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Fallen Flower

A single flower falls;
It is a symbol of passion left behind.

Like a demonic plague;
It sweeps love off its feet,
Crushing the soul. The heart.

The flower falls;
It will die as all things do,
Passion to the world of men,
That fades as time goes by.

Fallen flower.

-Kevin Traynor

The Screams

When the screams fill the air;
Only time to run in fear,
No other option but to hear,
We will never march from here.

We wait till daybreak comes;
So we can have another run,
While dodging death like everyone,
And watching time pass with our fun.

Our blood curdles from the fight;
When our bodies quiver with pure fright,
We hope the daybreak lasts all night,
While dark creatures come out to bite.

But night falls once again;
The screams return and cause our strain,
They fill the air with death and pain,
Life and death are both the same.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor (Jedireaper)

This Hollow World

This world is full of billions;
Yet we each are so alone,
We 'pretend friends' and us 'fakers',
We are as hollow as a bone.

And alone we cry at night;
And alone we cry,
Because we are so hollow,
We have nothing left to hide.

In our massive cities;
Everything is a rush,
Never stop to say hello,
No one has time for us.

The way of modern life;
The Computer, our money, a car,
These are but material things that should have no meaning,
But it shows how hollow we as humans are.

As I write this poem;
I think of all my classmates,
Sucked in by money, violence, drugs,
Its them, as hollows, I really hate.

This hollow world.

-Kevin Traynor

Awesome work The second one being my favorite. Good work with them all though

Star Wars Empire version.

Founded through turmoil,
Constituted in fear;
The Galactic Empire started from here.

Constructon is started on the Death Star.

Through assanitations and scandals;
Chancellor Palpatine gambles,
Outlawing the Jedi;
And destroying their Council.

Order 66 is given. The Emperor rises.

And with the Clone Wars widely ended,
And time of chaos supposedly mended;
A a new era had now been rendered;
One of security and peace is tended.

The Empire becomes the official government.

But as the Death Star is near completion;
Rebel systems fear the inclinations,
So they steal plans for that Death Station,
And run from the evil galactic nation.

Darth Vader captures the Tantive IV and Princess Leia.

To Tattooine they fled,
C-3PO & R2-D2 run instead;
The Death Star plans within R2's head,
They find themselves in Luke Skywalker's shed.

Leia is interrogted by Darth Vader.

To Obiwan R2 runs,
Across the desert under twin suns,
The droid is stopped by Luke who clung;
As Sand people attack them with their guns.

Obiwan rescues them and goes to Alderaan.

Caught by the Death Star the Falcon lands,
Obiwan comes up with brilliant escape plan,
Rescue the princess, and find the boss man,
C-3PO stays with the tin can.

Obiwan fights Vader. Han, Luke and Cewie find the princess.

"Get behind me, get behind me!",
Shout Han as he shoots a troopers knee,
Meanwhile Luke looks for Leia's prison key,
The only way to rescue she.

"Down the garbage shute, flyboy."

The walls close in and its goldenrods turn,
Stop the walls before they churn,
They scream and shout not in concern,
3PO thinks they are dead men.

The Falcon heads for Yavin IV.

Obiwan swings his blade,
But years on a desert have made him fade,
Vader clashes with his bionic hands made,
The Force chooses Obiwan for as a comrade.

The Death Star appraches. X-wings rise.

"All wings report in.",
The fighter pilots all sing,
Ready to battle a Death Star and win,
Only most die before ka-pring!

The trench.

Luke use the force,
Don't let Vader change your course,
Stay on target without remorse,
Then fire your torpedos and watch your reverse.

The Death Star Explodes.

Luke, Han and Chewie get their medals,
Music rises as R2 enters,
Cheers rise up and send us nutters,
The credits roll and we feel gutted.

Play Star Wars and have fun,
Special thanks to george Lucas for this one,
Time has passed it will live on,
In every fan, everyone.

-Kevin Traynor

This is very messy and has several story points, that were poetized, cut out for pace and length.

