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it was the day before Harry's seventeenth birthday when he would come to age. Hermione and Ron should be hear any minute the letter said met us in your room the day before ure birthday at 12.00 pm harry got this 2 days ago and had been waiting since he had sent Errol back saying okay and it was 11.55 when aunt Petunia came in and sat net toharry theres something you should no ive always loved you and lilly but vernon hated it so i had to stop talking to her but just before she died she sent this dear harry if u get this me and your father are dead no that we love you i have attached something for u in another letter wow i never new use cared about each otter i no u didnt but now u do heres the other letter dear harry this is the ring that i gave your mother when we got engaged please give this to your wife when use get engaged love dad

sorry for not posting all at once

just as expected Hermione and Ron showed up at 12 but something they weren't expecting was to see harry crying they walked over and asked what the matter was he said i just found at my mum and aunt Petunia really did love each other and aunt Petunia loves me and then she gave me a letter from my mum and then from my dad which had the ring he gave to mum when he proposed alright tell us more at the burrow well where's your luggage me and Ron will go back with that OK and they left about 1 minute latter Hermione was back but this time instead of Ron she had Ginny Hermione was yelling why did you come with me i told u not Ginny said i had to talk to harry before he arrived fine ill be back in 5 minutes and she disappeared what o you want gin i wanted to tell you that i still love you and i still want to go out with you and i don't care if i die as long as I'm with you OK I'll tell u what at bill and Fleur's wedding u will find out my answer yes that's only the day after your birthday just then Hermione came back and said get Hedwig where going back to the burrow

The burrow


harry would like some lunch miss weasly said running up tp him and giving him a hug just then did harry relise our hungry he was yes please he said yumm thankyou that was so nice im glad you liked it dear now can u please go upstairs for the rest of the day while we get reay for youre party tomorow ok he said and walked upstairs

i know i dont have any fans yet but im stuck on his birthday i dont no what to rigt for
heres some things im stuck on
pressents
peoples there
and anything else to make it cool

Ive had an idea

harry wake up yelled ron throwing a pillow at his head ok ok im up why do i have to be up so early ummmmm let me think its your birthday today rember how coul i forget now quick downstairsto the livingroom everyones waiting once he got own there he saw the decorations where all snithes an seventeens why this cool guys i love it thts okay it was no trouble at all dear now come met the guests whos here ull he see he walked into the kitchen to see tonks luoin madeye hagrid aunt petuina(that shocked him) luna nevile where also there oh my god guys thanks for coming thats okay harry it was no problem said tonks now can we give our presents molly pleaded tonks oh well ispose you can

ok harry heres a present from me and lupin
101 defece againts the dark art spells
fred and george had given him a bag of wheasley wizzard thing
thanks guys harry i got u a photo album of your years at hogwarts
thank you so much i love it its wonderful harry me and luna decided to give you a whole bag of honeyukes best thanks mmm these are yum the weaslys had got him a hand on there clock awwww thanks so much
its okay dear bill and fleur will be hear for lunch bye the way
breakfeast hang on me and hermione need to give our gift
ok then where is it come up to my room mate ok harry folowed when he got up there ron and hermione said this is your present and the kisses=d tjen hermione said suprise me and ron are datting wow um thats great love it woild never have tought use to woulde evrntully hook up quick we better go down at for breakfast the rest of the past normally till hagrid came out and said harry i got a suprise for you come to the barn so off they walked when they got there harry saw buckbeak and jumped for gleee harry took ron hermione ginny fred and george for rides all afternoon

