Palpatine vs. Valkorion Fanfiction

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The Ellimist
This was an unusually tenacious one.

He had expected some measure of trembling, fear, dread. True, there had been many enemies who had boasted and puffed before his presence, but Valkorion was fooled not by outward gestures. He could see into their hearts, and in their hearts, even the grandest Jedi and Sith secretly wished fervently with every fiber of their being that they had rather never been born than be before the Emperor as an enemy. For they knew what awaited them; an eternity of suffering as a disembodied prisoner in his being.

Yet Sidious's crackled laughter displayed no such deception. Beyond his shell Valkorion saw nothing but a dark, terrifying blackness, a whirling vortex of the dark side of the Force. A walking embodiment of the dark side that would no sooner kneel before the Eternal Emperor than play politics with an amoeba. Powerful.

A threat.

Sidious's bellowing laughter eventually faded, and he finally spoke. "You have grown old and naive, Valkorion." No amusement was present in his tone, merely condescension. "Fool. You were a powerful Sith in your time, but you have been surpassed. You have become a relic."

Valkorion slowly turned his back to Sidious in the meanwhile, hoping to bide time for his attack and he carefully weighed his options. However much power this Sith embodied, Valkorion still sat near his Eternal Throne, on the strongest nexus of the dark side to have ever existed, twisted and corrupted through sorcery to add to only the power of his own - and drain the power of all others. He only needed to stall.

"Do not try to play games with me." Darth Sidious then began to draw out his words in a high pitched, disturbing melody. "You may not stall your inevitable suffering - yes, you wanted to stall, did you not? Your thoughts betray you Lord Vitiate. And now, you too, will die."

Valkorion had neither the desire nor ability to wait any longer. He swiftly spun around to face Sidious and threw his hands around, unleashing all of the energies he had been quietly gathering for weeks leading to the confrontation in the form of a pure expression of the dark side. Brilliant, purple lightning flashed across the space between the two vessels of the dark, the screams and hatred of the thousands of Jedi and Sith and trillions of sentient beings from which the lightning drew echoing into chaos.

The walls and floor of the station burned and crumbled. Smoke appeared, masking the charred remains of the Throne. And for the first time, the reserved Valkorion let out a guffaw of sheer relief and joy. It was a laughter so fierce, he doubled over in pain, unable to control his bliss. No, there was no sith to compare to the Eternal Emperor. He was unchallenged, and would remain so, forever.

In the meanwhile, Valkorion wished not to merely kill Palpatine - that would be too merciful, and a waste of perfectly good Force power. He probed into the fog, reaching his vision into Chaos, seeking to capture Sidious's spirit and pull it into the claws of agony. With Palpatine within his own spirit, railing against eternal agony, Valkorion's power would grow to unimaginable heights. One step closer to challenging the Anchorite.

He reached into the Force. Instead, he sensed a singularity of the dark side. Alive, amused, and merciless. Palpatine.

Valkorion did not wait, did not hesitate. His reflexes had improved over years of war - he immediately flung a blast of lightning from his fingertips - only to see a faint shadow of a specter dance around his periphery. When he spun, he was stopped midway by an unbearable force constricting his neck.

The force turned him ever so slightly to the left, where he stared in horror at the face of Darth Sidious.

"I will kill you, Lord Valkorion. But your suffering is just beginning."

Valkorion threw everything he had ever learned at The Shadow. Dark tentacles wrapped themselves around Sidious's form, but fell off with no effect. Beasts of pure dark side energy were eviscerated as soon as they materialized. Brilliant blasts of the dark side smashed against Sidious but bounced aside affecting nothing.

"You know nothing of the dark side of the Force. I will grant you the experience of the true harbinger of darkness."

And so Valkorion's last mortal moments were of a massive, terrifying giant of a creature, appearing as a deformed owl taller than the entire station, scorched in blackness and descending upon Valkorion's figure. The Eternal Emperor let out a scream and a cry for mercy before being engulfed in darkness.

He was nothing against The Shadow. Valkorion faced the grand being of evil. The most powerful Sith Lord to have ever lived. The dark side incarnate. He was nothing, and doomed from the start.