SW is one of those films that doesn't come around often, It is the love we share that that keeps it alive.

This is dedicated to the entire cast and crew of the first Star Wars production.

May they be remembered. And rejoyced.

Star Warsİ 1977-2008 all rights reserved.

EDIT

The Screams II

In the eerie shadows of the night;
The screams they fill the air with fright,
Stopping humans in their sight,
Eclipsing darkness is their right.

When morning comes we try for sure;
To escape this hellish place of lure,
We fight to try and reach the door,
But ungodly forces stop our soar.

When dusk comes all hope is lost;
The dead arise above the moss,
A broken statue of the cross,
Is covered in dripping blood and frost.

The cold night air comes again;
Bringing screams of death and pain,
No-longer will my love remain,
Because I think I've gone insane.

When screams come we run and hide;
From creatures who have gone and died,
Making people want to cry,
Death and fear not pushed aside.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor (Jedireaper)

When a Jedi Falls

When we fight evil,
We fight for justice,
We do not fight for exhilleration,
We do not kill for revenge.

When we do battle,
We battle for the sake of good,
We do not harm needlessly for evil,
We do not fight to end lives.

When we die,
We die with honor,
We do not involve the innocent,
We do not wish revenge.

When a Jedi falls,
These words run through their minds.

-Kevin Traynor

Not my best... duh, but I'm just writing to pass the time.

Consequences of Sin

Stairs up to the stars,
Stairs up to the universe,
They lead to heaven.
Seemingly endless.

They twist and turn,
Spiral and slant,
Changing direction for every pure heart.
Endless.

Sinners try and walk the steps,
Can't keep their balence and fall to their fate,
The Devil looks up hungry for more.
The endless trek.

You keep walking,
Hope you don't fall,
It causes you to think about life, about sin.
Did I sin?

I continue walking,
losing confidance with each step,
My mind races in deep thought, memories of my life passed.
Did I sin?

After hours of climbing you see the light,
But my mind still races as more loose their balence,
I find the answer I seek.
Did I sin? Yes.

I hope against hope I had been forgiven,
My hand becomes shakey,
Tears fill my eyes.
Somehow I knew I hadn't.

And as I fell away from the stairs,
I look up and see the horror in your eyes,
The tears on your face, you knew.
I'm sorry.

Your eye's fill with sorrow as your arm streatches for me,
An unknown force drags me down, faster,
You try and run down the steps to reach me.
Too late.

I'm sorry my love,
But they are my sins,
I can't let you have them.
I fall faster, exceeding the spectrum of light.

Sunddenly... Pain.

Consequences of sin.

-Kevin Traynor

The Screams III

The night passes as before;
The screams are there beyond the door,
Don't look or you will hit the floor,
Our bones shiver to the core.

The sun rises on a new day;
Casting clouds above in bloody rays,
Causing frost to dew away,
Giving right to a new way.

We all fight to stay alive;
Shooting creatures till they're nigh,
As we try to escape the hive,
Olny the time will count us by.

The night falls fast this time around;
Making sure the screams are bound,
While those remaining run to ground,
Hiding from the undead sounds.

Blood drips from my finger tips;
While I look at the dead bodies quick,
The sight of gore making me feel sick,
The blood glistened in my grip.

The pain and screams filled the air;
As another dead night we have to fare,
Blood splattering across my hair,
I bring my weapon down to bear.

Screams ring out in my ears;
Only pain can cause that fear,
I look upon darkness as a peer,
"I hope my time to go ain't here."

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor

=l ...... <=D those are all very good and i especially liked the hollywood one...... kevin?

The Screams IV

This night is tarnished by the dead;
Our screams no-longer being said,
We tried to survive a week of dread,
Our blood pools around us in red.

The ungodly hour of the night;
No-longer held our screams of fright,
Given up with-out a fight,
Finally having lost our might.

The sun rose on the bloody scene;
Shedding light on what had been,
The time passes without a seam,
Like a kind of phycotic dream.

