
And Sarah stopped laughing.
Sarah: Excuse me? Did you just call me pirate?
Will3: Yea i sure did..Pirate!
Sarah: Well for your information..I am a pirate!!!! And at least your not one!
Will3: Who says I'm not?
And Sarah looked at him with a glare in her eye..she didnt see any twinkles in his eyes..she saw fire in his eyes.
Elizabeth: Ok..thats enough! Sorry Sarah..he dosent act like that.
Jack: And of course..I knew this one was yours. A Turner.
Elizabeth: Well thanks Jack! Now we will be leaving.
jack: Alright..thats ok with me!
Sarah then lightened up her face when she heard these word.."we will be leaving". It echoed in her ears. She then turned back and Will and saw sadness and she wanted to forgive him now.
Sarah: Will! Wait!
And Will turned around.
Sarah ran and said:
Sarah: Will im sorry i was acting rude...i didnt mean it..but can you stay? Please?
And when Jack heard this he turned around and stared at his daughter.
Elizabeth then looked at Jack and said:
Elizabeth: Come here Jack. We need to talk..now.
Will: Sarah..I'm sorry i called you pirate..i knew you hated being called that. And i'm sorry that i said your father was drunk and all that.
Sarah: its ok.
Jack: What??!! You little...
Elizabeth: Jack...
Jack: What?
Elizabeth: Leave them alone. Now lets talk..we have unfished business to talk about.
Jack: We do?
Elizabeth: yes we do.
And Jack gave her a glare and Elizabeth just lipped the words out "The kids...we need to talk about them"
Jack: Oh!! That talk! Of course Mrs Turner.
Will and Sarah just looked at each other and shruged. Then they left and talked some more and of course some more.
Will3: Why did we start to fight? It was stupid.
Sarah: It was...but were both sorry and we nbboth aplogized to each other so now were happy...i think.
Will3: Hmm..beats me.
Elizabeth: Come on Jack.
Jack: Of course.
And they go inside the cabin.
Elizabeth: Alright why did you daughter want us to stay?
Jack: I dont know? Why are you asking me?
Elizabeth: cause your the father,
Jack: I know but ithink they are begining to......like each other.
Elizabeth: Oh really.
Jack: yes
Elizabeth: Well I wont have that Jack. I dont want a sparrow in the famliy nor do i want them to become more together. I just wont have it.
Jack: Why..cause you still feelings for me? And you want me to still be open..you dont want us to be realted..is that why..Elizabeth?
Elizabeth: No! Jack I'm married why would I....
Jack cause hes gone every 10 years..and you are begining to fall aprat from him. Is that why?
Elizabeth: No!
Jack: I want my daughter to have something I didnt have..and thats love and care and everything.....I want her to be happy.....unlike you..your not happy.....I was happy when i got married...but my wife was never home...I was never actally happy...And I want her to be....So just let them be.
Elizabeth: No! I wont have it!
Jack: Yes you will.
Elizabeth: Jack youve forced me to do something I dont really want to do.
And she pulls out her sword.
Jack: So thats how your going to play.
And he pulls put his sword.
Jack: Elizabeth..I would be very careful..for what you want...you dont have Will right now to save you.
Elizabeth: I'm pirate king and I dont Will..anymore.
And they begin to fight.

How do you like it? I think its great.

Sifzensinril

wonderful

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AWEsome story!!! =] wink

- - - - - > Welcome to KMC potCGirl!!! GO SPARRABETHERS lmao

Whatever Happened to Jaeh's story?

Jaeh_JediPirate

Liz ran towards Jack's cabin. "Jack!" She pounded at the door. "Jack!"

Will heard her scream despite the crew's snores. He climbed up to the deck again, and stopped cold when he saw Liz knocking on Jack's cabin and shouting his name. He stopped to watch.

"Jack!"

Jack threw the door open. "WHAT?!" He screamed. He thought it was an ordinary crewmember. He had just dozed off. "Oh. It's you love."

"I know."

"What do you know?" Jack asked her, taken aback. Apparently he kinda forgot the little 'talk' they had.

"I know what i want."

Jack stepped out of the cabin. "Who do you want?"

Liz didn't reply. Instead she jumped forward and kissed Jack passionately, pulling him in.

Will stared, confused. Then it hit him. She... Elizabeth... the only girl he loved... chose Sparrow. Elizabeth chose Jack. Will had tears in her eyes, and even attempted to climb out there and pull her away, but his feet stood frozen.

"It's time to let go of her." A voice in his head said. "If you really love her...."

"I know." Will answered himself silently. "I'm letting her go." A tear dropped down his cheek. "Goodbye Elizabeth." He whispered to the wind. "You can go and choose your own path. I would not hold you back anymore."

"Goodbye."

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THE END.

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yeah, it's just a short story.

so sorry guys for taking so long! ever heard of school? stick out tongue

I was kinda busy.

Maybe I'd make another one... wink

whadaya know right... wink

any requests?

LoveJackSparrow

Hmm.........let me think...hmmm.......how about.........a jack and Elizabeth fight or something....that always is cool to read or maybe......a story about AWE and then ass on to taht like what imn doing but you can like make it like with saying that the child of Elizabths is slos jacks not Wills or something like that!

joanjoan

I have an idea for 4 part, but I can't find time to write it sad

I love your stories, they are great. wink

Please keep writing them smile

LoveJackSparrow

Thanks and maybe when you have time you can wright your story and then post it! cuase now..im all alone writing a story and now everyone will be waiting for me to finish..so it would be great if someone else also has a story!

LoveJackSparrow

and no Willo im not done with my story!!! Lol just letting you know that im still far beyond finishing!

Jaeh_JediPirate

okay... here's a scene from Star Wars... I kinda changed it so that it would be a Pirates scene.... I figured you guys might wanna read it(its a hot scene, sparrabeth style.. love

), so i fished it out of the what POTC characters would never say thread.. wink

Originally posted by Jaeh_JediPirate

taken from Star Wars guys, well, some of it(copy pasted some of these from scripts too.. tweaked it a lil bit... pasted a prt of this to this and so on and so forth)...... check it out..

Jack: My tremendous intuitive sense of the female creature informs me that you are... troubled.