Valkorion feared death as much as any being. Now, he knew that he would never experience the immortality he had wished for. But, perhaps he could summon a few pieces of tranquility from this rage. As his spirit faded, he solaced in his long years of life. He would not live forever, but he had lived long, and now would enjoy the blissful surrender of death.

As if reading his thoughts, Palpatine - as if his mortal name suited the sentient swirl of the Force he had become - echoed a cruel laughter. "Did I not tell you that your suffering would not end?"

And so Valkorion did not feel his soul dissipate into the mist. He instead felt it held together by the will of Palpatine. Then he exploded into agony. Pure, unadulterated, infinite pain. Yet he did not lose his sanity - Palpatine was sure of that. The spirit that was once Valkorion felt unimaginable torment and retained the wits to contemplate his fate. How long had passed since the last happy thought of his mortal life, a brief candle of happiness before the long eternity of damnation? A hundred years? Ten thousand? A trillion? He did not know, nor did he have the time to consider it. For now his world was the inner mind of Darth Sidious, and the torture from which he would draw his power. Eternal darkness.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Lmfao. smile

carthage
Merchants gay Sheev solos

Darth Abonis
You are a talented writer. Keep writing, that was great.

FreshestSlice
how does an immortal being who does not feel feel pain and then go through mortal moments? Shit-tier fanfic, 0/10

Syndicate
This was actually a pretty enjoyable read tbh.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Also, it's The Immortal Emperor, not whatever you kept referring to him as. smile

FreshestSlice
Also the Eternal Throne is not a nexus in any shape or form. uhuh

The Merchant
Palpatine crashed his lips against Valkorions own, his tongue entering the hot confines of the ancient Man's mouth.

Syndicate
Palpatine new instantly that his newest lover was far more experienced then any that had come before. Though, that was to be expected when said lover was thousands of years old.

JKBart
Pretty noice, quality depiction of suffering, very suggestive smilesmile

S_W_LeGenD
You have the writing skills but this is a pathetic story.

2/10

2 for good writing skills.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
LMFAO.

LeG pleases me. smile

FreshestSlice
He has his uses for the cause.

S_W_LeGenD
Story continued...

Or so the Shadow thought...

Laughter erupted and caught the Shadow by surprise.

The Shadow was trying to assess the situation when an explosion of Dark Side energy - the likes of he had never felt before - knocked him out for a while. When he woke up, he noticed Valkorion standing 20 feet away, but he felt dazed.

"How could you do that?" (Palpatine)

"I was testing you." (Valkorion)

"But I had just destroyed you... Enslaved you." (Palpatine)

"Those were illusions, you idiot." (Valkorion)

"They believe that you are the most powerful Sith in history. I am here to change this.: (Valkorion)

"No, you can't." (Palpatine)

A torrent of Force Lightning came towards Valkorion but he stood his ground, hands facing the incoming onslaught, catching the bolts. The Force Lightning swirled around him, attempting to destroy his defenses, but Valkorion was too powerful... And Immortal... Conventional methods would not stop him.

Valkorion absorbed the bolts successfully...

The onslaught stopped. The Shadow felt outmatched.

"I have more then one technique at my disposal." (The Shadow said)

"Deal with this first." (Valkorion replied)

A maelstrom of Dark Side energy came towards the position of the Shadow; a beam of Dark Side energy within the center and tentacles all around it - swirling towards the poor target...

The Shadow raised his hands to block the power but it engulfed him and began to boil him; the temperature swelled to a thousand degrees and pain could not be described in words. Palpatine felt his will erode and soul wither but he had to sustain this barrage or else...

Suddenly the barrage stopped. And the Shadow collapsed on the ground, badly burned and bruised, but still alive. The Shadow mustered enough strength to look at the aggressor - Valkorion - and attempted to utter some words but the latter cut his response off...

"I have a proposal. Accept my superiority and become my vessel. Together, we can rule the galaxy virtually unopposed." (Valkorion)

"I don't bend the knee to anyone. I am the Emperor." (Palpatine)

The Shadow voice echoed and with it emerged a wave of Dark Side energy that hit Valkorion in the chest. The impact sent Valkorion flying across the hall but he managed to perform maneuvers to halt his flight and landed on the ground.

