First "serious" video editing attempt. How can it be better?

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slupo
This is a first "serious" video editing attempt. It's a Top 50 singles video. How can I make it better?

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Thanks in advance.
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ThorinWoofer
Don't put rihanna in it, that's how you make it better.

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