Dusk falls and night arises;
Nothing moves there is no crisis,
Only birds with great likeness,
My eyes snap open with dark brightness.

The call of flesh I can't ignore;
It was something I do not adore,
The hunt begins and dark forces abhor,
Its another night of blood colour.

The screams fill the air again;
Not mine not yours but anothers pain,
See death spattered red with rain,
Yes I definately am insane.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor

=l rp... and nice job with four. really is quite an ending to a one day poem series. wat time is it where you live?

0:44

blinks

wow i love the sin one it made me want to cry thinking of kiki and vrix.

it is 7:47 pm here. that means night time =)

Thanks DB that means alot.

darkxbox: Which one is the hollywood one?

Originally posted by Jedireaper
This Hollow World

This world is full of billions;
Yet we each are so alone,
We 'pretend friends' and us 'fakers',
We are as hollow as a bone.

And alone we cry at night;
And alone we cry,
Because we are so hollow,
We have nothing left to hide.

In our massive cities;
Everything is a rush,
Never stop to say hello,
No one has time for us.

The way of modern life;
The Computer, our money, a car,
These are but material things that should have no meaning,
But it shows how hollow we as humans are.

As I write this poem;
I think of all my classmates,
Sucked in by money, violence, drugs,
Its them, as hollows, I really hate.

This hollow world.

-Kevin Traynor

oh, my bad, didnt look close at the title. <3

Oh! Thanks dude. Actually I made a couple of word and rhryme mistakes. but I'm glad you liked it.

really brings out the essence of todays society and shows what should be changed

yay two pages

Woo! More poetry soon. The Screams V anyone?

gotta go. gnight.

kk g'night.

wow i love the sin one it made me want to cry thinking of kiki and vrix.

woops copied to much

WTF Do you even know who they are?

well kiki is DB's nickname and a character in Vampire rp that died with Vrix in page 513, it was very tragic and touching

Originally posted by darkxbox
=l ...... <=D those are all very good and i especially liked the hollywood one...... kevin? Thats my name. Don't over use it in the RP forum though. Jedi or reaper or Jedireaper is fine.

Sig reader.

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Thats my name. Don't over use it in the RP forum though. Jedi or reaper or Jedireaper is fine. wat about Jr?

:angry: I kill you!!

My Mother Drives Me Mad

God my mother drives me mad,
She really tests my patients,
She goes on and on its so sad,
She could out-talk a bloody nation.

I try to get some peace of mind,
To clear my head and think,
She never lets up at all in kind,
"Kevin, did you clean the sink?"

Its not as though she isn't serious,
Because serious I can take,
Its when she talks about stupid stuff it makes me feel delerious,
So much so I actually want die as is my fate.

But then again as I write this,
Quiet is in the air,
I hiss,
I can't bare.

My calm level is shot to hell,
I take several deep breaths,
"Shut the f**k up!" I yell,
I care less.

"You drove me to near insanity,
I wanted to break your neck,
So simple and easy yes," I laugh manically,
"To shut your voice from in my head." Of course I keep my thoughts in check.

"Mother, you drive me mad."

-Kevin Traynor

Lightsabers

Lightsabers are red,
Lightsabers are blue,
The Force is of beauty;
And so are you.

One Force, Two Sides

The darkness shrouds around the light,
But for two to exist to fight?
No thats wrong it aint right,
Like trying to cantrast day and night.

Light must in turn cause the Dark,
Like how the stars and empty space are stark,
In the Light and Dark both hark;
"User defined just leave your mark."

It is not about which side you choose,
Because of course then you would lose,
I'm not trying to break the rules,
Both Light and Dark Force is a rouse.

Since the Force is all the one,
It's only how you spend that fun,
Try and see beyond the run,
Where Force is bound to show you some.

Just choose your path the change later,
"Anger, fear, aggression, haterid..."

One Force, Two Sides.

-Kevin Traynor

Vanessa

Oh Vanessa your so fine;
I really wish that you were mine,
I watched High School Musical about seventeen times,
Only because the DVD wasn't mine.