its ok but maybe a lit more excitting would be better

thanks telll me your ideas

this thread belongs in the fanfiction section

what do you mean
runnung mascara

CAN U HELP ME THEN

THEY CAME BACK FOR DINNER AND WHERE SURPRISED TO SEE A HUMONGOUS CAKE AND LOTS OF HARRY'S FAVOURITE DINNERS AND DESSERTS THANK YOU SO MUCH MISS WESLEY THIS LOOKS DELICIOUS THAT'S OKAY NOW EAT AFTER EVERYONE HAD FINISHED MISS WESLEY SAID OFF TO BED WE'VE GOT A WEDDING TOMORROW SO THEY ALL QUICKLY WENT TO BED JUST AS HARRY PASSED GINNY'S DOOR SHE ASKED HIM TO COME IN SO HE ENTERED GINNY SAID I JUST WANTED YOU TO NO THAT I LOVE YOU AND I CANT WAIT TILL TOMORROW AND THEN HERMIONE ENTERED AND HE LEFT HERMIONE ASKED GINNY WHY HE WAS IN HERE SHE SAID WE MIGHT BE GOING BACK OUT I HAVE TO WAIT TILL TOMORROW TO FIND OUT THOUGH OK GOOD NIGHT HARRY WENT UPSTAIRS TO HIS AND RON'S ROOM AND RON SAID WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG YOUR SISTER WANTS US TO GO BACK WHAT DID YOU SAY SHE HAS TO WAIT TILL TOMORROW YOU WILL FIND OUT TOMORROW

i argee with running mascara, u should have posted this where i post my stories.......plus......use a dictionary, grammar matters, and so does punctuation....definetely need punctuation

soory i didnt no where do u post yours

u've read mine

yeh but where did you post it
i though mine was at the same place


ps yours are great

lmao....umm.....just try and post more i can make you a thread for what you've already written

ok im writting the wedding now

do u want me to make the thread or not?
i need to know

yes

ginny woke up exteremly early the smorning and it wasn't because her brother was getting married it was because the guy shed crused on for 7 years was about to tell her if they would go back out she was excited but he said at the wedding and that wasnt to early evening so she whent own and had breakfast suprisingly bill and fleur where up reading a letter
ginny asked whats the matter
charlie cant make it so i have to move ron up to best man so then ill only have 1 so fleur will have to drop hermione unless i get annother best man and no way im having percy fred and george would stuff it up so i dont have anyone
than fleur said what about harry
perfect idea ron and ginny and harry and hermione i love it
so the 3 wated for about an hour then every one came down for breakfest after breakfes fleur and biil asked if the could talk to ron hermione and ginny so they whent outside then bill yelled
out harry can you come to please come now all of you listen

post rest soon

once harry joined the others in the garden bill asked harry would you to 2nd best man so it would go Fleur sister walks down firs being the flower girl then Ron and Ginny then harry an Hermione will walk down will have practice after lunch then they went and played 2 side quidditch harry and Ron and Ginny and Hermione they came back down for lunch then ha the practice all run smoothly then everyone rushed to go get dressed





PS it was set up that morning

if anyone thinks this to much like there's ill rewrite the chapter

Originally posted by hp_luvr_16
i argee with running mascara, u should have posted this where i post my stories.......plus......use a dictionary, grammar matters, and so does punctuation....definetely need punctuation was it better that time

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i don't want to continuing cause i don't want to copy anyone's so is it OK if i make harry a teacher

mi friend it and said who cares make him be a teacher

Don't triple post, it's against the rules.

sorry i dint no i wasn't aloud to post 3 times in a row on my story

it was time for the guests to arrive after the had all started the wedding began.A gorgeous looking Fleur was standing in her tent with Harry Hermione Ginny Ron and Gabriella.OK out you go Gab so out she walked followed by Ron and Ginny then Harry and Hermione once the had all got to there positions ,Fleur walked down the isle with her father she looked so gorgeous bill thought.When she finally got up there the ceremony started blah blah blah u know how it goes u may kiss the bride said the Pasteur who was marrying them. once that was over it was time for them to dance Bill an Fleur took the first dance the Ginny come over to Harry and asked if they where gonna go back out when Harry said i will show u may i take this dance.But said ginny a little scared only Bill an Fleur are up there even better smirked Harry so they went up and danced and everyone looked at them the harry kissed her softly and they continued to dance. Ron asked Hermione up to dance she happily got up then Nevile and Luna got up then all then every one else joined. After the firs dance the 3 couples went up to Ron's room there everyone started talking about who was going out with who first Hermione and Ron said we've been dating since the first week of holidays Then Nevile and Luna said we ran into each other at hogs mead the day before your birthday and we've been dating since.Well when hermione came back with ginny the day before my birthday she asked me back but she had to wait till the wedding for the answer.so final year in 1 week looking forward to it asked Nevile.Me an Luna where wondering if we could stay here for the week you parents said it was up to yous sure u can stay in Fred and George's old room.Hermione and i will stay up here Harry and Ginny in her room.