Liz: I just thought I’d be married by now. I'm so ready to be married.

Jack: You know... Lizzie, I am Captain of a ship and being captain of a ship I could, in fact, perform a marriage right here. Right on this deck. Right… now.

Liz: No, thank you.

Jack: Why not? We are very much alike you and I. I and you... us.

LEIA Liz: Oh, you make it so difficult sometimes.

HAN Jack: I do, I really do. You could be a little nicer, though. Come on, admit it. Sometimes you think I'm all
right.

LEIA Liz: Occasionally (a little smile, haltingly) maybe...when you aren't
acting like a scoundrel pirate *like that's gonna happen*.

HAN Jack: (laughs) scoundrel pirate? scoundrel pirate? but I am one love...

Jack holds Liz's shoulders affectionately..

LEIA Liz: Stop that.

HAN Jack: Stop what?

LEIA Liz: Stop that! Let go.

HAN Jack: Sshh!

LEIA Liz: Let go, please.

HAN Jack: Don't get excited.

Liz becomes irritated.

LEIA Liz: Captain, being held by you isn't quite enough to get me excited.

HAN Jack: Sorry, sweetheart love. We haven't got time for anything else. (let's go of Liz's shoulders) What are you afraid of?

LEIA Liz: (looking right into his eyes) Afraid?

HAN Jack looks at her with a piercing look. He's never looked
more handsome, more dashing, more confident. He reaches out
slowly and takes LEIA Liz's hand again from where it is resting
on the deck rail(or something). He draws it toward him.

HAN Jack: You're trembling.

LEIA Liz: I'm not trembling.

Then with an irresistible combination of physical strength
and emotional power, the space pirate begins to draw LEIA Liz
toward him...very slowly.

LEIA Liz: You like me because I'm a scoundrel pirate. There aren't enough
scoundrel pirates in your life.

LEIA Liz is now very close to HAN Jack and as she speaks, her voice
becomes an excited whisper, a tone completely in opposition to
her words.

LEIA Liz: I happen to like nice men.

HAN Jack: I'm a nice man.

LEIA Liz: No, you're not. You're...

He kisses her now, with slow, hot lips. He takes his time,
as though he had forever, bending her body backward. She has
never been kissed like this before, and it almost makes her
faint. When he stops, she regains her breath and tries to work
up some indignation, but finds it hard to talk.

*sigh*

LoveJackSparrow

I like it....kind of weird but i like it.

LoveJackSparrow

Yay yall are going to love this chapter.

While Jack and Elizabeth are fighting, Will and sarah were talking. They didn’t notice that there was thrashing and crashing going on in the cabin because they were to busy talking to themselves.
Will3: You know Sarah, hmm, we are very much you know I and you…..us.
Sarah: What?
Will3: Umm…we really are. Just you and me…us…we really are alike..in ways.
Sarah: Excuse me? Umm except I am respectful and I have honor and im not rude as much…..and I’m a pirate. What makes you think we are much alike?
Will3: Well…..theres…..ahh…..
Sarah: Hmmm…..
Will3: Ahh….
Sarah: Because we are very much alike…….and really once you find out what we have in common…I know you will show it. And why did you come on this ship and why were you out there in the 1st place?
Will3: Umm that is non of your buseness.
Sarah: Oh is it?
Will3: Why do you trust me? What do you know that I don’t Sarah? Im curious..and all….you know curiosty…it bugs me.
Sarah: I trust you because….that’s for me to know and for you to find out.
Will3: What? That’s not fair!
Sarah: Yea it is unless you can find away to get me to tell you I’m going to let you guess.
Will3: Well I know something that you don’t know…and it’s a secret. And do you want to know what it is?
Sarah; Oh do tell..oh do tell.
Will3: no. not untill you can get me to tell you you will have to keep on guessing.
Sarah: curiousty…..it always is. Now im curious. Im curious about what you have to say…and what you want to know….and what you want.
And she gets closer. Will looks at her and then turns around to look at her fully. He starts to get closer himself.
Will3: Keep….talking.
Sarah: Oh ill keep going all right…but my question to you is...will you do something that will compromise my honor and that will destroy my fathers trust?
And their lips almost touched but Will looked up and saw there parents fighting with swords and took a step back. Sarah smiled at Will.
Sarah: Im proud of…Will.
But then there was a rumble underneth the ship. And Sarah fell back and almost fell over board. Then there was another rumble underneth the ship again..and this time Sarah went over board but she held on to the rail…dingly over board.
Sarah: Will!
Will3: Sarah! Hold on! Grab my hand!
Sarah: I don’t think I can!
Will3: Reach for it Sarah! Reach!
And Sarah reached and grabbed his hand…Will then smiled at her and she smiled back.
Will3: Your heavy.
Sarah: Thanks.
Will3: Sarah I think I should tell you this if we die…
Sarah: what will?
Will3: That I….never mind sarah can you trust me?
Sarah thought for a moment she didn’t know if she could trust him…but then right as she stared into his gentle eyes, she already knew her answer for she loved him as much as she loved her father and she shook her head yes.
Sarah: Yes I do…
Will3: good cause I am going to have to hol dyou with on hand. Now let go of one of my hands and grab my other one.
Sarah did as he told her to do and he pulled her up with he one hand as he used his other hand to get a grip on a cannon. And sarah fell aboard. And as she fell Will caught her from her fall to the ground. And at that moment they both leaned in and as they were about to kiss Elizabeth saw it from the cabin and looks back at Jack.
Elizabeth: We will have to end it here.
And she runs out of the cabin. Jack tried to pull her back, but didn’t suceed.
Elizabeth: Will!
And Sarah stopped herself from going any further and opened her eyes and turned her head to look at his mother and she immediately dropped her hands from his.
Will3: mother? What happened...you dress its torn!? And your hair its wacky! What did Jack do to you!?
Elizabeth: He did nothing now we are leaving for sure now…come on!
Will3: Sarah!
Sarah: Will!
Jack: Let him go!
Elizabeth: No!
And Jack took out his sword again.
Sarah: Father! You bleeding! No! Don’t fight!
And Elizabeth took out her gun and pointed it towards Sarah.
Elizabeth: You get anyfurther and I’ll shoot!
Jack backed away and dropped his weapon.
Elizabeth: Oh Jack your so stupid.
Jack: No!!!!!!!!!!!
And she shoots.
Will3 pushed Sarah but then he got shot and Will3 came thrashing to the floor…bleeding.
Elizabeth: No! Will!
And Sarah came down to Will3 and started to cry.
Will3: Sarah….
Sarah: Yes…
Will3: I want you to know that….
And suddenly a ship came from downunder except it wasent the FD. It was the Jolly Roger witch its captain was Jolly Roger. And JR aboards the BP.
JR: The diamond give it….now!
Sarah: No!
JR: Give it!
Jack: The diamond…sarah use the diamond! It can cure a man or bring him back to life! Use it! Quick!
And Sarah took of her locket and put it over Will3. And he then was being raised into the air, and he was cured with a green light and he was taken back down to the ship.
Sarah; Will!
Will3: sarah! You cured me!
JR: Give it! Now!
Jack: No Sarah! Don’t give to him!
JR: If I cant have it…then I will take who has it on to my ship!
And he grabs Sarah’s arm, and he disappears while Sarah screamed and struggled to get free.
Will3: No!!!!!!!!! Sarah!!!!!
But she was gone…vanished into thin air withought a trace and the ship was disapearing too. And after that Will3 began to cry…he loved her and he wanted to tell her that but now he couldent.
Will3: We have to find her!
Jack: But we cant! That’s just that!
Elizabeth: Oh Boo hoo! Who cares about your daughter! Of course….my famly dosent!
Will3: You thought wrong mother…I care for her!
Elizabeth: What!?
Will3: You heard me mother… I care for her! And I know jack and the crew cares for her!
Jack: Yes I do care for her..i love her. And now shes gone…forever.
But then suddenly there was a light that flashed above the ship. There was a girl..cloating above everyone and she looked at jack and gave him a smile. And he noticed that smile and he noticed her face. HE smiled back at her and began to cry himself. And the girl came down to him.
Christine: Jack…its me Christine..do you remember me?
Jack: yes..I would never forget your face…love.
And then after Elizabeth heard him call chirstine her old name she got mad.
Elizabeth: Alright who is this?
Jack: This is my wife…Christine.
Elizabeth: your WIFE!? Uh!
And she stomps of and then she goes inside jacks cabin and starts to cry herself for the 1st time in a long time.
Christine: Jack…You havent lost our daughter forever…folow my directions and I will show you the way. Do you remember your ompass and do you remember the foutain of youth?
Jack: Yes I do.
Christine: Go get the foutain of youth…and then try to find the words Jolly Roger Cove….then once you find it..you will know what you want you want to find your daughter and you want to find Jolly Roger Cove. Do you understand?
Jack: yes I understand…love.
And Jack leans over to Christine and kisses her gently and Elizabeth saw him and she really began to cry… she talked in her head saying “He dosent love me anymore…he loves her!”.
And after the kiss Christine left without a trace and jack looked up into the air and let the ocean breeze air blow through his hair and his face, and he was healed.