Your accident your little slip;
Many actresses have done worse clips,
We your fans remain equipped,
To bring Walt Disney down real quick. (Not legally binding.)

This poem I write to you in good faith;
Don't let foul-ups take your grace,
Your style your stardom don't make hast,
Don't let your career turn to waste.

You sing like an angel would;
Complementing the guy who does Troy good,
You could say we wish you could,
Keep on singing and acting because you're understood.

"V"

-Kevin Traynor

Dedicated to Vanessa Hudgens (Aka: Gabriella Montez in HSM)

Dark Ethics of the Force

In my mind I sense their fear;
Oh my this mean the Dark Jedi are here,
If only I couldn't care,
While the Dark ones whisper in my ear.

I try to fight this pain I feel;
I find it ominous that I yeild,
Only time to fight that Dark guild,
Unfortunately they are all thrilled.

I ignite my saber it gleams blue;
Three light their's "Oh hell, I'm screwed."
Their blood red blades seeming so cruel,
"I'm not looking forward to this deul."

They encircle me as I wait,
Closely watching their mental gait,
The smirk and smile at me, inate,
"I hope this 'Deul' ain't 'of the Fates'."

One leaps forward. "This is it;"
I bring my blue blade up real quick,
Sparks fly as the blades constrict,
"Oh hell no!" I deliver a kick.

I push off him with my foot;
He gives me a sadistic look,
I spin through air to avoid the nook,
As Dark Jedi catch their mook.

They spin and face me, anger welling;
I raise my blade. "Its just beginning."
They rush me their powers swelling,
Red on blue they change the heading.

I batter blades aside to find another;
It was a good thing I didn't know my mother,
My flesh burns as they slash faster,
"Oh please stop. I train harder."

I knock one on his back;
Then use a Force blast to make them whack,
They hit the surrounding walls with quite a thwack,
"Ohh, thats gotta hurt their backs."

I hold my blade upon the first;
"Vengance does not become a Jedi." I give verse.
Then my blade pierces his ostophogus,
I laugh insanely as a slash at the fallen purges.

"Death, destruction... the Darkside are they."
I fall upon my wide eyed prey,
Blood and gore make a spray,
"Well they had their dark day."

Dark Ethics of the Force.

-Kevin Traynor

Not bad. Hollow wood is similar to several poems I wrote all mixed as one. And your "One force Two sides" has inspired me to write about the subject. I'll dedicate it to you...

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Lightsabers

Lightsabers are red,
Lightsabers are blue,
The Force is of beauty;
And so are you. hey you ripped off my splenda one

lol... thanks KoB

Yea well it was better than writing EDIT again.

splenda is red
splenda is blue
splenda tastes like s***
...what =P

Bstrd!

splenda is red
splenda is blue
splenda tastes like s***
what's wrong with you

David Fenta from " Life in the Hazmat Force " his new novel.

(and im a caring bastard)

Uncomplete Soul

Standing alone in the rain,
Feeling miserable, cold, seperate; "Alone."
I see you and a sunbeam breaks through the clouds,
Piercing the darkness at my feet, dry, light, happyness; "Alive."

In my mind I feel alienated,
An empty void that must be filled; "You complete me."
A ravine that I felt would always be impassable,
Now has something to connect its two sides; "A bridge."

A soul alone feeling like a shadow without a physical body,
To drift for enernity against harsh light; "A waste land."
You complete the uncompleted,
Making the harsh light seem soft; "Shade in the desert of my soul."

I thank-you from the bottom of my heart,
Deeper than the shallow pool I thought it was; "An ocean."
My love everlasting into the night,
Feelings entwind with truth; "I love you."

-Kevin Traynor

Dedicated to someone I love. Very much.

Wow, you're pretty awesome. I can't write poetry to save my life, but I can tell you've got a knack for it.

My Love, A Worlds Corner

In this corner of a world of worlds;
I open my eyes to you,
I let you into my soul.

So you can see inside me.
See into my heart.

I open my eyes and let you in;
Invite you to look around,
Allow you to see my inner mind.

