ginny for harry redo

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gh_hr _for_eva
hi i have rewritten my storry heres the first chapter


It was the day before Harry's seventeenth birthday when he would come to age. Hermione and Ron should be hear any minute the letter said met us in your room the day before your birthday at 12.00 pm. Harry ha got this letter 2 days ago and had been waiting in his room since. He had sent Errol back saying okay and it was 11.55 when aunt Petunia came in and sat next to Harry
“Harry there’s something you should no I’ve always loved you and Lilly.”

“Then why did you always act like you hated us.”

“That would be because Vernon hated that life so I had to stop talking to her,
But just before she died she sent this to me.”

“Dear Harry if u gets this letter then your father and I are dead but know that we love you, your father has attached something for u in another letter.”

“Wow I never new u cared about us so why are you telling me now.”

“Because your mother said I had to give you these just before your 17th birthday, heres the other letter

“Dear Harry this is the ring that I gave your mother when we got engaged please give this to your girlfriend when use get engaged love dad

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ok tell me if thats better so i know how to rewrite the 2nd chapter pls

Emo_Shadows
well its better, but still we need to know whos talking and grammar is much better, but some mistakes

ilovehp
yeh if you wrote like
"wow" gasped Harry.

we no but it s great

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It was the day before Harry's seventeenth birthday when he would come to age. Hermione and Ron should be hear any minute the letter said met us in your room the day before your birthday at 12.00 pm. Harry ha got this letter 2 days ago and had been waiting in his room since. He had sent Errol back saying okay and it was 11.55 when aunt Petunia came in and sat next to Harry
“Harry there’s something you should no I’ve always loved you and Lilly.”

“Then why did you always act like you hated us.”snarled Harry

“That would be because Vernon hated that life so I had to stop talking to her,But just before she died she sent this letter to me.”

“Dear Harry if u gets this letter then your father and I are dead but know that we love you, your father has attached something for u in another letter.”

“Wow I never new u cared about us so why are you telling me now.”
gasped Harry
“Because your mother said I had to give you these just before your 17th birthday, here's the other letter

“Dear Harry this is the ring that I gave your mother when we got engaged please give this to your girlfriend when use get engaged love dad

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ok how was that i want to write good so please i dont mind rewriting and once this ones good the others will be up quicker

gh_hr _for_eva
ok no one has replied so this is how it will work i will post leave 1-2 days post the next part and i may combine sections

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Second half
Sorry for not posting all at once

Just as expected Hermione and Ron showed up at 12. But something they weren't expecting was to see Harry lying on his bed crying. They walked over and asked him what the matter was.

“Im fine it’s just the fact that well I found at that my mum and aunt Petunia really did love each other and aunt Petunia loves me.”

“Are you okay with that Harry?”

“Yeh and then she gave me a letter from my mum, and then from my dad which had the ring he gave to mum when he proposed to her.”

“Alright tell us more at the burrow” said Ron in a bored voice.

“Well where's your luggage me and Ron will go back with that.” enquired Hermione

“Over there next to the window”

“OK mate see ya when u get to the burrow just Hermione will come back for you.”

They left about 1 minute latter Hermione was back but instead of being alone she had Ginny with her.

Hermione was yelling “why did you come with me I told u not to”


Ginny said “Hermione I had to talk to Harry before he arrived”

“Fine ill be back in 5 minutes” and Hermione disappeared

“What do you want Gin”

“I wanted to tell you that I still love you and I still want to go out with you and I don't care if I die as long as I'm with you.”

“OK I'll tell u what at bill and Fleur's wedding u will find out my answer”

“You promise”

“Yes Gin I promise”

Just then Hermione came back and said get Hedwig where going back to the burrow now.
Ginny grab my left hand Harry my right.

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i need i review for chapter 2

Emo_Shadows
good...love the spacing...much easier to read

gh_hr _for_eva
ok chap 2 will be up the safternoon

gh_hr _for_eva
here it is


Chapter 2
The burrow

Harry Hermione and Ginny arrived at the burrow to see Ron waiting at the door.

“What took u guys so long? Harry”

“Ummm” said Harry

“What about you Ginny”

“I don’t know”

“Hermione”

“Harry couldn’t find his quidditch trough the age’s book”

“Oh ok”

Just then Miss Weasly ran out to them.

“Harry would u like some lunch dear.” she asked while she was giving one of her famous breath taking hugs. Just then did Harry realise how hungry he actually was.

“Yes please” he said

“That’s okay dear it’s on the table”

“Thankyou that was verry nice Miss Weasly.”

“Im glad you liked it dear now u can go play quidditch for an hour or 2 but then we need you to go up to your room so we can set up for your birthday oh and your in Percy’s old room again.”

“Ok mum
Oh Im so sorry it just came out.”

“That’s okay you can call me mum if you want.”

“Ok mum.”

“So who wants to play quidditch?”

“I do called Ginny.”

