Mr.Murder27
Well I've been watching alot of Texas Chainsaw Massacre movies for the past 2 weeks. They were pretty cool. I like the voilence and gore. Since I saw the movies they inspired me to write a short story about my life or death situation against the chainsaw weilding brute. I hope you like!
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Chapter 1
The night was cold sweat rolled down my forehead. My long braids swaying back and forth as I was running. The pain in my lungs bothered me and I had deep intentions to stop and face my fate against the 7ft stranger that towered over me. The grass scraped against my black converse shoes leaving marks on the toe. My Black shirt was almost drenched in sweat as well.
I stopped to get a brief moment of rest. I outran it for now. But that thing isn't giving up.I had my hands resting on my trembling knees. All of a sudden I heard the sound of a engine coming my way. Dammit its back!
Here it comes shaking the chainsaw wildly and carelessly.This guy is gonna make me into mincemeat. I took off. He's only 5 yards away from me. He's like a gay guy trying to chase around Matthew Mcconaugh.
The wind flew past my face drying the drips of sweat that stood still on my brown face.
I looked back and saw smoke come from the guys weapon.I had to get out of a plain area and get ino the nearest woods. So hightailed my a** into the foggy tree covered plain nearby.
I hid behind a tree panting begging to let god get me out of this alive. I needed more rest. As soon as I heard the crackle of twigs I was intent to jump up and run away but I decided to stay still and calm. I glanced around the tree and saw it slowly browsing the woods trying to find me. It was sniffing like a dog.
A scent? I lifted up my arm to smell my armpit.Gross! No deodorant. It appears that it is getting closer. I have to get away. My muscles were pumping my heart was racing. I took off running like a chicken with his head cut off. I heard the man terrifying and disturbing screams echo into the air. He started his cahinsaw up and chased me again.
I looked back seeing how far away he was. He was still on my a**. All of a sudden BAM! I tripped over a branch. I recovered as my hands dug into the leaves and dirt. I glanced back and didn't see anything this time. Although I kept running until WHAM! Straight into a tree.
I fell to the ground as my vision started to get blurry my head began to succumb to pain. I felt the warm blood trickle from my forehead. In a instant I saw the man stand over me. I had the intent to scream and yell but it was like one of those dreams when you can't move and if you yell noone can hear you. If felt broad ugly hands touch and clutch my shoulders.
He dug his fingernails in my shoulderblades and dragged me on the ground. After three minutes he threw me over my shoulder like a sack of potatoes. I then passed out.
He's gonna cut me like a pig. Am I close to death already?
Chapter 2...Coming Soon!
Honest feedback please.
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Chapter 1
The night was cold sweat rolled down my forehead. My long braids swaying back and forth as I was running. The pain in my lungs bothered me and I had deep intentions to stop and face my fate against the 7ft stranger that towered over me. The grass scraped against my black converse shoes leaving marks on the toe. My Black shirt was almost drenched in sweat as well.
I stopped to get a brief moment of rest. I outran it for now. But that thing isn't giving up.I had my hands resting on my trembling knees. All of a sudden I heard the sound of a engine coming my way. Dammit its back!
Here it comes shaking the chainsaw wildly and carelessly.This guy is gonna make me into mincemeat. I took off. He's only 5 yards away from me. He's like a gay guy trying to chase around Matthew Mcconaugh.
The wind flew past my face drying the drips of sweat that stood still on my brown face.
I looked back and saw smoke come from the guys weapon.I had to get out of a plain area and get ino the nearest woods. So hightailed my a** into the foggy tree covered plain nearby.
I hid behind a tree panting begging to let god get me out of this alive. I needed more rest. As soon as I heard the crackle of twigs I was intent to jump up and run away but I decided to stay still and calm. I glanced around the tree and saw it slowly browsing the woods trying to find me. It was sniffing like a dog.
A scent? I lifted up my arm to smell my armpit.Gross! No deodorant. It appears that it is getting closer. I have to get away. My muscles were pumping my heart was racing. I took off running like a chicken with his head cut off. I heard the man terrifying and disturbing screams echo into the air. He started his cahinsaw up and chased me again.
I looked back seeing how far away he was. He was still on my a**. All of a sudden BAM! I tripped over a branch. I recovered as my hands dug into the leaves and dirt. I glanced back and didn't see anything this time. Although I kept running until WHAM! Straight into a tree.
I fell to the ground as my vision started to get blurry my head began to succumb to pain. I felt the warm blood trickle from my forehead. In a instant I saw the man stand over me. I had the intent to scream and yell but it was like one of those dreams when you can't move and if you yell noone can hear you. If felt broad ugly hands touch and clutch my shoulders.
He dug his fingernails in my shoulderblades and dragged me on the ground. After three minutes he threw me over my shoulder like a sack of potatoes. I then passed out.
He's gonna cut me like a pig. Am I close to death already?
Chapter 2...Coming Soon!
Honest feedback please.