What did you find there?
Was it worth it?

I open my eyes to show you;
Everything that I am,
Everything that I could be.

Are you happy?
Are you disappointed?

I close my eyes and block your view;
My little world feels suddenly cold,
The one who would light my soul no-longer there.

Are you gone? I cry tears.
My corner feels so empty.

I open my eyes and blink back the tears;
I see you and I smile as warmth fills my heart,
A light enters my mind and I open my thoughts to you.

You didn't go?
You chose to stay.

I touch the light and let it fill my heart;
Then I hug you, I kiss you,
I missed you.

You are my world.
I love you!

-Kevin Traynor

Dedicated to the one I love!

This Daisy

It was picked from a field,
A field of vibrant white and yellow,
A field of dark green and brown,
This daisy.

It was held in a childs palm,
The sound of laughter and joy,
The essence of youth and innocence,
This daisy.

It was joined by its brothers and sisters,
Under the soft golden sun,
The child making chains of flowers,
This daisy.

The sun sets,
The daisy scattered across the grass,
Bent and torn, the child is gone,
This daisy.

The flower slowly fades with time,
As in all things,
It dies an ungly death,
This daisy.

Forgotten in the mists of time.
It's memory gone.
This... daisy.

-Kevin Traynor

Inspired by my poem 'Fallen Flower' and a conversation I recently had with my love. I dedicate this to the changing world.

True Love

I love you so much I sit in the dark,
I watch the TV with you beside me,
I hug you and kiss you and then more,
I cant explain my feelings to you.

I know that you love me deeply,
I know you know I love you soo much,
I will always have these feelings for you,
I will never hurt you or want to upset you.

I should try and do something with you,
I am sure you are happy but we talk little,
I find your sheer presence a joy,
I express my feelings by hugging you.

I run my finger up your arm and your back,
I smell your skin its like heaven,
I kiss you and never want to leave your side,
I wonder if this is true love?

I feel empty and alone when we are apart,
I feel wholly loved when we are together,
I believe we are the only two people who exist on this planet,
I wish we could always be with each other.

I look into your eyes and I see your love for me,
I gently stroke your hair,
I love you and you love me,
It must be true love.

-Kevin Traynor

The Screams V

The screams return to start our plight;
Making sure our minds aren't right,
Holding grudges against the light,
Our screams being heard again at night.

The undead rise against days mark;
The morning sun's light is stark,
A warning for day un-to dark,
Not even man can stop their lark.

The dead are live upon the day;
It is time for man to pay,
Blood is spilled and people lay,
Screams of frieght now all we say.

Run and hide till dark tides;
Feel their breath on your hide,
Be weary because the dead snide,
They'll eat you even when you cried.

The screams they are all you hear;
Open your eyes up to your fear,
The pain and suffering are always near,
Close your eyes to not be leered.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor

Our First Month

Our first month together,
Time indeed has flown,
I'm sure our love will stand forever,
We will never be alone.

A whole month has gone,
It only feels like a minute ago,
Has it really been that long,
Where did all our time go.

We look into each others eyes,
Time stills for our cause,
We won't cry,
But time has paused.

Will we be standing here again soon,
Together in each others arms,
Treating, as if it is ours, the moon,
Reading out a mystical love psalm.

Our first month.

-Kevin Traynor

nice
i just came up with a poem myself

Post it here if you like...

Our Love Life

My love for you, I know, feels bare;
Because I know you won't be there,
To brighten my day up enough to care,
It is the most important thing we share.

Our love, it binds us from miles away;
It will join our hearts during night and day,
Our minds seek each other out to play,
While our bodies are, ahem, held at bay.

You are so beautiful , others are blind;
They can't see how true beauty is aligned,
I wish to show you 'YOU' through my mind,
I speak truth, listen, I havn't been lying.

You are perfect, the pinnicle of creation;
Yeah it sounds corny, but hey its recreation,
God took his time when he made our nation,
Dont worry about me this ain't a salvation.