“Same here.” shouted Ron

“What about you Mione” said Harry

“No not really”

“But we need you for it to be even” whined Ron

“Fine I’ll play as long as im captain’s

“Alright you can be captain and Ron can be” decided Harry

“So let’s go get our brooms” cheered Ginny

“Ok Hermione chose your team” said Ron hopefully

“Ok I want Ginny”

“I want Harry’

“Right that’s settled now positions me and Ginny chasers and you 2 keepers”

The game was pretty normal Ron’s team was up by 5 it was 20/15.
When Harry dropped the ball using his seeker skills he dived down but so did Ginny. Ron and Hermione looked away scared of a head on collision between the 2 of them.
Ginny freaked and fell off her broom Harry totally forgot about the apple pretending to be a quaffle and dived to catch Ginny he caught her on the front of her broom Ron an Hermione turned just to see Harry catch her and they decided to go inside and leave them alone Ginny and Harry were gazing at each and didn’t notice them leave when they landed Harry lent down and kissed her.

Emo_Shadows
awww....so adorable....last part was best lol....keep up the good work

gh_hr _for_eva
here it is just as promised i combined 3 chaps the wedding is next


Birthday
“Harry wake up.” yelled Ron throwing a pillow at his head

“Ok ok im up why do I have to be up so early.”

“Ummmm let me think it’s your birthday today rember.”

“How could I forget?”

“Now quick downstairs to the living room everyone’s waiting.”

Once he got down there he saw the decorations where all snitches an seventeens.

“Why this is so cool guys I love it.”

“That’s okay it was no trouble at all dear now come met the guests.”

“Who’s here you’ll he wait an see.”

He walked into the kitchen to see tonks lupin madeye hagrid aunt petunia (that shocked him) Luna Neville and all the weasly except bill and percy where there.

“Oh my god guys thanks for coming.”

“That’s okay Harry it was no problem.” said tonks

“Now can we give our presents please molly.” pleaded tonks

“Oh well I spose you can now he’s up.”

“Ok harry heres a present from me and lupin.”
it was a book 101 defences against the dark art spells.


Fred and George had given him a bag of Weasley wizard’s things.
“Thanks guys”

Hagrid had got him a photo album of all his years at Hogwarts
“thank you so much I love it its wonderful.”

“Harry me and Luna decided to give you a whole bag of honeydukes best” “thanks my favourite ones to.”

The weasly had got him a hand on there clock
“Awwww thanks u so much guys u don’t know how much it means to me.”
“It’s okay dear.”

“Bill and fleur will be hear for lunch bye the way now
breakfast”
“Hang on me and Hermione need to give our gift.”

“Ok then where is it.”

“Come up to my room mate oh and you to Ginny”

“Ok”

Harry and she followed slightly confused when they got up there.

Ron and Hermione said “this is your present”

And the kissed and then Hermione said “surprise me and Ron are dating”

“Wow um that’s great love it would never have thought use to would eventually hook up.”

“Me neither but me and harry had an idea it would be this year.”

“Come on guys we better go down for breakfast.”
The rest of the morning past normally till

Hagrid came out and said. “Harry I got a surprise for you come to the barn.”

So off they walked when they got there harry saw buckbeak and jumped for glee harry took Ron Hermione Ginny Fred and George for rides all morning till Mrs Weasly called them in for lunch. Because bill and fleur had arrived after lunch they went and played quidditch they teams where
Captain/ seeker harry captain/keeper bill
Chasers Fred and Ginny chasers George and Hermione
Keeper Ron seeker Charlie
Of course harry team won they come back for dinner and where surprised to see a humongous cake and lots of Harry’s favourite dinners and desserts.


“THANK YOU SO MUCH MISS WESLEY THIS LOOKS DELICIOUS.”

“THAT'S OKAY NOW EAT”

AFTER EVERYONE HAD FINISHED MISS WESLEY SAID “OFF TO BED WE'VE GOT A WEDDING TOMORROW”

SO THEY ALL QUICKLY WENT TO BED. JUST AS HARRY PASSED GINNY'S DOOR SHE ASKED HIM TO COME IN. SO HE ENTERED.

GINNY SAID “I JUST WANTED YOU TO NO THAT I LOVE YOU AND I CANT WAIT TILL TOMORROW AND I ENJOYED OUR KISS YESTERDAY.”

THEN HERMIONE ENTERED AND HE LEFT HERMIONE ASKED GINNY WHY HE WAS IN HERE. SHE SAID “WE MIGHT BE GOING BACK OUT I HAVE TO WAIT TILL TOMORROW TO FIND OUT THOUGH”
“OK GOOD NIGHT”
HARRY WENT UPSTAIRS TO HIS AND RON'S ROOM AND RON ASKED “WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG”

“YOU’RE SISTER WANTS US TO GO BACK OUT.”

“WHAT DID YOU SAY?”

“SHE HAS TO WAIT TILL TOMORROW”

“YEH BUT CAN’T YOU TELL ME NOW.”

“YOU WILL FIND OUT TOMORROW.”