I AM NOT TRYING TO BE LIKE JK I STARTED WRITING BITS OF THIS AFTER THE 6TH BOOK OF WHAT I HOPPED BOOK 7 WOULD BE

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the chldren spent thr rest of the evening at the party after all the guest whent home the kids all went to thier new rooms

umm.....have u written this on paper or sumtin, because u need punctuation skills like bad, maybe some commas, quotation marks, periods, question marks, exclamation marks, look at the difference between my story(s) and your story......

good post(s) tho..

srr im not realy good at punctation yeh its written on papper

Needs to be in the proper place (Harry Potter Fanfiction Forum), needs Grammar help, needs Punctuation help, needs longer, less frequent posts, and needs more mmm. 13

SRRY BUT IM NEW AND IF I GET AN IDEA I POST DOES ANYONE OBJECT
TO GINNY BEING PREGNANT

Lose the Capslock =]

umm........maybe make things a little clearer on that post

hi me again pls pls pls pls post post post more more

post it really good unless ur waiting 4 me 2 make the thread 4 u

i had it but my putter dided so itll be up soon probally 2 will be up tonite




xXxmaddyxXx

hey Ron Hermione can i talk to u guys
"sure you can harry what about"
well do you guys want to come to diagonally tomorrow with Mrs Wesley me I'm gonna ask Nevile and Luna and Ginny of course"
"sure thing we will come"
"OK can i talk to yous after dinner though"
"yep"
"OK bye"
next he went to find Nevile and Luna he told them what was happening they where delighted to both come.the only problem was he couldn't find Ginny finally he found her flying (his broom) so he grabbed her broom and flew up there with her once they where flying next to each other harry kissed her then asked if she would do the honours of escorting him to diagonally tomorrow she said she would be delighted to.

hope its good let me no pls


xXxmaddyxXx

its good

once they had all dressed and eaten they apparated to the leaky cauldron. Hermione appareted with Ron Nevile and Luna together and of course Ginny and harry apparated together and Mrs weaslly by herself. once they had past through the passage they went to they where
Gringrotts where seved by griphook


rest in about 20 miniutes

hang i=on iminm finishing typing give me about 30

hurry

hello mr potter we need to talk before you can acces your vault so can yyou come into this room sure thing ok now as you no you are godric griffondors heir no i dindt oh well you are so you inheritr50 000 and a lot of vaulables albus left you 10 000 in his will and sirus left you 10 000 plus grimuld place and your parebnts left you 20 000 gaelos okay now over the years that has incresed dyou have over 100 000 okay uum i want 500 transfered into a new acoount for ronald weasly and hermione granger thats a shared account also another shared acount with 500 gaelons in it for nevile longbotom and luna love good aand 1 000 into the weaslys account how long till thats done about 2 minutes okay thankyou hang on you need the keys for your houses then they went and joined the others 1000 galeons to you accoubnt thankyou harry thats okay ill also made shared accounts for nevile and luna and hermione and ron they have 500 gaelons thanks mate so nowlets go shooping what shops do you want to go to pet store please harry me to called luna hermione lets see book store ofcourse it is ron quidditch mate mrs weasly well artur and i need new robes okay so first we will go get the robs then the pets then the books then the quidditch supplies they ha finnaly reache thev aults ron and hermiones nevile and lunas mrs weaslys and harry where all next to each other everyone but ginny jummed oi yelled harry dont you wana see my money no she said once they had there money and were back above ground ginny said ill met you guys at fred and georges alright so the went and got robes harry so the bmost gorgeus pink dress so he bought for ginny in the pet store he bought her a snowy owl in the book store he bought her a book called 101 ways to annoy your broy=thers in the quidditch store he bought here a firebolt they were about to go see fred and george when harry so a jewlry store and decide to buy ginny anoher pressent he found a saphire bracelt a rubby ring emrold ear rings and a necklace that had emerols in one section rubbie in annother and saphires in another part the sop ownner said that tells you if your familly is safe the green is for yo parrents the blue is for you brothers and sisters and the red is for your boyfriend or girlfriend and your kids harry loved it so he bought it then apparetd back to godrics hollow and set up abedroom for every one boyfrirend girlfriend share and the master for him and ginny were on the 7yh floor nevile and luna and ron hermione 6th floor and everyone else 5th floor