Hold on theres more but i have to post it on another one.

LoveJackSparrow

Heres the other part of it.

After that he told all of his crew to do us they were told and he left and went into his cabin. He saw Elizabeth on the his bed with her eyes watery.
Jack: Whats wrong Mrs. Turner?
Elizbaeth: Will you stop calling me that? Its Elizabeth!
Jak: Whats gotton into you? Oh wait is it the fact that you want to kill me and make sure my daughter dosent end up with your son and that you want to fight me? Well then ok!
And he pulls out his sword.
Elizabeth: Stop Jack! I don’t want to fight you anymore.
And Jack sits on his bed buy Elizabeth.
Jack: What? Why don’t you lo…nvm.
Elizabeth: I just don’t…I was being a fool.
Jack: I don’t think you were a fool…well maybe a little bit but not much.
Elizabeth: Jack….
And she gets up close to him and puts her head on his shoulder.
Jack: Yes luv?
Elizabeth: Do you…love me?
And when she said that Jack stood up and looked at her with a look that she will never forget.
Jack: Elizabeth…why do you want to know and no I don’t love you I love my daughter and my wife.
Elizabeth: Jack…when are you going to let your wife go? Shes passed away. And you can like only see her like once in a lifetime.
Jack: I know…I know.
And they just stood there for a while. And then finally Elizabeth said something.
Elizabeth: jack… I didn’t want out kids to be together because…I…I…
And then jack got closer to her with a glare in his eyes.
Jack: You what?
Elizabeth: I….I…Jack….
And Jack got closer to her…he is inches away from her lips.
Jack: What Elizabeth? What do you need to say?
Elizabeth: That I….
But then Jack and Elizabeth kissed from right there. She knew that they were enemy-like, but she still loved jack…all she wanted right now was him nothing more. But then Will3 came running inside the cabin.
Will3: Mother….*gasp*
And the kiss ended right there.
Elizabeth: Its not what it looks like Will.
Will3: Mother what are you doing? Your cheating on father! For him!?
Elizabeth: Im not…I promice…I’m not…I love your father!
Will3: Whatever!
And he runs out of the cabin. Elizabeth looks back at Jack and sees him with a sad face.
Jack: Elizabeth…why did you want to kiss me? Why did you betray me on the BP when you werent married? And why did you kiss me now?
Elizabeth: Jack….I betrayed you because…Jack it was the only way I could save everyone and….Jack….I kissed you so I could distract you.
Jack: But if you wanted to save everybody then why leave me to my death? And your kiss it felt as if it was real. As if….it meant something…as if you were afraid that you would never see me again.
And he looked down to the floor and closed his eyes.
Elizabeth: I…
But she didn’t finish her sentence instead she walked away but then Jack pulled her back and pushed her against the wall of his cabin.
Elizabeth: Jack…what are you doing?
Jack: Elizabeth I want you to know that back then I did love you, but you tore my heart apart into many pieces…all I wanted from you was your love and care but instead, you just gave me hate and you didn’t care for me…you just used me…to get to Will…you broke my heart.
Elizabeth: Oh Jack…
Jack: I have nothing else to say.
And he looks back down to the floor. But Elizabeth took her hand on his cheek she got up really close to him…and she raised his face, and there she kissed him passionately. There kiss was gentle, and sweet. And this time Elizabeth’s kiss for Jack was real.