Emo_Shadows
good post...but try really hard NOT to put it all in CAPS lock at the end...

gh_hr _for_eva
yeh but it was typed in caps lock last time an cause it was christmas eve i didnt have time to change it and todays christmas so no post

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ummm yeh but is was christmas eve so i was trying to put it up before i got kikked off to celbrate

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simonrob123
mate learn to stop swearing coz we dont know what u are asying and i dont see you writing anything

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thank you simon im trying my hardest if u dont like it dont read it

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just stop reading if u hate it so much and u where asked to stop swearing please follow those instructions

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nope oviously u dont like it aint meen other people qhate it as well

Emo_Shadows
gosh everybody just shut the heck up...
this story can be great to some ppl,
but to others its not...
if you dont like it, just say so then leave thats all that goes down...
so everyone calm down and be nice...

Captain REX
The offender has been banned and will no longer be a problem.

For future reference, it is best to ignore people like him and just go get someone to deal with it, like myself.

Carry on. smile

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Here's the post you've all been waiting for.

loveWeddinglove


Ginny woke up extremely early that morning and it wasn't because her brother was getting married. It was because the guy shed crushed on for 7 years was about to tell her if they would be going back out. She was so excited but he said at the wedding and that wasn’t to early evening. So Ginny went downstairs to have breakfast. Surprisingly Bill and fleur where up reading a letter.


Ginny asked “what’s the matter?”

“Charlie can’t make it so I have to move Ron up to best man so then ill only have 1, so fleur will have to drop Hermione unless I get another best man.”

“Ok that is a problem.” sighed Ginny

“Yeh and no way im having Percy he’s not even invited Fred and George would stuff it up so I don’t have anyone.”


“Then fleur said what about Harry he’s like your brother isn’t he.”

“Yeh he is like my brother perfect idea

“That’s why you’re marrying me.”

“Yeh that’s it so Ron and Ginny will be paired, and harry and Hermione.”

“I love it.” yelled Fleur

“What about you Ginny.” asked bill

“Fine but I got a better idea”

“Let’s hear it.”

“Yeh gin what is it.”

“Okay you no how Ron and Hermione are dating.”

“No I didn’t no my little bro finally got a girl.”

”I see u want Ron and Hermione and you and harry I think that’s a good idea Ginny.”

“Yeh fine with me wait till I tease Ron about Hermione.”

“No don’t bill they’ll kill me.”

“Fine only cause it’s you gin.”

So the 3 waited for about an hour then every one came down for breakfast.
After breakfast fleur and bill asked if the could talk to Ron Hermione and Ginny. So the 3 followed Bill and Fleur outside. “Oh harry we need you to.”

Once harry joined the others in the garden bill asked harry if he would be a best man so

“Are you sure cause if u are id love to?”

“Yeh were sure so this is the order, Gab will go first because she is the flower girl, then Ron and Hermione follow and the after them Harry and Ginny, don’t worry though will have a practice after lunch.”

They went and played 2 side quidditch harry and Ron and Ginny and Hermione they came back down for lunch then they had the practice everything ran smoothly then everyone rushed to go get dressed (A/N everything for the wedding had already been set up.)
After that it was time for the guests to arrive once they had all sat in there allocated eats the wedding began. A gorgeous looking Fleur was standing in her tent with Harry Ginny Hermione Ron and Gabriella. Ok out you go Gab so out she walked followed by Ron and Hermione then Harry and Ginny. Once they had all got to there positions, Fleur walked down the isle with her father she looked so gorgeous bill thought. When she finally got up there the ceremony started blah blah blah u know how it goes. U may kiss the bride said the Pasteur who was marrying them. Once that was over it was time for them to dance Bill and Fleur took the first dance. Ginny took the opportunity to come over to Harry and ask him what he’s answer was.

Harry just laughed then said let me show you, may I take this dance.’

“But.” said Ginny a little scared “Only Bill an Fleur are up there”

“Even better.” smirked Harry “Everyone will no you’re mine then.”

So they got up and danced and everyone looked at them then Harry kissed her softly. Then they continued to dance. Ron asked Hermione up to dance she happily got up then Neville and Luna got up then every one else joined. After the first dance the 3 couples went up to Ron's room. There everyone started talking about who was going out with who first Hermione and Ron said we've been dating since the first week of holidays. Then Neville and Luna said we ran into each other at hogsmead the day before your birthday, and we've been dating since. Well when Hermione came back with Ginny the day before my birthday she asked me back but she had to wait till the wedding for the answer. Everyone laughed at that comment. So final year in 1 week looking forward to it asked Neville.