second half


harry then appareted back to a sulking ginny she thought harry dindt love her beause he was ignoting her so when she saw him she walked up to him and slapt him across the face ouch te weaslys all saw this and laughed then everyone come over an harry sai were going to my home godreics hollow want fit everyone though wikll it mate no but pottermanor will so they appareted back to his house harry showed mrs weasly her room then they shoed the oters theres then harry walked back to mrs weaslys room and asked if she wanted to ee his and ginnys she sai id love to dear he asked the others then he found ginny sulking on there stairs between 6th and 7th floor hey gin come look at our room you sure yeah she waas the last to enter and harry had hidden all the present when she entered he told her to sit on the bed he bought out her dress she jummed up and down and was so happy then when he said theres morre she sat straight back down he showed her her owl aww tahnks harry when ron saw the tittle of the book he left the room ginny asked why di ron leave cause of this she was so happy when she saw the tittle thanks for all the presents harry hang on theres more are you serious yeah he bough out the firebolt she passed out and harry had to wait 10 minutes before he could give it to her she was so happy can we go rie now if you dont want anymore presents no no ill stay ok this the last one close your eyes he bought out the ring and put it on her then the barcelt he took off her earings and stuck the new ones in and finally the necklace ok now come with me and he le her to a wally which was completly mirror now oppen oh harry thankyp=ou so much now see this necklace the stones light up if someone is hurt me and when we have kids are red your parents are green and your brothers and sisters are blue now i adde a charm so blue also means nevile luna and hermione oh harry i love it thankyou so much. now lets go flying even better i have a quidditch pitch lets go play yeh guys you in we dont have brooms theres some int the broom shed all nimbus 2001awseome ok ill met yous out there molly there is some one in the kitchen for you ok harry when she got to the kitchen she saw 8 house elves matilda the head elf told them the names of the other 7 lillee justin johnny jessica ranny seanand jack she told them to prepare dnner so they got straight to wok after an hour of quidditch which only ginny harry ron and hermione played nevile and luna commentated and nevile reft froom the ground (cause he sucked at flying)they went in to find out that dinner was it half an hour so everyone w

okay u should space out ur words....use punctuation....and make this more clearer

ok but im grounded intill i pack 4 america i leave tomorow from austraila and then im gone 4 10 days i get back to austraila on december 7 th and im going with school so no laptop or puter

went and changed for dinner

im back from america whoooooo its good to be back more later

Harry i've got no clothe's and these one's are coverd in mud. go get some from the wadrobe wheres that next room is yours on the left ond mines on the right and you have thousands of clothes but have a shower first dear ypur verry sweaty im going to go see ron and hermione see ya at dinner

ha pl post longer ones but that was great but ineed more

i have an idea why dont you make the next chapter about the twins and mr weasly and charlie coming over

harry thanks for the room its great yeh thanks mate your welcome but remeber how i wanted to talk to you after dinner well you's disapered last night so can i talk to you guys now yes ofcourse rember how i had well this year im teaching dada and so im going to stay back in 6th year so next year will be 7th year and i wont be teaching and i will get hb an d quidditch captin badges next year instead of this year an well would you guys like to ummmm stay back with me does that mean i would have to do all of my homework again yes it does and but you wouldnt have to di it would you harry no because i would be marking everyones work harry ill stay back with you thanks mione what about it ron i mean your gf staying back on one coniton whats that nevile stays back i ont no ill go see moganogal now then but what about dinner dont worry ill be there