My love is buried deep in my heart;
You have the key to its darkest part,
Unlock the secrets, and leave your mark,
Just the same as contrasting light and dark.

I love you and I hope I have your trust;
In my mind I will do what I must,
Like a pizza with that cheesey crust,
I will love you from dawn up un-till dusk.

This poem is corny but it expresses my love;
My love of you, my beautful dove.

Our love life.

-Kevin Traynor

Terrbly rhymy huh? I know it bad. Charlotte, this poem is an apology to you. I'm sorry. xx

Void

Empty darkness smothers light,
us unknowing of it's plight.
Empty space devoid of life,
completely without mortal strife.

Throw a coal into the fire,
so we may escape empire.
We shall run as soon we wake.
Do not bring what you can't take.

David Fenta-
(my pen name)

The Screams VI

Darkness spreads across the land;
Destroying this world we built by hand,
The undead are over taking man,
Even the military won't last to stand.

As time passes so we all die;
The night of dead creatures walking nigh,
I am one of them who strive,
To infect the world with our own to our kind.

Human beings fight for hope;
But they soon learn to hide like a pope,
Nothing will stop our unearthly grope,
The God's themselves can only sob.

I tear into flesh with my teeth;
The coppery taste of blood keeps on my feet,
Its the way they smell that makes us eat,
I rip flesh from the bone, it has a bodies heat.

The day no-longer comes;
Constant darkness numbs our fun,
We hove no-reason to scxream and run,
Because humans do that when we come.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor

Very nice. Was your last poem inspired by a certain game in the UHRP forum shifty?

The Screams series is inspiried by Hazmat but each poem has its individual inspiriation. I-IV so far, are a mix. From Hazmat to Michale Jacksons 'Thriller' To Vampie RP Anyone? to Star Wars: The Great Hunt. My other poems all need re-editing and I cnt do it! Thanks though.

King of Blades

The glint of metal that reflects moonlight,
Two swords are swung in a rythmic fight,
They spark and clang with a users might,
It is only a King of Blades full right.

The fight goes on and one will lose,
Be it an arm or leg or head forbading booze,
A fighter of ages, to prepare his moves,
Only a King of Blades will counts his grooves.

Knives, swords and daggers too,
Dripping blood, pierced fleshly tool,
Best stand clear or you're a fool,
A King of Blades will never stop or stall.

Dodges and dives to stay alive,
The glinting weapons can end many a life,
The cold metal glints, creates a hive,
Of scum a villany, the King of Blade's never die.

King of Blades.

-Kevin Traynor

What you think?

This is going in my sig rock

Glad you liked it! :Happy Dance:

meh, call me a critic, but i think it could use a little more pacing and rythm. very good though.

Thanks I guess.

My True Love

My true love;
You are so beautiful.
I tell you all the time,
Yet you refuse to believe me.
Are you blind?

My true love;
Why deny your beauty?
Like an angel who doesn't want wings,
You will never reach heavenly heights.
Yet I hope you do.

My true love;
If only you could see through my eyes.
I would show how beautiful you really are,
How perfectly beautiful a being you are.
It's how I percieve you.

My true love;
In my eyes, you are perfect.
My heart beats faster whenever I see you,
Surely you can't deny how I feel.
My feelings are always growing stronger.

My true love;
I love you so much.
When we are together,
I am so happy and thrilled.
Yet we are being kept apart and my heart aches.

My love;
You know how I feel.
I think you are the best,
I will always be there for you.

I love you beyond any measurable scope,
Beyond the pure and simple,
Beyond intelligible understanding,
Beyond anything I can think of.

Put blankly:


You are;
My true blue love.

I love you.

-Kevin Traynor

no offense to those with hiv and aids

aids are red
aids are blue
have hiv
aids will kill you

david fenta-

Originally posted by Jedireaper
The Screams

When the screams fill the air;
Only time to run in fear,
No other option but to hear,
We will never march from here.

We wait till daybreak comes;
So we can have another run,
While dodging death like everyone,
And watching time pass with our fun.