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Heres some more you in for a treat!

When the kiss was over, Jack looked at Elizabeth with a faint smile.
Elizabeth: Jack…I…love you.
Jack: Elizabeth…We cant…you will always be Will’s wife and our kids will always love each other…I can feel that they love each other…and I wont ruin there life’s by letting them be brother and sister and I wont let you break Will’s heart, as you have done to mine.
And Elizabeth looked down to the floor and her eyes watered but she didn’t cry.
Elizabeth: Your right Jack…I wont ruin my son’s life just so I could be happy. And I don’t want to ruin you daughter’s life either.
And Jack smiled at her weakly and Elizabeth put her hand on his face again and his face leaned in her hand and Elizabeth was about to kiss him again…but he pulled away.
Jack: No…Elizabeth…I’m sorry…but we just cant…anymore.
And he left his cabin. Elizabeth was left there, standing, with her eyes watery and about to cry.

Setting: JR ship
Sarah was put into a cell was kept there for along time. In all the time she had she thought about Will3 and about his face and about the times they had almost kissed…which they never have. Then suddenly someone came down from the upper deck.
Stranger: The captain will see you now.
Sarah: Well you can tell your captain that I wont come.
And she turns away.
Stranger: For some reason he knew that you would say that and he said that if you wouldn’t that he will give me the permission to kiss you and to kill you.
And sarah gave him a glare and started to walk.
Stranger: Fine then, be that way.
JR: Come in Sarah Sparrow.
Sarah: How do you know my name?
JR: I know a lot of things about you, my dear.
Sarah then looked at him puzzled. She didn’t know what he was talking about.
Sarah: What are talking about?
JR: Oh I know your life. Its miserable isn’t it?
Sarah: No…
JR: Oh Sarah…why do you think your father put you in an orphanage?
Sarah: It was for my own good. And your not my father…he has his reasons.
JR: Ah…well what about that boy…Will?
Sarah: Keep him out this.
JR: Oh I would but I’m not going to.
Sarah: What’s he got to do with this?
JR: Oh you don’t know? His father…if you have heard tales about the FD…
Sarah: yes I have from my father of course.
JR: His father is the captain of the FD…
Sarah: What?
JR: Oh he didn’t tell you…the reason why he was aboard you ship was so he could get to his father and so he could be with his father. He was using you…for information. He just wanted to know what you knew.
Sarah: No…that’s not true!
JR: Oh is it? Maybe he thought he couldn’t trust you…that’s way he said that it was non of your business to know why he went on BP when you too were about should I say kiss. He wanted to kiss you so he could get trust from you so you would tell him anything he wanted to know about.
Sarah: No! It can’t be true!
JR: Oh but it is true…you thought wrong about him…you didn’t think he was a pirate.
Sarah: I never thought…
JR: Well now…you know. And now you can get revenge from him.
Sarah: No! I won’t get revenge from him…I don’t want to fight him! No!
JR: Oh but you must…it’s the only way you can get what you want and make sure he dosent break you heart anymore.
Sarah: No! I would never forgive my self!
JR: But you must…
Sarah: NO!
JR: Fine…but dosent your heart had it with him…he broke it…what you going to do about that?
Sarah: But…
JR: But you what, Sarah?
And he touches her hair and swifts it out.
Sarah: But I love him.
JR: Oh you poor thing…but he doesn’t care for you he just wanted to get your trust that’s all, And now you can get rid of his trust and do what you need to do.
Sarah: Yes…I will do what I need to do.
JR: What’s your plan then?
Sarah: My plan…to kill him.

Setting: On the BP
Will3: captain!
Jack: What?
Will3; Are we close to where she is?
Jack: Yea we getting there.
Will3: Good.
And he breathes slowly and happily.
Will3: As long as we are close and she’s ok…I’m ok.
Jack: Why do you care so much about my daughter?
Will3 notices this question and he begins to blush and turn away.
Will3: She’s my friend. That’s why.
Jack: are you sure that’s why?
Will3: Positive.
Jack: You don’t need to lie to me boy…I saw you two talking at night and that almost kiss at night…and the other 2 almost kisses.
Will3 then began to get really red.
Will3: You saw that.
And jack smiles and shakes his head
Jack: Don’t worry your secret is safe with me.
Will3; what secret? Umm I don’t have a secret! What was that Mr.Gibbs? Oh right be right there! Sorry captain but I need to go! Uh bye!
But then as Will3 was about to leave jack grabed his arm and pulled him back.
Jack: Don’t worry. I won’t tell your mother you can trust me.
Will3: I don’t know.
Jack: Look I keep secrets ok and I knew your father too…I kept his one and only secret.
Will3; you knew my father?
Jack: And I knew your grandfather too.
Will3; you knew my family. What was my father’s secret.
Jack: The “I love Elizabeth secret”. And Elizabeth is your mother.
Will3: Oh that…wait why did you kiss her?
Jack: Uh…
Will3: You kissed my mother why?
Jack: She kissed me.
Will3: What? But she would never do that to father!
Jack: How do you know? She’s a pirate!
Will3: Can’t you tell me why?
Jack: Fine all right.
And so Jack told will3 everything. After Will3 heard everyone word he was sad…he never thought his mother would do that to his father.
Will3: If she loves you and if you love her…
Jack: Which I do son…I really do.
Will3: then why didn’t she go with you?
Jack: So she wouldn’t brake your father’s heart…like I have been through with your mother.
Will3: She broke your heart once?
Jack: yea…she kissed me and she tied me up while I wasn’t looking…the kiss was a distraction.
Will3: Oh…
Jack: yea oh. Well its getting late. Get some rest. You will get up really early in the morning tomorrow.
Will3: Oh all right.
And so Will3 went up to bed and Jack went up to his post.

I hope yall liked it!

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:-) I hope you like this chapter...cause I think this is the last chapter I'm doing.

