One Mile Till Mayport

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ESB -1138
Alright so I started song writing and since songs are musical poems I figured I would post some of them so you can tell me what needs improving. Please be critical and I will tell you which ones I started with lyrics first or music first.

Alright this first one is called Elijah and I started with the lyrics and currently it has no melody or music:

Elijah is a servant of the Lord on high,
Though at times he wants to just break down and die.
He thinks he's on his own,
But Elijah you are never alone.
Elijah it is time for you to fly.

And Elijah shall spread the sea,
And Elijah shall raise the dead,
And Elijah shall set you free,
And Elijah shall will heal your head,

Can't you see
He is Elijah

Elijah sees the coming of the end,
But when one journey stops another will surely begin.
Elisha will always stay,
He will never run away,
Elijah it is time for you to ascend.

And Elijah shall spread the sea,
And Elijah shall raise the dead,
And Elijah shall set you free,
And Elijah shall will heal your head,

Can't you see
He is Elijah

Alright there it is. Please state what you truly think and don't just be nice. I want to make sure these lyrics are as good as possible before I start putting them to music.

ESB -1138

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