Mortal Kombat vs Marvel Super Heroes (the story)

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rox
Its my first story so be a little easy one me, but still give your opinion.


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Malk
Hmm... It's good^^ I don't really have any pointers, I have a critique though..

Instead of using

Name: <speech>

Use "Speech" Name Said, or something similar.

BruceSkywalker
interesting so far keep it going

I-Drop
Good for a 1st try. Could be longer & there are some small errors in grammar.

mkp123
It will be natural to feel quite apprehensive when you are writing your first novel. We will be eager to find the opinions by the readers. Marvel Super Heroes is the name of the story. The story is written in the form of small chapters which makes it quite easy to read. Some modifications have been suggested to improve the level of writing. The story is about a group of fighters known as the Marvel Super Heroes.

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