“Spose so” said Ron

“Mm.” said harry
But Hermione’s was the most predictable of course im looking forward to our final year. Everyone laughed again. Then Neville said “Me an Luna where wondering if we could stay here for the week, you’re parents said it was up to use.” Sure u can stay in Fred and George's old room. Hermione and I will stay up here, And Harry can go with Ginny in her room.
The children spent the rest of the evening at the party after all the guest went home the kids all went to their new rooms. love love

simonrob123
and when they got to there rooms they all went nuts the end
LOL

nar great work

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that would be funny

Emo_Shadows
great post...gah...simon is that all you think about...laughing out loud

simonrob123
LOL only when it involves u and me

Emo_Shadows
hysterical

gh_hr _for_eva
Letters

The next day Bill and Fleur left for there honeymoon. Fleur’s parents went back to France, but Gabrielle stayed. She was transferring to Hogwarts for the new school year she would be in her sixth year with Luna and Ginny. That afternoon the teens all were playing a game of quidditch, Harry Ron verse Gabrielle Ginny while Hermione Neville and Luna sat out. Mrs Weasly called out to them after a few hours
“Your Hogwarts letters are here.”
All the kids walked slowly inside besides Hermione she ran so Hermione opened hers first she was Head girl this year she was so pleased. Luna Neville Ron Ginny and Gabrielle opened there’s next Ron remained Prefect so did Ginny Gab Neville and Luna didn’t get any badges.
Harry couldn’t find his letter he was about to say something when professor mognagal appeared right in front of the burrow.

“Hello my I please talk to harry alone.”

“Of course you can professor.”

“Ok well as you no we are again 1 staff member short, no one is willing to teach dada, and all the staff has decided that we would like you to teach it.”

“Ok.”

‘This decision would mean Mr Weasly would get head boy and Miss Weasly would become Quidditch captain.”

“Professor I will do this on one condition.’

“Yes potter.”

“I will only teach for this year and then next year I will do my seventh year and finally Ron and Hermione stay back with me

“Well that is fine with me as long as its fine with them one more thing potter

“Would you be head of griffondor?”

“I would love to.”

“Ok good bye potter.”

“Good bye professor.”


When Harry got back everyone was waiting for him he just went and took a seat next to Ginny.

”Ok I have something very important to tell you this year I will be dada teacher and head of Griffondor house and next year I will do my seventh year.’


“Molly could I please speak to you outside.”

”Of course you can dear.”

“Because I will be staying back is it ok if I ask Ron and Hermione to.”


”No I don’t mind at all but 1 question why are you going to finish your seventh year I mean you could go straight from this job to the ministry.”

“Well umm.’

“Is it ti finish with Ginny yes it is but don’t tell anyone”

“Ok Dear.”

“One more thing can we go to diagonally tomorrow.”

“Sure.”

A/N gab will be stay in Percy’s room and I no she not in sixth year but I decided to age her and one again please review and I would like to thank everyone that has reviewed and sorry it took so long to get up

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“Hey Ron Hermione can I talk to u guys.”

"Sure you can harry what about"

“well do you guys want to come to diagonally tomorrow with Mrs Wesley and me I'm going to ask Neville and Luna and Ginny of course."

"Sure thing we will come."

"OK can I talk to yours after dinner though?"

"Yep"

"OK bye"

Next he went to find Neville and Luna he told them what was happening they where delighted to both come. The only problem was he couldn't find Ginny finally he found her flying (his broom) so he grabbed her broom and flew up there with her once they where flying next to each other harry kissed her, then he asked if she would do the honours of escorting him to diagonally tomorrow she said she would be delighted to. After they landed Fred appeared and asked if he could talk to harry.

“Offcourse you can”

“Thanks I was wondering if you could lend me some money”

Harry new how hard this was for him to ask for money offcourse “you can why though”

“Well me and Katie bell are getting married are you serious yeh and she’s pregnant and has been since January”

“What she’s due next month and your mum doesn’t even no”

“Yeh and were getting married around Christmas.’

“Okay so u pretty much wants me to pay for the cot and everything”

“Yes please and we decide you and Ginny would be godparents”

“Offcourse I would.’

“Thanks harry’

“What sex is it it’s a female she is due for September 18th”

“Cool do you want to go tell everybody else.”

“Hang on a minute Katie’s outside.”

“Ok.”

“When Katie and Fred got in side everybody was surprised how fat she was Fred said excuse me I have some news as you can see Katie’s pregnant she’s due next month and it’s a girl. And we would like harry and Ginny to be godparents and the wedding will be on Christmas Eve.”
As soon as he had said that Everone ran to congratulate them and Ginny accepted.

Harry and her had talk about it later that night “hey Ginny you no what this means”

“What.”

“It means that if they die fighting we her parents”

“Yeh I no it’s scary hey.”

“Tell me about it.


A/N i decided to make them the godparents you will fine out soon why it was then and not ron or hermione

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hey guys i need more rviews please

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yeah...its good, great job on spacing.....

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MISSLEADING
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Once they had all dressed and eaten they apparated to the leaky cauldron. Hermione apparated with Ron Neville and Luna together and of course Ginny and Harry apparated together and Mrs Weaslly and Gabrielle. Once they had past through the passage they went to
Gringrotts where they where served by griphook.

“Hello Mr Potter we need to talk before you can access your vault, so can you come into this room.”

“Sure thing.”

“Ok now as you no you are Godric Griffondors heir.”

“No i didn’t.”

