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This is where I'll post some of my poetry that I'm working on etc.




Tears falling,
Heart flying,
Sweat dropping,
Mind racing,
World crashing,
Heart breaking,
Time ending,
Hope wating,
Lies unfolding,
Secrets hiding,
Mastakes baring,
Breath taking.


This one was kind of random. I didnt really feel like writing a complete poem. srug

These words you say,
I dont hear them no more,
That always made my day,
Please open the door

You left me out in the rain,
Nothing can explain pain,
Everything you said were lies,
This poem made me cry.


Short Poem.

Another short poem...



The waves wash over the shore,
tumbling over and over again,
the moonlight caresses its shadow,
over the magnificent ocean,
as the journey begins,
A lone star lights the way.

If I said I loved you,
Would it take your breath away,
Or would you ignore me,
Until your tears washed away

Would you swear,
That you'll always be mine,
Or would you run,
Into the dark and hide

When you fall too deep,
And you feel like you've lost your mind,
Just remember I'd do anything,
Just to hold you tonight.

I think your poetry is very beautiful.
The one below is my favorite.
Originally posted by FallenxAngel

If I said I loved you,
Would it take your breath away,
Or would you ignore me,
Until your tears washed away

Would you swear,
That you'll always be mine,
Or would you run,
Into the dark and hide

When you fall too deep,
And you feel like you've lost your mind,
Just remember I'd do anything,
Just to hold you tonight.

Originally posted by TRH
I think your poetry is very beautiful.
The one below is my favorite.

hugThank you.

Another poem:



I'm walking down the road
trying to find somewhere to hide
Still trying to let go
Memories racing through my mind

We were driving down the highway
The moonlight caressing the trees
Lost control
The silent night spreading over seas

Woke up Saturday morning
Wishing you were still here
I cant believe your gone
Trashing bottles of beer

It was supposed to last
But I have to move on
Let go of the past
Time moves so fast
Its like my heart needs a cast
I'm breaking down
This cant be happening
I'm listening but theres no sound
Someone please help me
This is a cry for help
Someone to help me see
'cause I feel so lost
This cant be.

Very nice. Very nice. Your style is your own an you keep it that way, I love you word usage and use of emotion. Lovely.

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Very nice. Very nice. Your style is your own an you keep it that way, I love you word usage and use of emotion. Lovely.
Thank you.

Very nice

I love all your poetry

woody