It was night time on the BP and Elizabeth couldent sleep. She was thinking about what Jack said and she knew it really could never be. But she couldent help it now, she was in love with him but she knew that she shouldn’t. It bothered her a lot, she wanted to stop. It was like I love him but I know I shouldnet but I cant help it! So she just sat there trying to get her mind of Jack but it was hard, but she tried. She started to think of Will, but all of her memories were going out, he was always gone, so she could barely remember him. Then suddenly Jack came in.
Jack: Elizabeth…what are you doing in here?
Elizabeth: I…I don’t know Jack. I feel different.
Jack: Oh Elizabeth…
And he comes by and sits next to her and he smooths her hair.
Jack: I know luv…I know what your thinking…you have to stop...you have to fight it.
Elizabeth; I cant Jack! I just cant!
Jack: Try harder.
And she tried and tried and tried, but nothing worked. She was madly in love with him…how could she stop?
Elizabeth: Jack!
And she grabs him and hugs him and starts to cry.
Elizabeth: I just cant Jack! I’m madly in love with you! How can I stop if I’m in love with you? Huh? Jack even though I was married to Will… I thought of you…every single day! How do you except me to stop if I do it almost every day?
And Jack looked at her with his sorrow eyes. He had never looked so handsome to her in her life. He touched her hair and he touched her face and he looked at her, with sadness in his eyes with his sorrow.
Jack: Elizabeth…I cant help it either…I’m in love with you too.
And Elizabeth sat up and looked at him. She never knew he had feelings for her too. She sat up and put her head on his shoulder and snuggled up beside him.
Elizabeth: Oh Jack…
Jack: Elizabeth we have to fight it…if we cant stop…
Elizabeth: I know Jack…I know.
And she held hands with him until they were fast asleep by each other sitting with head on head, and they fell asleep with sorrow and love.

Setting: On the BP in the Morning.
Mr. Gibbs: captain! Where is he? Captain!
And Jack heard Gibbs voice, and woke up with Elizabeth asleep on his shoulder. He looked at her and decided to kiss her head and then he carefully picked her up and layed her on his bed, and left her.
Jack: Yes Mr. Gibbs?
Mr. Gibbs: Captain! Where have you been?
Jack: Umm…no where! I have been here! All along!
Mr. Gibbs: Uh huh…well anyways were going into a forest on in island, take a look here!
And Jack takes a look and he realized where he was…he was at Jolly Roger Cove. And he saw a ship there with black seals just like his own. And he knew that they were here.
Jack: This is it!
And when Will3 heard that he jumped up with joy and ran around the ship and then came up to the captain.
Will3: Oh captain! Can I come with you? Please? I must see Sarah! Please?
Jack: Umm…I don’t think you should come lad…you could get lost or you could get killed.
Will3: Come on jack please?
Jack: I’m sorry son…but I just can’t take that risk. Now you stay with the ship.
And he left him there standing. Will was sad, he really wanted to come.
Will3: I don’t know what to do…I know they will need me. That’s it! I’ll go by my self and follow the group they will never notice!
And he leaves the ship and runs after Jack but he makes sure he can’t be seen or heard. And they walked for a long time but that didn’t stop Will3 from walking or keeping up. And finally, the crew came up apon a castle in the dark woods.
Will3: Woe!
And then Jack turned around and saw Will3 right behind them smiling and waving at the same time.
Will3: Uh Hi! Heheh…
Jack: Your not suppose to be here!
Will3: I couldnet help it…I had to come!
Jack: Well now your going to have to stay with us so I guess you will have to stay with us now.
And Will3 came up with jack in the front.

Setting: In the castle
JR: My sweet, are you ready for your revenge?
Sarah: I am, I am ready JR, and Will will wish that he would have never been born.
JR: Yes I like your thinking.
And he looked down at her black silky dress and then noticed the locket around her neck.
JR: You look beautiful, my sweet.
Sarah: Thank you, JR. And now I’m ready to get going.
JR: Yes my sweet we will get going now.
And they leave the room. And they went down stairs and then they heard a knock at the door then a crash and Jack Sparrow and Will3 came in from outside.
JR: What? How did you get here? And he puts Sarah behind him.
Will3: WE came in here they way we came in here.
And he looks at Sarah, he thought she was beautiful, more beautiful then he had ever seen her.
Will3: Sarah!
But Sarah didn’t respond. She just stared at him with a glare in her eyes and she smiled a wicked smile that he had never seen before on her face.
Will3: Sarah? Sarah? Speak to me! It’s me, Will Turner!
And she came down the stairs still with that smile on her face.
Will3: Sarah? Whats wrong with you? What did you do to her?
JR: She just getting her revenge from you…it wont hurt…much! MUHAHAHAAA!!!!
Will3: What? Sarah, please be your self! Sarah! Listen to me! I’m your friend! I care about you! Cant you see what he has done to you? Sarah! Listen to me!
But she just kept on going straight at him non stop and Will3 kept backing away and he then ran into a wall.
JR: Nothing is going to work! Shes going to kill you and nothings going to change her mind about it! MUHAHAHAAA!!!!
Will3: Sarah! Please!
And Sarah took out her knife, and she struck at Will3 but she missed. Now she was right in front of him. Her face and his face right by each others.
Will3: Sarah…don’t listen to him…he has brain washed you! I’m your friend! I would never try to hurt you! I promice! If I hurt you I would never forgive my self! Please Sarah! Don’t do it!
And Sarah got her knife out of the wall and she struck at him again!
Will3: Sarah! Please! Sarah, do you want the truth from me? Do you want to know why I care for you and why I would never forgive me self if I hurt you?
Sarah: No…you hate me and I don’t want to listen to you talk again!
Will3: No Sarah…I love you…with all my bloody heart! I would kill my self just to make sure your safe! Sarah, you have to believe me!
JR: No Sarah it’s a lie, don’t listen to him…he just wants your trust!
Will3: I want your trust and your love, Sarah. I have your trust and I know that your good and I know that you would not try to hurt me…I know you Sarah…your not like this! Don’t listen to him any more! Listen to me!
And Sarah didn’t know who to trust or who to listen to.
Sarah: I don’t know who to trust or to listen to!
Will3: Listen to me! Sarah! I love you! And if you trust him and if you listen to him…you will break my heart. But no matter what I will always love you.
JR: He lies! Sarah…my sweet…my love…don’t break my heart!
Will3: Would I lie to you? Please Sarah Would I really lie to you?
Sarah: I don’t know!
Will3: Sarah…make up your mind…or Sarah will you make up you mind if I do this?
And he leans over and kisses her gently on her soft lips. She closes her eyes and he closes his. They both could feel and see fireworks spring up. And Sarah put one of her hands on his neck and he put on of his hands on her face. There kiss was long and sweet and while this was happening Jack could feel a tear spring up from his face and he knew that this was it. And Elizabeth knew the same, she saw it too. And Elizabeth and Jack held hands for the very last time. And there kiss ended right there and Sarah and Will3 smiled at each other. But JR was mad…
theres more

LoveJackSparrow

Heres the other part of it.