“Oh well you are so you inherit 500 000 000 galleons and a lot of valuables albus left you 10 000 galleons in his will and sirus left you 10 000 galleons plus grimuld place and your parents left you 200 000 000 gallons.”

“Are you serious?”

“Yes okay now over the years that has increased you have over 800 000 000.”

“Okay uum i want 5 new shared account one for Ronald Weaslly and Hermione Granger one for Neville Longbotom and Luna Lovegood another one for Katie and Fred and one for Bill and Fleur one more for George and Angelina can I also get 5000 gallons each for Gabrielle Declour and Charlie Weasly and 100 000 into the weasly's account.

“Yes Mr Potter.”

“How long till that’s done.”

“About 2 minute’s sir.”

“Okay thankyou.”

“Hang on you needs the keys for your houses and the other peoples vault keys.”

Then they went and joined the others and Harry broke the good news “This is a copy of your key Mrs Weasly i have added100 000 galleons to you account.”

“Thankyou Harry but we don’t need it.”

“That’s okay plus I also made shared accounts for Neville and Luna and Hermione and Ron and George and Angelina and Katie and Fred Bill and Fleur they have 5 000 gallons and two solo accounts that also have 5 000 in them for Charlie and Gabrielle.”

“Thanks mate.”
“Yeh thanks Harry.” The rest chorused.

“So now let’s go get our money then go shopping.”

“What shops do you want to go to?”

“Well I want to go to the pet store please Harry.” called Neville

“Me to.” called Luna

“Let’s see I think I can guess Hermione's would it have anything to do with books.”

“Offcourse it is Harry.”
“Let’s see Ron would yours have anything to do with quidditch.”

“Defiantly mate.”

“What about you Gabrielle”

“Well I need some dress robes.”

“Mrs Weasly where do you want to go.”

“Well Arthur and i need new robes to.”

“Okay so first we will go get the robes then the pets then the books then the quidditch supplies then we will go stop in at Fred and Georges shop.

They had finally reached the vaults Ron and Hermione’s Neville and Luna’s Gabrielle’s Mrs Weasly’s and Harry’s where all next to each other everyone but Ginny jumped out of the carts

“Oi.” yelled Harry “Don’t you want to see our money

“My money nope.” she said
Once they had there money and were back above ground

“Ginny said ill met you guys at Fred and Georges”

“Alright.”

So the went and got robes Harry got the saw the most gorgeous baby pink dress so he bought for Ginny. In the pet store he bought her a snowy owl just like Hedwig. In the book store he bought her a book called 101 ways to annoy your brothers. In the quidditch store he bought her, her own firebolt. They were about to go see Fred and George when Harry saw a jewellery store and decide to buy Ginny another present. He found a sapphire bracelet a ruby ring emerald ear rings and a necklace that had emeralds in one section rubies in another and sapphires in another part. The shop owner said that it tells you if your family is safe the green is for your parents the blue is for you brothers and sisters and the red is for your partner and your kids Harry loved it so he bought it then apparated back to Potter manor and set up a bedroom for every one. Boyfriend girlfriend share. The master for him and Ginny were on the 7yh floor Neville Luna Ron Hermione and Gabrielle were on 6th floor and everyone else was on the 5th floor. Harry then apparated back to a sulking Ginny she thought Harry didn’t love her because he was ignoring her. So when she saw him she walked up to him and slapt him across the face
“Ouch”

The weasly’s all saw this and laughed then everyone come over an Harry said “Were going to my home.”

“Godric’s hollow want fit everyone though will it mate.”

“no but Potter manor will so they apparated back to his house Harry showed Mrs weasly her room then they showed the others there’s. Then Harry walked back to Mrs Weasly’s room and asked if she wanted to come see his and Ginny’s room she said

“I would love to dear.”
He asked the others and they all agreed then he found Ginny sulking on there stairs between 6th and 7th floor hey Gin come look at our room

“You sure.”

“Yeah.” she was the last to enter and Harry had hidden all the present when she entered he told her to sit on the bed he bought out her dress she jumped up and down and was so happy. Then when he said there was more she sat straight back down he showed her, her owl aww thanks Harry, When Ron saw the tittle of the book he left the room Ginny asked why he left he left because of this book. She was so happy when she saw the tittle “thanks for all the presents Harry.”

“Hang on there’s more.”

“Are you serious?”

“yeah.” Then he bough out the firebolt she passed out and Harry had to wait 10 minutes before he could give it to her she was so happy “can we go ride now.”

“Sure if you don’t want anymore presents.”

“No no ill stay”

“ok this the last one close your eyes he bought out the ring and put it on her then the bracelet he took off her earrings and stuck the new ones in and finally the necklace. “Ok now come with me.” He led her to a wall which was 1 big mirror

“Now open.”

“Oh Harry thank you so much”

“Your welcome now see this necklace the stones light up if someone is hurt me and if we have kids are represented by red your parents are green and your brothers and sisters are blue now i adde a charm so blue also means Neville Luna and Hermione and Gabrielle oh


“Harry i love it thankyou so much now lets go flying.”

