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I sit on my rooftop,
Lost in my thoughts
I stare beyond the horizon,
Watching the Sunset of Solitude

From across the room,
Her smile battles my gloom
I try not to judge,
But my mood won't budge

And then it happens
For a brief moment her giggle disappears
And her smile fades
It's a look of complete fear

Right then is when I finally realize,
She's watching the same Sunset as I.

Very pretty. It is a simple story yet profound in its message. Good poetry, nice story. Nice!

Thanks, I wrote one earlier about someone on this site, but I don't think I should post it

aw thats a great poem

Originally posted by Sweet Escape
Thanks, I wrote one earlier about someone on this site, but I don't think I should post it you should, i dont mind

Mask

Hide your face away
Run away from all your sorrow
Hide behind a mask

Paradise

Heaven,
Paradise in the sky
Heaven,
Where We Go When We Die
Heaven,
Why are you so far away?
Heaven,
Can you even hear what I say?
Heaven,
O how we long to be together
Heaven,
To be united forever
Heaven,
A retreat from the heat
Heaven,
I fear we shall not meet

Cold Marble

Graveyard,
The closest place to hell
Where the dead dwell
Are you lonely as well?

Graveyard,
Your cold tomb
And your empty room
Can you not hide your gloom?

Graveyard,
Your slowly wilting flowers,
Families mourning for hours
Why are you so sour?

Graveyard,
So many faces soaken,
Many words unspoken
How many hearts have you broken?

REDEMPTION

Once I met a perfect person
Once I was taken back by purity
Once I threw ambition into the wind
Once I was led to your doorstep
Once I gave into my heart
Once I fell in love
Once I took a risk
Once we were happy
Once I was the reason for your smile
Once you loved me
Now I solely seek redemption

THE START

There I saw you for the first time
I watched you from a distance
There I built up courage
I finally approached beauty
There we shared our first words
You took my breath away
There we passed countless hours
We grew closer
There I kissed your soft lips
We fell in love
There was just the beginning
Here we start our lives together

All good, except one little tiny thing...

"To put a your label" is not very good English...

Other than that, they are pretty good!

THE PATH

This way
The lonely trail
The long endless path
Bordered with pain and suffering
My way

BLACK

While once openly welcomed,
These colors I turn my back
My eyes cannot stand the sight
All the want is black