JR: That’s it! I have had it with pirates! Ill just kill him myself!
And JR rose up into the air and Sarah was in Will3’s arms and he pushed her but she got back up and ran to him and pushed him away but then it happened. She fell down to the ground…JR stabbed her in heart. And Will3 came running and screaming out her name. And he fell to the ground to see if she was allright.
Jack: No!!!!!!! You…you evil man!
JR: I’m not a man…I’m a ghost! Haha!
Will3: Sarah…no Sarah stay with me! No!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!
And while he was screaming Jack got up and took his sword and said to JR:
Jack: You die today…
JR: Oh Jack…cant you see I’m already dead?
Jack: Well then lets fight till I die then cause I will fight till I die! AH!!!!!
And they start to fight.
Elizabeth: JACK!!!!!!!!!!
Sarah whispered: Father…*cough cough* Will…
Will3: Yes…
And his eyes began to get watery.
Sarah whispered: I’m sorry I tried to kill you and…
Will3: Its ok and…what…
She pulls him in close and she puts her lips on his. They kissed for about 5 seconds and then she stopped.
Sarah whispers: I love you and I want you to take this.
And she takes off the locket and gives it to him.
Sarah: Take care of it…
And she took her last breath in his arms…and Will3 began to scream and cry at the same time.
Will3: NO!!!!!!!!!!! Sarah! No!!!!!!!
Jack: I’m still alive aren’t I?
JR: Yes you are Jack. But not for long…
Jack: Huh? Oh…
JR: You fool…did you really think you could kill me Jack?
Jack: Uh…oh…ah…
And jack falls to the ground.
Elizabeth: No!!!!! JACK!!!!!!!!!
Will3: Jack!!!!!!!!!!
And Elizabeth goes towards Jack and touches his face and hair.
Elizabeth: Oh jack…
Jack: Elizabeth…I can barely breathe…
Elizabeth: No!
Jack: Elizabeth come nearer…*cough*
And she got nearer, and Jack leaned up and kissed her and he didn’t want to let go but he knew he must for he knew he was going to pass away in a min. And he stopped.
Jack: Elizabeth…I…love…you…
And he took his last phew breaths in her arms and she watched him die and she hugged him up close.
Elizabeth: Oh Jack!
And she cried. Now the Sparrow family was gone, and nobody to protect them.
JR: Theres nobody to save you now! HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
Elizabeth: How do you know?
JR: Because the Sparrows are finally dead and nothing can bring them back any way are any how! HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
And then Will3 remebered that time where Sarah saved him with the locket.
Will3: You thought wrong…you must have forgotton about the thing you wanted most and that you didn’t get it.
And he holds up the locket.
JR: No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And Will3 holds it apon Jack Sparrow and he began to be healed and then later he was fully healed.
Jack: I’m back! Now Will…use the power of the diamond to kill JR! Now!!!
And Will3: held it up high and the bright sun shined through it.
JR: No!!!!!!!!!
And JR began to die and melt away into a dark nasty puddle. It bubbled and it was gooey. And then if finally disappeared.
Elizabeth: You did it son!
Jack: You sure did! You should be proud of your self!
Will3: But I have to do some unfinished business…1st.
And Jack and Elizabeth looked at each other and then back and Will3 then they knew what he was talking about.
Jack: Oh…all right son.
And Elizabeth smiled at her son and walked off with Jack. Then Will3 looked at Sarah’s lifeless body. And he put the locket over her and she rose up and she was healed.
Will3: Sarah!
Sarah: Will!
And they both hugged each other.
Will3: I thought I would never see you again!
Sarah: Well…I’m alive right?
Will3: Yes your alive…again.
And they both smiled at each other and Sarah held Will3’s face with one of her hands and leaned in a kissed him. He grabbed her waist and held her tight.

The next story i'm doing its going to invlove Will3's father and hes not going to want then to be together and yea oh and Will3's father dies!!!!! YES!!!!! And NOOO! At the same time!

AudioHeart

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
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LoveJackSparrow

Glad you liked it and i'm writing it right now...

AudioHeart

Hey LoveJackSparrow (btw i love your name) you know under your siggy, the text?

WAIT! NOBODY MOVE!!!!! I droped me brain!----Captain Jack Sparrow at AWD on the FD

Do you mean

Captain Jack Sparrow at *AWE* or is AWD something else???

Hambah

I did not write these, but I found them on fanfiction and loved them.

You may have read the first one already, but I love it. It's really short but amazingly cute. This is called "Secret" by misaoshiru:

"'ey, luv?"
Elizabeth sat up from where she lay on the sand, her head spinning. She had drunk more rum than she had planned - Captain Jack Sparrow was sharper than she had anticipated, even given his increasingly drunken state.
Jack grinned at her from across the fire, his face slightly reddened from the alcohol he had consumed. "Can you keep a secret?"
"A secret?" she half-slurred, biting her lip. She would have to be more careful. "What sho - sort of secret?"
Her companion crossed over to her side of the fire more gracefully than she would have thought possible, considering his inebriation and kissed her on the lips, firmly but gently. Elizabeth's face warmed, and she knew it wasn't the rum. "That sort."

The next is just a small piece of a story, and there's a lot behind it and reasons she's angry at him, and if you want to read the whole thing, tt's called "L'esprit de l'escalier," by labyrinths. It's really good, and I loved the ending so much:

The first thing Elizabeth did was to walk straight towards Jack, ramming her index finger against his chest.
“You disgusting lout are not fit to kiss my boots!”
Which was an accurate description since she was wearing some rather large, manly boots.
She turned around, ready to head back to the docks now that little point had been settled.
Quickly, Jack pulled her towards him crushing her into a passionate embrace and an even more passionate kiss, his lips fervently coaxing her own.
When he drew back he was grinning.
“It’s not your boots I’m after.”