Our blood curdles from the fight;
When our bodies quiver with pure fright,
We hope the daybreak lasts all night,
While dark creatures come out to bite.

But night falls once again;
The screams return and cause our strain,
They fill the air with death and pain,
Life and death are both the same.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor (Jedireaper)

I love this one,zack is behind me and he is palying gutiar which would make a perfect song if you turned it into it
=]
Its like wow =]

Love the poetry..keep it uppp

Originally posted by Jedireaper
My Mother Drives Me Mad

God my mother drives me mad,
She really tests my patients,
She goes on and on its so sad,
She could out-talk a bloody nation.

I try to get some peace of mind,
To clear my head and think,
She never lets up at all in kind,
"Kevin, did you clean the sink?"

Its not as though she isn't serious,
Because serious I can take,
Its when she talks about stupid stuff it makes me feel delerious,
So much so I actually want die as is my fate.

But then again as I write this,
Quiet is in the air,
I hiss,
I can't bare.

My calm level is shot to hell,
I take several deep breaths,
"Shut the f**k up!" I yell,
I care less.

"You drove me to near insanity,
I wanted to break your neck,
So simple and easy yes," I laugh manically,
"To shut your voice from in my head." Of course I keep my thoughts in check.

"Mother, you drive me mad."

-Kevin Traynor


Amazing
love it
10/10

Thanks!

Playstation 3

Its made out of chips,
This sillicone beast,
Can pump out graphics,
Much faster than X-box 360 at least.

It sucks up the juice,
Its power usage is high,
An X-box 360 I have yet to use,
Still I cant decide on which one to buy.

It annoys me that I only want it for one game,
Grand Theft Auto 4 is all I want to play,
An X-box 360 I'm sure is to blame,
Because graphics are the same on PS3 I say.

Why bother, in the end it aint worth it.

-Kevin T

I'm Stuck For Words

When ever your near my mind it goes blank,
My heart beats like I have a feaver,
There is nothing to say that you dont already know.

You know I love you,
You know that my feelings are unyielding,
You know I love Star Wars too,
But I know that you love me.

We find it hard to talk,
But I just love to hear you speak,
And that works the otherway around for you,
I live for you.

You complete me,
You are my love, the only one I want,
I want no other. What talking we can do will come with time.

I love you, if only in so many ways.

-Kevin Traynor

very nice

Originally posted by darkxbox
no offense to those with hiv and aids

aids are red
aids are blue
have hiv
aids will kill you

david fenta-

Reply to AID's Rhyme

AID's is serious,
Your rhyme was cruel,
You make me furious,
I may just kill you.

Its a touchy subject,
People have died,
HIV's a killer,
Your poem was snide.

Sexually transmitted infections,
They aren't a joke,
How could you make fun,
Are you some dope.

People on drugs,
They have a problem,
Then its the results, the consequences,
Death.

Don't make fun.

A reply to AID's rhyme.

-Kevin Traynor

Kick ass=]

I Guess I Miss You

These feelings I have,
Are because of you,
I give you my heart,
Please dont be cruel.

You are like a drug,
You are my insomnia,
Sleepless nights when I think of you,
I just cant get enough.

I look up to you,
I feel you are superior to me in every way,
I want you to see me,
See me as I try and measure up.

I want to make you happy,
It is my goal to see your smile,
To hear you laugh,
I dont care about myself.

When we are together,
I feel we could do anything,
Like the world is at our feet,
Time, even, seems to last forever.

But out time together,
It never lasted long enough,
It felt like an eternity,
But passed too quickly.

My eyes miss seeing you,
My heart beats out for you,
My mind it knows of your absence,
I miss being with you I guess.

You make me happy,
I pray that I make you so,
I cant wait till we are together again,


I still love you.

-Kevin Traynor

For my love, again.... Charlotte! xxxxxxx

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Thanks!

Playstation 3

Its made out of chips,
This sillicone beast,
Can pump out graphics,
Much faster than X-box 360 at least.

