The Twilight Saga Fanfiction/after Breaking Dawn
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OKEY I DECIDEDTO POST A STORY FOR THE TWILIGHT SAGA HERE ITS CONTINUED FROM BREAKING DAWN ITS GOING TO BE QUITE DARK WITH THE ADDED HUMOUR FOR IT GOING TO BE GOOD AND I WILL UPDATE ALOT.
THE CULLEN COTTAGE
it was a cloudy morning, bella was feeding renessmee deer blood that edward brought back ,she seemed to be wanting blood as well as human food as she was half human/half vampire, renesmee seemed to be growing more rapidly than a normal infant would ,but she is not your everday infant, she already was developing super-human powers, able having heightened awareness, and intuition.she had a strong bond already with bella her mother, and her father edward.
they both were doting parents, edward in particular was very protective and caring over his daughter, after all he never expected to end up with a famiy of his own, he had a beautiful wife' his beloved bella strong in beauty as well as power and a beautiful daughter. he felt he could relax a bit now that their seemed to be peace that didn't stop him worrying he knew that the volturi wouden't entirely leave them to it not really after all it was only reluctance that stopped them for now he didn't let on to his fears to bella. he was always a private person in that way instead choosing to suss out others as he had strong mind-reading ability which allowed him to do so, and only could he read bella's mind was only cause she let down her mental-shield which allowed him to finally read her mind. bella had adapted so well to being a vampire graceful. extremely beautiful, and now a full-time mother to her daughter she was one of the most powerful vampires its was as she put it meant to be or born to be a vampire.
there was a knock on the door, bella answered it rosalie had come round, rosalie was almost a second mother to renessmee she did take over as mother for a while after bella was adjusting to being a vampire. she loved renessmee not having a child of her own she wanted to be part of renessmee's life as much as possible. bella was always grateful for rosalie help as she got to do things as rosalie acts as a baby-sitter.
morning bella i know its early but, her attension turned towards renessmee who was already smiling at rosalie, oh shes having a feed do you mind if i, oh yes sure i don't mind' bella said rosalie walked toward renesmee as started feeding her with enthusiasm. so bella turning her head but not too much as to take the focus of renessmee' is edward not here', bella nodded' no hes gone on a hunt, renessmee feeding more frequent so edward has to hunt more for food to keep her satisfied shes eats alot smiling at rosalie' well shes growing baby rosalie said smiling.
meanwhile edward was moving like lightspeed through the woods the scent of the moving deer was strong edward was getting ready to time his attack just right sitting on a tree his eyes changing like a predator ready to pounce on its victim he was just about to move upon the gentle deer when something scared it away '' a wolf moving slowly, browsing to mark its territory aware of the vampire in the tree, ''edward jumped down landing perfect on the ground '' the wolf looked at the vampire for a minute then it started to slowly change form into a human'' both looked at each other for a brief moment, then edward broke the silence between them'' hi jacob.
TO BE CONTINUED ..................................
im going to be changing the arrangement a little bit into more like script form not too much though so that its easier to read expecially between key characters and when the fights and things start to happen
its going to get very interesting if you wanna comment then go ahead.
THE CULLENS COTTAGE
Back at the cullens cottage Renesmee was looking at Rosalie and touched her transferring her thoughts to Rosalie.
Rosalie gasped and said
''I forgot you can do that and yes im treating you as if you were a baby
im sorry i guess i just see you as a baby and to make it up to you i brought you a new book '' handing the book to Renesmee.
Renesmee took the book and said
Oh thank you rosalie i love reading ,as you can see father won't let me hunt so early in the morning and i can feed myself you fuss over me as much as my mother and father.
Rosalie looked at her for a while then said
Its only cause they care for you we all do, we forget that your growing and maturing its what families do nessie.