Hambah

I have another one. I don't know why I like this one so much. It's called "Moments and Memories" by Freothuwebbe, and each chapter is a different little moment between characters. This is chapter 2, called "Jealousy":

Jack gazed at her as she smiled at the waves. Now that she had married Will, everything between them seemed awkward and strained.
“You know--” he began as she turned around. The intensity of her eyes startled him.
“I know what, Mr. Sparrow?”
Her jaw line was all he could think about. Her hands were twisting the wedding right that he should have given her. He suppressed a growl that grew at the back of his throat.
“You know he’s a eunuch, right?” He said it more seriously than he had meant to.
Elizabeth rolled her eyes and stalked across the deck. His brown eyes dug holes into the nape of her neck.

tee_pirategirl

SIIIIGH! I checked all three of them out on fanfic and I read some other stories from the authors too! They are GOOD! thanks for posting. I added all of them to my favorites.

BTW does anyone have an account on fanfic or some fics there? Mine's teepirategirl!

LoveJackSparrow

Originally posted by AudioHeart
Hey LoveJackSparrow (btw i love your name) you know under your siggy, the text?

WAIT! NOBODY MOVE!!!!! I droped me brain!----Captain Jack Sparrow at AWD on the FD

Do you mean

Captain Jack Sparrow at *AWE* or is AWD something else???
Right....i'll have to change that lol...oops

joanjoan

I wasn't sure if to write this, but I've found the idea for saving the ending and wanted to share. wink

10 years later Will comes back but he's no longer the person he used to be. He smiles to Liz but his minds are far away from her. She tries to hug him but he's not interested, he walks out and goes to the beach. Liz is very anxious. She doesn't know what to do. She thinks that it's because his heart is no longer in his body. She asks Gibbs for advise. He tells her that only Calypso can help her in this matter.
Liz: But how can I find her? Is it possible?
Gibbs: before she was captured into human's body she used to leave on one island...
Liz: Where's the island? Is it possible that she returned there?
Gibbs: I don't know my dear, but we both know someone who may know it.
Liz *opens her eyes widely, she can hardly speak*: ... jack? *His name makes her heart pound fast.*

Jack sits in his boat, noticing maelstrom.
Jack: Not now ... the rum's gone.
The maelstrom comes closer. Jack (holding the bottle to his nose): At least the last smell I feel is the smell of rum.
He smiles. Suddenly the maelstrom changes into the woman getting into Jack's boat.
Jack: It can't be... Calypso?
Calypso (looking like clean Tia Dalma) : Jack... Did you miss me?
Jack: Should I? Calypso (touching his face): You haven't changed at all. So it's true that you've found it. Well done Jack, I've always believed in you.
(She keeps touching him ) Jack smiles and squints his eyes.
Jack: How did I deserve an honour of your visit, Tia Da... Calypso? Do you have a business for me or you just simply couldn't resist the temptation of seeing my face?
Calypso *still smiling*: Both? Jack, you have to do me a favor, you owe me something.
Jack: Do I?
Calypso *she becomes serious*: let me refresh your memory, I was the one who helped you get out of Davy Jones' Locker.
Jack: Oh, yes, I remember now.
Calypso: I want you to take Elizabeth away from Will.
Jack: What? Are you joking? *His face changes* I don't want to have anything to do with her...
Calypso: Poor Jack, unrequited love hurts.
Jack: I don't know what you're talking about my only love is the sea.
Calypso: How about the Black Pearl?
Jack: Oh, I'm about to get her. I've been just chasing after her while you...
Calypso *laughing very loud*: Jack, you always knew how to make me laugh. I can help you get your ship back if you take Liz out of my way ... *she stops laughing* unless you want to see her dead.
Jack: I don't care. I can get my ship back by myself.
Calypso: Do you really not care?
Jack: Lady, It was nice to see you, but I don't have time for this small talk, so please be so nice and leave my boat. I don't want to hear that name "Elizabeth". It sounds so unpleasant. It's too long. Liz is too short, so anyway her name is not the name I would like to mention.
Calypso: I see you do have a feelings for this girl...
*Jack doesn't say anything* Calypso continues: This is good, so good, so you probably be happy learning that you have a son with her.
Jack*looks disgusted*: What?

LoveJackSparrow

I like it!!! More more MORE!!!!!!!!!!! no wait i dont like it...I LOVE IT!!! Absalutly LOVE it....MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! Please? Its really good....

joanjoan

Thank you so much for reading. smile

I'm very happy you like it smile

I'll write more as soon as possible wink

Hambah

I'm going to give you my 23 favorite Sparrabeth stories on Fanfiction. These *** are by the ones that I like most out of all of them.
1. Wondering Why - by Commander
2. Wild - by Brunette
3. Secret - by misaishiru
4. Never Love Me - by Erinya
5. L'esprit de l'escalier - by Labyrinths
6. Pirate Lore - by Commander
***7. Dances With Pirates - by AJsHellCat
***8. Message in a Rum Bottle - by Sleepy Lotus
9. The Triple Threat - by keliz2005
10. Splintered Hearts - by Gea
11. The Pirate's Web - by Sleepy Lotus
12. Swann's Note - by Beautiful x lie
13. End of the Beginning - by hartlike01
***14. Wings - by sypathex
15. Surrender - by Femmevixen03
16. Seabirds - by bravenewcentury
17. Don't Sleep to Dream - by The Rouge Pirate
18. Morning Theft - by bravenewcentury
***19. Dead Men Tell No Tales - by TheDelightfulBrit
20. Prove it - by L.O.T.S.
21. The Seventh Sin - by secretstrangeangel
***22. Leaving and Staying - by The Nobel French Fry
***23. The Swan and the Owl - allhisengines

LoveJackSparrow

hey guys just telling yall this on www.sparrabeth.com at least thats what its callled...the person that has LoveJackSparrow on it isent me my account name is captain_jack_sparrow1101 because who ever took that and I dont know if they have an account on here took it sad

I wanted that name but oh well...