"You are more powerful then I had originally presumed. My offer stands. Accept it or die." (Valkorion)

The Shadow was too proud and confident in his abilities to accept the offer. He was on his feet now. And calculating his options. He thought about calling upon the Force Storm. The end of it all.

However, he didn't realize that his effort to bind Valkorion to his mind had forged a bond between them... Valkorion had been reading his thoughts.

A thundering blast came towards the Shadow - his eyes went wide as it approached - and hit him square in the chest. The blast shook the foundations of the arena. And the Shadow lay motionless on the ground, badly injured... and quiet possibly dead...

But this was not the end for the Shadow because he also had learned the secrets of immortality. His essence was there and emerged from the destroyed corpse!

"You underestimated me yet still." (Palpatine)

"No! Not this time." (Valkorion)

Valkorion raised his hands and unleashed a manifestation of Dark Side energy but this manifestation was strange. It began to suck nearby objects into it. The Shadow's essence felt being pulled into this strange manifestation - a void? a blackhole? He attempted to resist but it was futile effort.

"You missed your chance. Now, you will be destroyed. For good." (Valkorion)

Valkorion did not waste any further moment and quickly teleported himself into an unknown realm, much away from this one.

The manifestation of the Dark Side energy grew more powerful as it attempted to suck everything in its path. The arena began to buckle and collapse as the manifestation began to suck its parts. The Shadow's efforts were in vain as well, the pull was too strong. In his final moments, he cursed the day he was born. But his destiny was an endless void and utter annihilation.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Originally posted by XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
LMFAO.

LeG pleases me. smile

S_W_LeGenD
pizza

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Anyone as of right now who hates LeG needs to end their pointless existence. smile

Beniboybling
Originally posted by FreshestSlice
Also the Eternal Throne is not a nexus in any shape or form. uhuh Erm...

http://i.imgur.com/2prOWgd.jpgOriginally posted by XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Anyone as of right now who hates LeG needs to end their pointless existence. smile Assuming they haven't already died from cancer having read that post. smile

ILS
"They believe that you are the most powerful Sith in history. I am here to change this.: (Valkorion)

"No, you can't." (Palpatine)

A torrent of Force Lightning came towards Valkorion but he stood his ground, hands facing the incoming onslaught, catching the bolts. The Force Lightning swirled around him, attempting to destroy his defenses, but Valkorion was too powerful... And Immortal... Conventional methods would not stop him.

Top kek

Beniboybling
Originally posted by ILS
Conventional methods would not stop him. My favourite part lmao

EmperorSidious2
Originally posted by Darth Abonis
You are a talented writer. Keep writing, that was great.

S_W_LeGenD
laughing out loud

Look at the reactions of Palpatine-wankers! I treated Palpatine as a respectable foe in my fanfic unlike the sheer (one-sided) wankery for a single character in the first post. The original post gives the impression of some kind of Palpatine porn flick or something.

FreshestSlice
Originally posted by Beniboybling
Erm...
Zakuul is a nexus. The Eternal Throne is a giant control station for the Fleet. That Vitiate built. And it's pretty much in outer space. Good job, Beni. Now, go back to reading what the OP said about it draining all life and being a twisted mass of evil if you want something to critique.

The_Tempest
Originally posted by FreshestStrap
Zakuul is a nexus. The Eternal Throne is a giant control station for the Fleet. That Vitiate built. And it's pretty much in outer space. Good job, Beni. Now, go back to reading what the OP said about it draining all life and being a twisted mass of evil if you want something to critique.

The Eternal Throne which occupies a building on the aforementioned nexus? Not sure what outer space has to do with anything, since nexuses have factually existed in the naked vacuum before.

FreshestSlice
The planet is a nexus. The Throne is not. You






























The point.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
It's a balanced nexus anyways, so who cares? smile

The_Tempest
Originally posted by FreshestStrap
The planet is a nexus. The Throne is not. You






























The point.