KEEPING YOU UP TO DATE REVIEW
as you can see renesmee displays imence intelligence if you have read the book breaking dawn then you will remember that renesmee can read,hunt,talk, can penetrate mental shields and can just by touching someone she can transfer her thoughts and communicate to them, with the age it said that by the time shes 7 years old she will be have the physical appearance of a 17 year old then after will stop ageing im guessing now shes around 1 year old= 11 years old physical appearance shes really only a year old with the appearance of a 11 year old took ages to work it out lol.
JOIN IN IF YOU WANT
okey if you want to join in then you can, but carry it on from the cullen cottage and finish off the part there then flip back to the woods where edward and jacob are remember that these two am not going to be pally with each other but do have respect so a bit of tension stands between them after all jacob has put an imprint on renesmee meaning now shes his soul-mate.
but first the cullen house where bella,rosalie and renesmee are.
THE CULLEN COTTAGE CONTINUED....
Renesmee was admiring the book that Rosalie had given to her moments ago, and then said
''i know rosalie but still i am very capable and can do things for myself''
bella was overhearing the conversation between Renesmee and Rosalie thinking that it was nice that they were so close and that her daughter could speak for herself even for one so young, she then turned away and looked out the window wondering when her husband would get back he had been gone for a few hours now.
BACK AT THE WOODS..
''Hello edward (looking directly into the vampire's golden eyes)
it seems my presence interrupted your hunt, my apologies for that
i was merely browsing and having a morning run, i move alot faster when i shift into my wolf form usually i don't get disturbed when i do.
Edward continued looking at Jacob then said
'Then i leave you to it i can still smell the deer's scent so its not far so i get home bye for now.
Edward went to leave but then Jacob called out
''how's Bella and nessie? i haven't visited them for a while how they doing?
Edward turned around and said
''Their both doing fine and Renesmee is growing more each day and her intelligence is astonishing she speak's with such maturity for one so young, you should come by sometime im sure bella would appreciate it.
Jacob looked taken surprised that edward would willingly invite him to his cottage.
''alright then i will stop by this afternoon.
Edward then nodded and then ran fast like a blur into the same direction that the deer went.
Jacob continued to look in the direction that Edward went, thinking outloud
'' hmm like i need his permission to go see Bella and Nessie anyway i can see them whenever i want (shaking in head) should of said that to him.
Jacob then shifted back into his wolf-form and headed in the opposite direction to where Edward went.
THE VOLTURI, LOCATION VOLTERRA ITALY.......
THE VOLTURI CHARACTER INFORMATION
The vampire coven known as the Volturi resides in Volterra, Italy. They are regarded as "royalty" by other vampires because they have lived for well over three thousand years and act as police, enforcing the rule that vampires' existence remain a secret from humans. They often send others to travel from Volterra to prevent overzealous covens and renegade vampires from exposing their kind. They are guarded by several powerful vampires who have been recruited for their powers and skills. Carlisle once stayed with the coven as a guest, but left due to his desire to avoid harming humans and established his own coven in the United States. At the end of New Moon, the Volturi discover that Bella, a human, has learned that vampires exist and demand that she become a vampire or else be killed. In Breaking Dawn, the vampire Irina goes to the Volturi and warns them that the Cullens have created an immortal child after seeing Edward and Bella's daughter, Renesmee, hunting close the Cullens' house. The Volturi coven travel to Forks to destroy Renesmee, but leave once they realize that she poses no threat.
The Volturi leaders include Aro, who can read every thought a person has ever had once he has made physical contact, Marcus, who senses relationships, and Caius, who has no known power. Aro's wife, Sulpicia, Caius' wife, Athenodora, and formerly Marcus' wife, Didyme, who had the power to make others happy, also act as leaders. The Volturi guard consists of 32 members, including Jane, who creates illusions of pain; Alec, who is able to block the others' senses; Demetri, who can track anyone once he has the tenor of their mind; Chelsea, who can change emotional bondings; and Renata, who can make anyone feel distracted and wandering when they are near her (classified as a "shield"
. The majority of the Volturi remain nameless throughout the series. There is also a human secretary named Gianna who appears in New Moon. Despite her hopes to become a vampire, she is killed by the Volturi by the events of Breaking Dawn. The Volturi have invited Carlisle, Edward, Alice, Kate, Benjamin, Zafrina, and Bella to join them, though all have refused.
