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please give some good critiques and say whatever u think we should change becuz i desperately wish for ur comments

The plot is good and the general story could be developed into a really good book but you are correct about your writing. I think you need to list your characters and the parts they play plus an overall plot. You also need to consider what questions the reader will want answered such as the role the beasts and blue guardians play both on earth and between each other, and why they are interested in our planet. have a think and put it on this thread