It sucks up the juice,
Its power usage is high,
An X-box 360 I have yet to use,
Still I cant decide on which one to buy.

It annoys me that I only want it for one game,
Grand Theft Auto 4 is all I want to play,
An X-box 360 I'm sure is to blame,
Because graphics are the same on PS3 I say.

Why bother, in the end it aint worth it.

-Kevin T

I'm Stuck For Words

When ever your near my mind it goes blank,
My heart beats like I have a feaver,
There is nothing to say that you dont already know.

You know I love you,
You know that my feelings are unyielding,
You know I love Star Wars too,
But I know that you love me.

We find it hard to talk,
But I just love to hear you speak,
And that works the otherway around for you,
I live for you.

You complete me,
You are my love, the only one I want,
I want no other. What talking we can do will come with time.

I love you, if only in so many ways.

-Kevin Traynor

word on the ps3, besides, u can get gta 4 on xbox 360 too

more games for the 360 too

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Reply to AID's Rhyme

AID's is serious,
Your rhyme was cruel,
You make me furious,
I may just kill you.

Its a touchy subject,
People have died,
HIV's a killer,
Your poem was snide.

Sexually transmitted infections,
They aren't a joke,
How could you make fun,
Are you some dope.

People on drugs,
They have a problem,
Then its the results, the consequences,
Death.

Don't make fun.

A reply to AID's rhyme.

-Kevin Traynor

oh, and alsoit's people's own fault for using the same needle as someone else, or not using a condom.

Thanks!

Adrenalin Rush, then Suicide

In the heat of battle,
The blood runs high,
Time seems to slow.
Almost euphoric.

You feel your heart thump,
Faster and faster,
Time slows.
We just get quicker.

Your mind races,
It spins around,
Thoughts in total chaos.
The bloody battle.

People die in war-time,
They die in times of peace too,
Nothing can hinder that.
The fight.

To extend our lives?
No we shouldn't,
It would up-set natures balence.
The most evil thing ever created was man.

As time passes,
We too shall go,
I take my final breath.
A bullet then death.

-Kevin Traynor

your poems are good, however reading them is a little tricky.
They dont flow as well as perhaps they could. but maybe thats just me, I dunno nice work tho.

I am aware of that, I havn't written poetry in 2 months...

The Rain

I remember that night,
All those years ago.
The rain was dark,
I wanted to cry.

I looked at your face,
Seeing you last breath of life.
The rain was heavy,
I wanted to scream.

Your blood was on my hands,
But you smiled at me.
The rain was cold,
I wanted to shiver.

I had taken your life,
Yet you were not angry.
The rain was loud,
I wanted to speak.

All I meant was to save you,
But your selfish pride kept me from you.
I wanted you to survive,
The rain.

- Kevin Traynor

Ah, nice!

it has a better rythem, and its more of a spoken word theme, I like the way that each verse is short and curt.
There is really good imagery here and its just plain and simple

I really love the 3rd and 4th verses, its something about them that really sticks in my mind.

This is a piece to be proud of.

The Reborn Phantom

A ghost of the night,
This etherial spirit;
A wondering soul,
Lost to endless days.

A whisper of thought,
But a breeze in lifes passage;
A mere faceless haunter,
Not of mind but of soul.

A coming of age,
Did this person die before time;
Restless walking without retort,
The living shrine.

An end of one life,
A stoppage of time;
The clock ticks by,
And forgotten this soul fades.

A new way,
The path of adventure;
When sun's rise over fresh horizions,
The everlasting testiment of evolution.

The spark of life,
A newborn taking its first steps;
Learning new ways,
A baby growing in body and mind.

The reborn phantom.

- Kevin Traynor

Two poems in one! Enjoy...

beautiful

Ah, now you've got me! I cant quite grasp this one gonna need a little help, bit is cool I like mysteries

A spirit that is wondering finally passes on, then is reborn again as a child. Honestly it was gonna be two seperate poems but I had WB while writing it so I bodged them together quite well I think.

reincarnaton, yeah.

sorry I'm having a stupid day