You should space out your story more. At first when I read the title...I was like finally a Twilight story on KMC. You also need to post more in some posts. Also, I think it would help a lot of people if you wrote CHAPTERS instead of just one to five (1-5) paragraphs per post.
Again great start. Can't wait for more.
Aside from what giggles said i think its a good story as well and i can't wait till you post more good twist and clever what you have done with Renesmee like speeding up her physical growth can't wait to see edwards reaction and jacobs lol.
UPDATES AND RESPONSE
Thanks for your feedback i didn't think anyone liked what i was writing i mean i was getting views but no comments so thanks for that i will space my words alot more and write more in my posts as well i will be writing some more maybe a bit later tommorow the latest.
Keep up the good work
reneseme is being too formal with her father.
there is reasons for her being formal first of she has respect for both her parents, and also shes not your everyday girl either, and lastly she has an understanding and maturity that you wouldn't expect in one so young she knows that her father has only her best interests at heart and she respects that and shows it to him however i have mentioned that her emotions and hormones am also developing just as quick as her physicaL and mental pace and her feelings am going to intensify expecially towards jacob so this might possibly put a strain on her family if her loyalty should ever be put to her test expecially when her budding friendship blossoms into deep love. anyway while we on the subject of characters you might of noticed how im bringing in characters gradually instead of all at once and i didn't want to bring in characters too soon and quickly so that's why im pacing them out and all the cullens, the blacks, charlie swan, the clearwaters, ive already brought in the volturi ive touched on them a bit im not even going to proclaim that im in the same league as stephanie meyer cause im not, im just putting my own stamp on it and getting into all the characters and put myself in their situation and how they would react to things and how they would feel that kinda thing ive got some really good ideas for this and i am going to use them and for the story well lol i say story probably end up being a novel and im definately going to keep at it i am grateful for the feedback and your comments good and bad cause i like to know what you think so i can try and make the story really good for you that's all i want
and i have forgot to put chapters in so i will be writing what chapter im on so that you know what's what lol don't wanna confuse you.
I WILL BE ADDING SOME MORE A BIT LATER.
this is an image of Renesmee so you can get a little glimpse of how she might look.
I really am liking your story so far i have noticed the odd spelling mistake, but apart from that its very good keep it up :-D
sorry it took so long to post i had the chicken-pox which aint pleasant so will be updating a lot now that im better.
i will be posting some more later today and the two people that have spotted Renesmee and Jacob am Alice and Jasper
So how am you liking it so far ? i will be adding some more a bit later
okay ive been busy i will definetley post tommorow the latest
Jacob quickly removed himself from Renesmee's embrace and looked
flustered that he allowed himself to get carried away like that "We shouldn't of got so carried away Jacob said he then stood up.Renesmee looked a bit taken back like she had done something wrong 'Jake have i done something to make you angry with me I'm sorry for allowing myself to give into my feelings for you I'm not a little girl anymore Jake " Renesmee replied with a pleading voice, Jacob turned to her" i know nessie but if you were a normal girl you would still be a little girl not as their is anything wrong with you please don't take that the wrong way its just, He then paused and refrained from saying anything further that would upset her "Look I think we should head back Its getting late anyway " Renesmee was finding it hard tocontrol the stem of tears that were appearing in her eyes after all she couldn't help the way she felt it was new to her but couldn't help it she was in love with Jacob "Okay we will head home if that is what you wish so erm lets go" she moved rather quickly trying to avoid making eye contact with Jacob.
i might restart this again, i have got a roleplay up for this in the unhosted now and it will be ten different to how i write it in here. so i am going to start again with this i think.
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