“Even better i have a quidditch pitch lets go play.”

“Yeh guys you in.”

“We don’t have brooms

“There’s some in the broom shed all nimbus 2001.”

“awesome ok ill met youse out there, molly there is some one in the kitchen for you.”

“ok Harry.” when she got to the kitchen she saw 8 house elves Matilda the head elf told them the names of the other 7 Tegs Jan Johnny Jessica Nicole Justin and Milley she told them to prepare dinner so they got straight to wok. After an hour of quidditch which only Ginny Harry Ron and Gabriele played Luna commentated and Neville reft from the ground (cause he sucked at flying)And Hermione cheered on the girls. They went in to find out that dinner was it half an hour so everyone went and changed for dinner.

“Harry I’ve got no clothes and these one's are covered in mud.”

“Go get some from the wardrobe.”

“Where’s that.”

“Across the hall go in that door you will see 2 more doors yours is the one on the left and mines the one on the right and you have thousands of clothes, but have a shower first dear your very sweaty.

“Thanks”
I’m going to go see Ron and Hermione see you at dinner

“Harry thanks for the room its great”

“Yeh thanks mate.”
“Your welcome but remember how i wanted to talk to you after dinner well use diapered last night so can I talk to you guys now.

“Yes offcourse.”

Well rember how I this year I’m teaching DADA and so I’m going to stay back in 6th year so next year will be my 7th year. I won’t be teaching and i will get Head boy and quidditch captain badges next year instead of this year an well would you guys like to ummmm stay back with me.

“Does that mean i would have to do all of my homework again?”

“Yes it does.”

“But you wouldn’t have to do it would you Harry.”

“No because i would be marking everyone’s work.”

“Harry I’ll stay back with you thanks Mione what about it Ron i mean your girlfriend staying back.

“On one condition what’s that Neville stays back”

“I don’t no I’ll go see moganogal now and ask.”

“But what about dinner.”

“Doesn’t worry I’ll be there.”

knock knock “come in”
“Oh its you potter what would you like.”

“Well Miss Granger and Mr Weasly are going to repeat 6th year but we where wondering if Mr Longbotom could as well.

“Why well where he's only friends an he's girlfriend is in 6th year.”

“Well he does need it, very well then off you go now.”

“Hey Luna where’s Neville.”

“In our room.”

“Thanks, Hey Neville would you like to repeat 6th year.”

Why well Ron and Hermione are Ginny Gabrielle and Luna are in it and I’m teaching DADA this year then doing 7th year next year.

“I would love to Harry thanks.”

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OK SO WHAT DO YOU THINK

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i need a review i have the next chapter waiting to come on here

Giggles
ehh....its not as good as the others

simonrob123
nar 2 long 2 complecated

tonkrox13
I LOVE IT KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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im waittig for the next chappter to be sent back by a beta and thanks for the comments

tonkrox13
your welcome and your doin a really awesome job on the story

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here is chapter 8

forgiving

At the same time Ginny had just walked into the closet which was nearly the same size as there room. The closet was divided into sections for jewellery hats shoes bags dresses pants and t-shirts. ‘O my god this is amazing I can’t believe it.’ She chose her outfit then went had a shower; by the time she was done it was time for dinner.

She found everyone but her mum sitting at the table waiting for dinner. She went an found a seat in between Hermione and Harry.


Harry decided that this was the moment to tell everyone ok so as you no im teaching this year so I have decided to repeat 6th year so next year ill finish and ill get head boy and my quidditch captaincy back then. So this year Ginny is captain and head boy will be from a different. Just then the house elves came out with dinner then desert. After dinner Mrs Weasley informed them that tomorrow Arthur Bill Charlie Fleur Fred Katie George and his fiancé Angelina who was getting married the same time as Fred and Katie and Percy where all coming over. Apparently Percy wants to apologise perfect thought Harry.


The next morning when everyone arrived Harry asked if they could all sit in the Lounge room
When everyone was comfortable he went up and got Ginny's necklace and then told Ginny to stand.
“Notice how there’s only 2 Emeralds that is because you parents have to do something Arthur can you please come over her and place a finger on one of the green and say.”

”I Arthur Weasley your father let this Emerald let you no if I am in danger or hurt.”

”Ok so I Arthur Weasley your father let this Emerald let you no if I am in danger or hurt.”

When he finished dad appeared on the crystal next Molly got up an said it replacing Arthur with Molly and
“Ok what do we have to do farther with mother when she finished mum appeared on it.

”Next we will do the sapphires which is family notice how there is 8.”

“yes seeing I only have 6 brothers.” Yes but you see this is how it works bill fleur can you come here please,”
?”

“I want you to both touch the crystal and bill has to say I bill weasley and my wife Fleur Declacour let this sapphire no if you are in danger or hurt.

When he did that a line appeared in the middle of the sapphire one half said Bill and the other said Fleur.