LoveJackSparrow

You know what never mind because my friends just told me that they made an account for me on there and now that account is mine ERG!!!!!!!! what a waste of my time........oh well i guess i will have 2 accounts but il go on lovejacksparrow more then captain_jack_sparrow1101 i guess oh that just makes me mad!

tee_pirategirl

OMG! Hambah I read those. GREAT! Dances with pirates was great!

LJS! it's a good thing you have two accounts!

Does anyone have any stories on fanfiction.net? I have 2 under the name teepirategirl but I would love to read some by you guys!
Anyone have an account on there? Any fics?

Ditte3

Teepirategirl I read your story TROUGH THE AGES.It's

Teepirategirl I read your story THROUGH THE AGES.It's great!

Ditte3

Sorry my cat stepped on the key board and I sent my post in such a silly way.I thought it was deleted and I wrote it again.Sorry

Hambah

Originally posted by tee_pirategirl
OMG! Hambah I read those. GREAT! Dances with pirates was great!

LJS! it's a good thing you have two accounts!

Does anyone have any stories on fanfiction.net? I have 2 under the name teepirategirl but I would love to read some by you guys!
Anyone have an account on there? Any fics?

Yeah, I love Dances With Pirates smile

Your story Through the Ages is really good! I put it on my story alert list.

lovethemtigers

OMG...girls, have you guys read this story..it's very very good...true to the characters, very well written and kept me spell-bound....
it's called "The Flying Dutchman"

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3624139/6/

Hambah

Originally posted by lovethemtigers
OMG...girls, have you guys read this story..it's very very good...true to the characters, very well written and kept me spell-bound....
it's called "The Flying Dutchman"

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3624139/6/

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Hambah

I have a question about a Sparrabeth story. Even though I don't completely understand everything about it, I love it. It's called "The Swan and the Owl." Here it is, and it's told from W/E's son's POV:

'Sit down, love, and listen to Uncle Jack.'

Uncle Jack comes to our house a few times a year, mostly unannounced. He was last here for my tenth birthday, but him and Ma had a huge fight and this is the first I've seen him since. Almost a year.

I'm don't quite understand sure exactly how this man is an uncle, being completely unrelated to me in any way whatsoever, but seeing as he makes Ma so happy, who am I to bring it up? I take a seat at out little wooden dining table.

Ma is pouring rum for the both of them and slowly placing our dinner on the table. She says its bad manners to eat before all the attending are seated, but Jack reaches for the salted pork immediately, washing it back with a large sip of drink.

'Ever been to India, lad? No, of course you haven't. If you had, I would have brought you, not that your mum would allow any such thing, and seeing as I don't recall doing any such thing, you haven't been.'

Sometimes it is rather difficult dealing with Uncle Jack, simply because most of the time I have no idea what is coming out of his mouth.

'India is the mother-land of some of the most brilliant tales ever told. I know you like stories so.' I do. 'How's about I tell you me favorite?' That got my attention. It got Ma's too. Her eyes widened just a bit and she placed a new cup of rum in front of Uncle Jack before joining us at the table.

'It's a story of a swan and an owl. Goes a bit like this,' he cleared his throat theatrically. I suppose he thinks it adds to the atmosphere. I don't know why he bothers. Ma and I are already listening beyond distraction. 'There this swan, hanging around minding its own bird-y business when along comes an owl. Great big bloody eyes, this owl has got. You ever seen an owl? Bloody big eyes...'

Ma used to slap him for his language, but I think eventually she realized it was a lost cause.

'Unusual for an owl to be out among the day-birds. But anyways, he made great friends with the swan and showered her with praise. They fancied they loved one another. But the owl is a night bird, see, and it had to return to forests to sleep. 'I must return' says the owl, 'but please come with me.'

Ma is looking at Uncle Jack funny. Like she's woken up from a nightmare. She has those a lot. I try to help, but she sends me away, not wanting to upset me. But, no, not terrified like after a nightmare; like when she's just woken up and she can't figure out if the dream was real or not.

'So the swan, since she loves the owl, follows him to the forest. But he asked that when she found him, to wait until nightfall, when he could come out. She agreed, thinking herself a bit sleepy anyways. She slept through the night. Just before morning, a group of hunters came through and the owl hooted as they passed. The hunters shot at the owl, but he fled to the swan's home to seek protection. She did not wake to the owl's soft cry and so the hunters shot her and killed her.'

Uncle Jack is looking at Ma now like there is some great and terrible secret in his words. I think it is the saddest thing I've ever seen. Sometimes Ma has that look, when we sit on the cliff by our house, looking out at the horizon. The tension between them is starting to overwhelm me.

'That's the saddest story I've ever heard,' I say.

Uncle Jack turns to me like he's forgotten I was here. He may have. He looks at me for some time with eyes that are darkened, but hollow. Then his eyes fill with life and laughter.

'I know, lad. I know. They aren't all like that, though.' He's laughing.

'I don't understand. Why would the swan wait around all night for the owl? Swans don't sleep during the day. It's against their nature, isn't it?'

Ma looks like she might cry. I didn't the story was that sad.

'And the owl. If he loved her why would he ask her to do such a thing?'

The silence is palpable. I can feel a heaviness settle into the air around me. But I don't understand. I open my mouth again to ask Ma what is going on, but she cuts me off. Her eyes are holding Jack's in a gaze that seems unbreakable.

'Will you leave us a minute, Dylan?' Ma asks. I'm surprised.

'Won't be but a minute. Now be a good lad, and do as your mum says.'

I leave them and retire to my bedroom to clean up. I can their hushed but heated voices. When I am done cleaning, I sit on my bed to read. Uncle Jack brought me book from Italy; a story of a man that has journeyed to Hell and back.

Ma says that maybe, one day, she'll let Uncle Jack take me with him on his ship. She says that maybe we will all sail away on a vacation. I hope so. Ma seems so sad, always watching the sea. She's told me a few stories about her life, but nights like tonight make me think that there are many, many more to learn.

It's late when Ma comes into my room and kisses me.

'I'm sorry, sweetie. Jack and I were just talking about your birthday and got carried away.' She says, smiling. Truly smiling.

'What will we d