Yeah, I forgot that the Force can't permeate walls or atmosphere. Clearly not a nexus.

FreshestSlice
You've become weak, Tempest. To think you once were this forum's father. Now? Just dust.

The_Tempest
Originally posted by FreshestSlice
You've become weak, Tempest. To think you once were this forum's father. Now? Just dust.

Assuming that's true, the fact that you still can't beat me should bring you enormous shame. erm

FreshestSlice
The fact that you don't know you're dead brings more shame than anything.

The_Tempest
I live in you. I'm like Mufasa that way.

FreshestSlice
....


uhuh

Beniboybling
Originally posted by S_W_LeGenD
laughing out loud

Look at the reactions of Palpatine-wankers! I treated Palpatine as a respectable foe in my fanfic unlike the sheer (one-sided) wankery for a single character in the first post. The original post gives the impression of some kind of Palpatine porn flick or something. Lmao, I paid barely any attention to the content, only its atrocious literary quality.

Easily the worst fan fiction I've ever read. smileOriginally posted by FreshestSlice
Zakuul is a nexus. The Eternal Throne is a giant control station for the Fleet. That Vitiate built. And it's pretty much in outer space. Good job, Beni. Now, go back to reading what the OP said about it draining all life and being a twisted mass of evil if you want something to critique. The Eternal Throne inhabits the planet's upper atmosphere. I'm not seeing how that is so far and away from the planet itself that it wouldn't benefit from the nexus. Especially considering planetary nexuses have been both felt and tap into from actual outer space. mmm

And why would I critique the accuracy of a piece of fan ficiton? Lmao.

FreshestSlice
Again, Beni, since you can't read two posts up, I never said Zakuul wasn't a nexus or that the power from the nexus wouldn't effect people near the throne. It's actually one of the things I hate about people saying Vitiate didn't have Dromund Kaas to tap into during the Chapter 2 finale. What I did say is that the throne isn't a nexus, which it isn't, at all. And it's near a neutral one at that, not a mass of evil, or whatever.

And I'm sure you'd jump on it, if it were about how Ahsoka spent six months working in a brothel for Palpatine.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
I love how freshest' semantics destroy even the best of you smile

Beniboybling
Originally posted by FreshestSlice
Again, Beni, since you can't read two posts up, I never said Zakuul wasn't a nexus or that the power from the nexus wouldn't effect people near the throne. It's actually one of the things I hate about people saying Vitiate didn't have Dromund Kaas to tap into during the Chapter 2 finale. What I did say is that the throne isn't a nexus, which it isn't, at all. And it's near a neutral one at that, not a mass of evil, or whatever. And that's wrong. Whether or not it's the core of the nexus on Zakuul or not it is a place where the Force is unusually strong, i.e. a nexus, in some shape and form, which you flat out denied it to be. thumb up

Nor is it unreasonable to infer, within the contexts of a fan fiction, that Valkorion could have designed the spire to focus Zakuul's energies, as he did with various Sith structures on Dromund Kaas and is in general obsessed with power, and harnessing power.As if I would even go near something that cancerous. smile

The_Tempest
Beni soloing Skillz-n-'Strap tbh.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
What did I do? smile

The_Tempest
Nothing of consequence. That's the point.

You also bent the knee.

FreshestSlice
Originally posted by Beniboybling
And that's wrong. Whether or not it's the core of the nexus on Zakuul or not it is a place where the Force is unusually strong, i.e. a nexus, in some shape and form, which you flat out denied it to be. thumb up

Except, you're retarded. The Eternal Throne itself is just a piece of machinery. It's not a nexus in anyway. It may be near a nexus, but the it is not a nexus. Zakuul is the nexus. The Throne is a machine. It controls a fleet and nothing more.

Actually it is, because it's flat out stated to not do that. I guess if it makes you feel better to write, say, or enjoy something idiotic and then slap fan fiction on it, in the same way most other people say, "It's just my opinion," then by all means, more power to you. That doesn't stop it, or you, from being idiotic.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Originally posted by The_Tempest
Nothing of consequence. That's the point.