“Perfect now Charlie and Percy you have to say ......... weasley your brother let this sapphire let you no if I am in danger or hurt.”


“Fred Katie George Angelina you have to the same as Bill and Fleur
except replace wife with fiancé.”

“Okay Ron Hermione Neville Luna same as Bill and Fleur again but instead of wife say girlfriend.”

“Now Gabrielle come up here and say I Gabrielle Declacour let this sapphire let you no if I am in danger or hurt.”

Buy the time they were all done everyone’s name was on there
“Now as you can I see I already have put my name on the ruby so if anyone is in danger the necklace will heat up and there name will flash.”

“Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou I absolutely love it.”

“Percy got up and said I would just like to sincerely apologise for what I’ve done I know now that Harry never lied and I let my ego get in the way and I would be very grateful if all of you guys forgive me.

Harry was first to do something he got up and walked over to Percy and shook his hand I forgive you mate next his parents then Ginny then Charlie then Bill then Hermione dragged Ron up to tell him they had forgiven but they twins wouldn’t budge

”nah just kidding Percy of course we forgive you I mean we've missed annoying you.”

“Ahh thanks guys I am so glad you forgave Me.”

“Hey Percy would you like to stay for lunch.”

“umm sure thing Harry.”

GUYS GIRLS
BILL FLEUR
CHARLIE EMTEY
PERCY EMTEY
FRED KATIE
GEORGE ANGELINA
RON HERMIONE
NEVILE LUNA
EMTEY GABRIELLE

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And Chapter 9
Lunch was very pleasant and they all stayed for the rest of the week before they knew it was August 31st and Harry had to go to Hogwarts as did Ron Hermione and Neville, so the Professor let Ginny and Luna come along. When they got there Professor McGonagall told them Dumbledore wanted to see them so they went to the Headmasters office.

Dumbledore had something to say to everyone, first he spoke to Luna, "Miss Lovegood you will be vital to these five this year do not change your attitude for anybody," He then addressed Ginny, “Miss Weasley, I heard you were taking Harry's position as Quidditch Captain, good luck, I've heard that the Gryffindor are hard to work with in Quidditch," Harry nodded his head vigorously.

He then turned to Neville and Ron, "now Mr Weasley, I know you don’t want to repeat even if your friends are, so how about you help teach Defence Against the Dark Arts with Mr Potter but still attend your other classes, Mr Longbottom how would you like a traineeship with Professor sprout?" Both boys nodded their agreement and Neville beamed.

He then turned to Hermione and gave the group a big shock "now Ms Granger since Professor McGonagall will be taking a holiday this year, we don’t have a transfiguration teacher, how would you like to teach Transfiguration for this year, until she comes back?" Hermione nodded and said "Of course sir but when did the Professor decide to take a holiday?"
"Well Ms Granger ever since she was hit with those Stunners the other year she hasn't felt the same"

Finally he turned to Harry "Now then Mr Potter just remember that this job will be one of the hardest you will ever encounter, besides getting rid of Voldermort, you may go now all of you will have different sleeping arrangements this year, there is a room that only Godric Gryffindor's heir can open and said heir can choose other people that it will open to as well and as we all know Harry here is Godric's heir," He started to explain.

"You all will be able to fit in there, it is situated nearby Moaning Myrtles bathroom there is a corridor that goes into a dead end the room is in said dead end, I believe not even the Marauders found it," he paused to wink at Harry. "Walk down to the end of this hallway and then say I Harry James Potter your heir let my friends, Hermione, Ron, Neville, Ginny, and Luna use this room," he continued.

"A door will then appear when you enter there is a book on the left of the door you all must write your full name's on it then leave then just say your name in your head and enter again so it knows how many rooms to make and the bedrooms will be the same but you can see there doors how many bedrooms there are I don’t know the room will decide, it's like Room of Requirement of sorts," Dumbledore concluded.

When they left the office Harry had something to say about the recent developments "how weird," he said with a weird expression on his face

"Yeah I know mate," said Ron with an equally weird face

"Let’s go and check it out then," Harry declared. When they got there Harry did what he had to do they all then entered the others wrote their names and left the room. When they came back in to there surprise there was one main room which was like the Gryffindor common room. Then there 3 doors leading off to three rooms.

"Does this mean we have to share?' Harry asked looking at Hermione, the brains of the group.

"I guess so," Hermione replied. She grabbed Ron's hand and pulled him over to the first door and told him to say his and her name in his head, Ron did as he was told and then a plaque appeared on the door in front of them and written on it was Ron and Hermione. Neville and Luna did the same and their names appeared on the second door. Harry and Ginny repeated the process and their names appeared the last door.

After a while Ron said "let’s have a look at all the other rooms," Harry nodded and held the door open for Hermione to walk through. Hermione smiled and went into her and Ron's room first but when everybody else tried they were pushed back and only Ron and Hermione could enter.