knock knock come in oh its you potter what would you like well miss granger and mr weasly are going to repeat 6 th year but we where wondering if mr longbottom could as well why well where he's only friends an he's girlfriend is in 6th year well he does need it verry well thenoff you go now
hey luna wheres nevile in our room thanks ha nevile woul you like to repeat 6th year why well ron and hermione are ginny and luna are in it and im teaching dada this year then doing 7th year next year i would love to harry thanks

forgiving

at the same time Ginny had just walked into the closet which was nearly the same size as there room which was divided into sections for jewrally hats shes bags dresses pants and tshirts o my go this is amazing i caint belive it she chose her outfit then went had a shower by the time that was done it was time for dinner she found everyone but her mum was sittingshe went an found a seat inbetween hermione and harry harry decided that this was the moment to tell everyoneok so as you no im teaching this year so i have decided to reapet 6th year so next year ill finish and ill get hb and my uidditch captincy back so this year ginny is captain and hp will be from a diffrent housethankyou and he sat back down just then the house elves came out with dinner then desert after dinner mrs weasly that informed them that tomorow arthur bill charlie fleur fred george and percy where all coming over because percy wants to say appoligese perfect thought harry the nekt morning when everyone arived harry asked if they could all sit in the loungeroom harry went up and got ginny's necklace and then tol ginny to stand now nottice how theres only 2 grenn that is because you parents have to do something arthur can you plese come over her and place a finger on ne of the green and say

i arthur weasly your father let this crystal let you no if i am in danger or hurt

ok so here i go i arthur weasly your father let this crystal let you no if i am in danger or hurt

when he finished dad apeared on the crystal next molly got up an said it replacing arthur with molly and farther with mother when she finished mum apeared on it

next we will do the blue notice how there is 9 umm
yes seeing i only have 6 brothers one of them is for fleur 1 for nevile and 1 is for luna so all the boys got up and sai i ......... weasly your brother let this crystal let you no if i am in danger or hurt
then fleur said i fleur weasly your sister-in law let this crystal let you no if i am in danger or hurt

then nevile said i nevle longbotom your friend let this crystal let you no if i am in danger or hurt
and luna said i luna lovegood your friend let this crystal let you no if i am in danger or hurt

once they had all done she noticed all of there names where on it now just me nottice how theres only one red yes thats because u add them when you need to once harry had said what he needed to say the knecklace was complete now ginny as llong as you always wear this you will always no then he sat down an pearcy said i would just like to sincerly appoligise for what ive done i no now that harry never lied and i let ego get in the way and i would be verry grayeful if you forgive me harry was first to do something he got up and walked over to percy and shook his han i forgive you mate next his parents then ginny then charlie then bill and fleur then hermione ddragged ron up to tell him they forgived but they twins wouldnt budgee
nah just kiddin percy of course we forgive you i mean we've missed annoying thanks guys then harry said would you like to stay for lunch ummm idont no what do u think fred george we'd love if you did bro ok thanks harry

hey maddy i started an account ive also got a story called harry/ginny


ps love your storry

pss read mine please

im sorry to say this but maybe could you restart over and try to at least use punctuation, correct grammar, and spacing, im not saying its bad or anything, but you just really need some help on those three things

it would be greatly appreciated if you did this for others besides me, thank you

-Emo_Shadows

hi ok i will rewrite it for you the new thread is called
harry for ginny redo
but i need reviews pls pls pls pls

hi every one this thred is open still so that aning else you y ideas or anythhave to say oni goes on here but cooments on the oher one like wow that was really good but if you id this it would e etter
as a comment then come on here and writet would be better how i

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you are the worst ****ing writer ever you syupid ****

please just ****ing kill yourself

readwhat ive rewitten in ginny for harry reo please

ginny weasley... aahhhhhhhh! naughty

mate if your doing that about ginny u have proberly never been with a girl