You also bent the knee.

Do you want me to do something of consequence? I'm on my phone hiding in a church bathroom stall rn smile

And it's risen stronger than ever. smile

Beniboybling
Originally posted by FreshestSlice
Except, you're retarded. The Eternal Throne itself is just a piece of machinery. It's not a nexus in anyway. It may be near a nexus, but the it is not a nexus. Zakuul is the nexus. The Throne is a machine. It controls a fleet and nothing more.Eh? How does its function as piece of machinery preclude it being a nexus i.e. a place unusually strong in the Force? What the function of that place is is irrelevant to the criteria of being a nexus.Quote? Source? A object can have more than one purpose lmao.

The_Tempest
'Strap struggles with the idea X can serve more than one purpose. He very ardently defended the notion that killing Jedi wasn't a primary goal of the Clone Wars because another source said another primary goal of the war was to simply discredit them.

FreshestSlice
The living are speaking, Temp. Until you learn anything about the source material, I suggest you shut it.
Originally posted by Beniboybling
Eh? How does its function as piece of machinery preclude it being a nexus i.e. a place unusually strong in the Force? What the function of that place is is irrelevant to the criteria of being a nexus.
Which has dick to do with the point. A ship that flys to Zakuul isn't a nexus just because it flew to Zakuul, Beni. A building built on Zakuul isn't a nexus just because it was built there. And a chair is just a chair, regardless of where it is until stated otherwise.

Kek, the Eternal Throne is explained in the same chapter you're trying to use as evidence for it being anything more than a connection to a relay station.

The_Tempest
Originally posted by FreshestSlice
The living are speaking, Temp. Until you learn anything about the source material, I suggest you shut it.

You mean the source material I provided that caused you to flee?

All to easy.

stoned

FreshestSlice
You didn't provide anything, and I flee from nothing. http://r27.imgfast.net/users/2716/29/35/50/smiles/1751224631.png

If you think replying forever makes you right, you're as deluded as you claim LeGenD to be.

The_Tempest
You lose. Agaaaaaaaaaaaain. excellent

FreshestSlice
Originally posted by FreshestSlice

If you think replying forever makes you right, you're as deluded as you claim LeGenD to be.

The_Tempest
You're wise to flee, yet again. excellent

FreshestSlice
http://i.imgur.com/W28lNQM.gif

The_Tempest
I assume I'm Batman, in this case.

FreshestSlice
Batman wouldn't be the dead guy refusing to stay buried.

The_Tempest
But he is the one who's winning, which would be me.

FreshestSlice
The fact that you think you've won anything in the last year shows only the depth of your insanity. Even Neph puts up a better defense than you.

The_Tempest
You're free to actually go to the thread and refute it. smile

FreshestSlice
Why would I refute it when that was the claim I made? The fact that you used it for another purpose, saying the war was about killing Jedi, doesn't change that it supports what I said, that the war was there to make the Jedi look bad and Anakin good. Like I said, a focus does not make something a primary focus, no matter how many hairs you try to split.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Holy shit temp used the smiley. smile

The_Tempest
Originally posted by FreshestSlice
Why would I refute it when that was the claim I made? The fact that you used it for another purpose, saying the war was about killing Jedi, doesn't change that it supports what I said, that the war was there to make the Jedi look bad and Anakin good. Like I said, a focus does not make something a primary focus, no matter how many hairs you try to split.

Nah, you claimed that killing Jedi was not a primary purpose of the war, only that discrediting them was.

Which is wrong. Which means you lose. Again.

FreshestSlice
Originally posted by FreshestSlice
W Like I said, a focus does not make something a primary focus, no matter how many hairs you try to split.
Nigga, do you even read?

The_Tempest
I do. Did you read where killing Jedi was listed as the first of the war's two goals? smile

You're still losing, my son.

FreshestSlice
Being listed first doesn't make it more important, just more memorable. Killing Jedi was how they ended this war, not how they conducted it. uhuh

FreshestSlice
And I'm not your son. Those days are over.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Originally posted by XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Holy shit temp used the smiley. smile

The_Tempest
A double post. Someone's clearly getting... Agitated. smile

It wasn't how they conducted it? So Jedi didn't die during the course of the war? lol

Watching you flounder is so amusing.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Shit's getting real. smile

Syndicate
Ngl this is pretty great.

XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Ngl Valkorion still > Sheev. smile

Syndicate
Think you can get him to do a triple Temp?

Syndicate
Originally posted by XSUPREMEXSKILLZ
Ngl Valkorion still > Sheev. smile

Going to be writing my own Sheev/Valk fanfic.

FreshestSlice
Originally posted by The_Tempest
A double post. Someone's clearly getting... Agitated. smile

I'm not getting agitated. I hit quote instead of edit.

That's a pretty big leap you're making there, Tempest. Of course Jedi are going to die, they're shit combatants for the most part. They still need to live long enough to show that.

Your smugness will get you nowhere, old man.

Emperordmb
Originally posted by Syndicate
Going to be writing my own Sheev/Valk fanfic.
You, LeGenD and Ellimist are pathetic tbh. Let's get juyomaster in this ***** to show us what true prose and beauty is.

Syndicate
Originally posted by FreshestSlice
I'm not getting agitated. I hit quote instead of edit.

The excuses are coming out.

Syndicate
Originally posted by Emperordmb
You, LeGenD and Ellimist are pathetic tbh. Let's get juyomaster in this ***** to show us what true prose and beauty is.

But... But you haven't even seen it. sad

Emperordmb
Originally posted by Syndicate
But... But you haven't even seen it. sad
Doesn't matter, nothing measure's up to Juyomaster's fanfic

S_W_LeGenD
Originally posted by Emperordmb
You, LeGenD and Ellimist are pathetic tbh. Let's get juyomaster in this ***** to show us what true prose and beauty is.
This was not a serious attempt from me. smile

I will write a proper fanfic - about a different event - when I have time. I will do my best in it.

FreshestSlice
Please don't.

S_W_LeGenD
^^^

Your striving is insignificant.

Syndicate
Part 1: Emperor's Summons

Darth Vader, Enforcer of the Emperor's will, Supreme Commander of the Imperial Fleet and Dark Lord of the Sith clears his mind as he glides past the red robed figures and through the gilded entrance of the Imperial Throne Room. Approaching the figure cloaked in shadows Vader kneels and bows his head "What is thy bidding my master?" He says acknowledging the Emperor's summons with his trademark mechanized rumble.

The Ellimist
Thanks for the support and feedback guys.

I made the throne a nexus to show how weak and pathetic Valkorion is.

SW_Legend tbh your writing skills are actually cringe worthy, go back to hating gay people, your allies there will have lower academic standards.

The Ellimist
Originally posted by FreshestSlice
The fact that you think you've won anything in the last year shows only the depth of your insanity. Even Neph puts up a better defense than you.

stick out tongue You know, people like Mike Wong can get away with flaming everyone because he's actually incredibly intelligent, and almost always right. You, on the other hand, just remind us of all those closet-gay anti-gay politicians when you do so; .ie, we laugh at you.

FreshestSlice
Not taking me seriously is one thing. What does that have to do with anti-gay, closet homosexuality again, me being neither? Is that just your go to insult? Well that and talking about how incredibly intelligent you and the people you worship are, as if anyone cares. Hint: Nobody does. When did randoms on the internet start believing anyone could possibly care less about their thoughts and opinions of others? I know I sure as hell don't.

The Ellimist
Your inability to grasp basic analogies amuses me.

The Ellimist
(also, it's actually LOL inducing that you're puffing your chest about how you shouldn't care about what internet people think about you...while you're running around criticizing everyone, on the internet. LOLZ)

Lord Lucien
My boner reached maximum at "Dark tentacles". But it didn't lead where I wanted so now it's broken.


0/10, will never fap again.

FreshestSlice
Originally posted by The Ellimist
(also, it's actually LOL inducing that you're puffing your chest about how you shouldn't care about what internet people think about you...while you're running around criticizing everyone, on the internet. LOLZ)
Shows what you know. I only insult people to make them stronger. One as narrow minded as you would never understand.