Hermione thought for a minute "maybe we have to say this 'we Hermione Granger and Ronald Weasley give permission for Neville Longbottom, Luna Lovegood, Ginny Weasley and Harry Potter to enter our room,'" it worked and the others were able to enter the room

It was really nice, one side had Chudley Cannon’s posters and Quidditch books the other side was a wall full of books and in the middle was a double bed. Ron ears started turning red "we have to share beds," he said embarrassedly.

Ginny laughed "yep that what it looks like," she said giggling.

There was another door next to the one the came in they went through to find a bathroom bigger than the prefects!

Next everyone went to Neville and Luna’s their room had the same bathroom and a double bed, one side had books on plants and some rare pants. The other side had weird objects that only Luna recognised.

The next room, however, was probably the best of them all. Once again there was a double bed and the bathroom, but this time both sides where dedicated to Quidditch. One side had two of the new firebolts and broom servicing kits and their own set of Quidditch balls. The other contained posters of all of the major Quidditch teams and the best Gryffindor Quidditch robes.

“Wow, I love it Harry” said Ginny throwing her arms around the boy in question.

“Same here Gin,” Harry replied hugging her back

Hermione smiled at how in love they were and then said “I think we need to go see Dumbledore again,” everyone agreed so they went back to Dumbledore’s office; he didn’t look surprise at all to see them again.

“Do you like your living arrangements?” he asked in his calming voice.

“Yes it seems we got paired with our partner and we each have things we like,” replied Hermione.

“Sir, I have a question, I know that this year I'm captain but does it mean that Harry and Ron aren't playing?” asked Ginny.

“Well yes and no, Ron’s not a full teacher so he doesn’t have to stop Quidditch, but as Harry is he cannot because many students would think of it as cheating,” he replied. Ginny nodded sadly, she had hoped that she would get to play Quidditch with Harry again this year. “So now that your questions have been answered you may want to get aquatinted with your rooms,”

On the way out Harry turned and said “You guys go on, me and Ginny need to talk about something, we’ll meet you back in our room,”

“Okay what is it Harry?” asked Ginny when the others had left.

“Everyone has a door in their bedroom that leads to a bathroom right, but next to that door we have another one we tried to open it but we couldn’t,”

“Do you know why we got it?” Ginny asked.

“Yes I know, but I'm can’t tell you, yet, I’ll just say it may open it may not, I tell you about it when the time comes,” Harry looked down at her before continuing, “McGonagall asked me to tell you dinner is tonight like usual,”

They joined up with the 2 pairs were coming out of their rooms, when it was time to go to dinner they went down to see one table like there was in Harry third year this time there was only the 3 couples, Professor McGonagall, Professor Sprout and Professor Dumbledore as well.

During dinner Professor McGonagall asked were they wanted to sit from now on “You have three choices with your house Harry, Hermione, Neville and Ron up at the staff table and Ginny and Luna at their house tables or you can sit together at a table between Ravenclaw and Gryffindor.

Harry said he didn’t want to sit at the staff table, no offence, and he wanted to be able for Luna to sit with them. So they took the table of six afterwards Professor McGonagall asked if she could speak to Harry but told the others to stay there.

Professor McGonagall told gave him a list for his classes and what he could teach then she asked Neville, Hermione and Ron to enter “As you 3 know you will be helping us here are your time tables now go back and have fun before the feast tomorrow,” she smiled at them as they left her office.

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A/N: Hi there this is AmaraMichelle filling in for Madd09, when she asked me to be her Beta I had a slight idea what to expect, but it was a lot worse then I expected. So many grammatical and spelling errors I shocked. She’s very lucky that I count her as one of my close friends otherwise….. Well let’s just say it wouldn’t be very pretty. Hopefully I’ll have the next chapter betaed soon so until then don’t forget to review.

A/N2: This is Madd09 im sorry I haven’t updated in a while an as my beta said the chaps haven’t been the best so far but hope to change this I already have the next few chapter written.

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So what do use all think

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Okay, first of all...I didn't get that one bit, and I read through it twice (2). Your writing has gotten better with the beta..kinda. I still saw MANY grammatical errors and some punctuational errors.

You have an excellent plot, but I think you just rambled on and on. I couldn't see why most of the things that happened had happened.

I'm hoping this doesn't sound like a flame, but sometimes not everything you post up is good. Basically, I like to call this Constructive Critism. It makes you a better writer because you focus on doing a better job.

Really, this is a great story...you just need SOME adjustments. Sometimes you need more than one beta as well. I never had a beta for the stories I posted on here, but recently, I found another fansite that has excellent writers and beta-ers. I have stories on that site as well and an excellent beta. I'm also up for beta-ing

Back to the stories on here that I wrote, yes well as you could see and tell I had terrible spelling, grammar, and punctuation problems. Today I logged on here and read them, and I was like, "Are you freaking serious? I wrote that bad!!"

I'm sorry if this is insulting to you, your beta, and/or your writing, but I'm only trying to make you into a better writer by giving you..."CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM!!!!"

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No I don't take that as a flame it fact i appreciate the fact that you took the tie to tell me what was wrong. thanks

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no problem...i live to help people...just don't take advantage of that

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