The Ellimist
Originally posted by Lord Lucien
My boner reached maximum at "Dark tentacles". But it didn't lead where I wanted so now it's broken.


0/10, will never fap again.

I don't think not-fapping is a good idea given your situation, Lucien.

Originally posted by FreshestSlice
Shows what you know. I only insult people to make them stronger. One as narrow minded as you would never understand.

Indeed, the amusement you provide does invigorate me.

S_W_LeGenD
Originally posted by The Ellimist
Thanks for the support and feedback guys.

I made the throne a nexus to show how weak and pathetic Valkorion is.

SW_Legend tbh your writing skills are actually cringe worthy, go back to hating gay people, your allies there will have lower academic standards.
My writing skills are fine. Thank you.

I don't hate gay people; I don't participate in anti-gay movements either. However, I don't find this sexual orientation comforting either; to me, its disgusting. To be honest, I once had a teacher who was gay; he attempted to have relations with me and I felt disgusted by his advances (they were not welcomed). And I kept my distance. Its not funny.

And not liking gay-ism doesn't implies lower academic standards.

The Ellimist
Originally posted by S_W_LeGenD
I don't hate gay people; I don't participate in anti-gay movements either. However, I don't find this sexual orientation comforting either; to me, its disgusting. To be honest, I once had a teacher who was gay; he attempted to have relations with me and I felt disgusted by his advances (they were not welcomed). And I kept my distance. Its not funny.


Don't you oppose gay marriage?


And it's not that your writing is generic or unremarkable; its elementary sentence fluency is so awkward that it actually induces cringing.

(Hey, you critiqued me first! stick out tongue)

S_W_LeGenD
Originally posted by The Ellimist
Don't you oppose gay marriage?
I do! I won't participate in this kind of wedding even if I am invited. However, I am not crashing gay marriages either; its not my call.

Originally posted by The Ellimist
And it's not that your writing is generic or unremarkable; its elementary sentence fluency is so awkward that it actually induces cringing.

(Hey, you critiqued me first! stick out tongue)
English is not my native language.

Anyways, I critiqued your storytelling; not your writing skills. Your writing skills are fine, IMO.

The Ellimist
Originally posted by S_W_LeGenD
I do! I won't participate in this kind of wedding even if I am invited. However, I am not stopping gay marriages either; its not my call.


Why do you oppose them? Is it just because you find homosexuality personally distasteful, or do you actually think it's unethical/harmful?




Oh, that's fair (and explains a lot).

S_W_LeGenD
Originally posted by The Ellimist
Why do you oppose them? Is it just because you find homosexuality personally distasteful, or do you actually think it's unethical/harmful?
This is would be a lengthy debate and not suitable for this section. So I'd shorten it by saying that I find it distasteful (personally) and not healthy for society (at large) either.

Relationship between males and females remains the best choice for a flourishing society.

The Ellimist
^ would your opinion change if Valkorion came out as gay?

FreshestSlice
I think it's hilarious LeGenD thinks "I do hate gay marriage!" is a stance worth exclaiming. Like seriously, who the **** cares? Unless someone's bending you over the table and whispering, "Call me Papa Bear," into your ear, you shouldn't bother caring.

S_W_LeGenD
Originally posted by The Ellimist
^ would your opinion change if Valkorion came out as gay?
No.

Originally posted by FreshestSlice
I think it's hilarious LeGenD thinks "I do hate gay marriage!" is a stance worth exclaiming. Like seriously, who the **** cares? Unless someone's bending you over the table and whispering, "Call me Papa Bear," into your ear, you shouldn't bother caring.
Yes, my stance about this shouldn't be brought-up in discussions again and again but some members continue to do so. I visit this section to discuss Star Wars, not my political thoughts.

Azronger
This was pure gold.

Beniboybling
Originally posted by The Ellimist
He reached into the Force. Instead, he sensed a singularity of the dark side. Alive, amused, and merciless. Palpatine. smile

Freedon Nadd
Nice story, SW_Legend. Although, the voidy thing of Valkorion pissed me off a bit.

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