The Matrix Restarted

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Alias Neo
character info
Jack- 14 year old school boy
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Jack started falling, everything around him was moving slowly. He looked down at the road and suddenly looked up when he heard a horn, a truck was coming. The truck was getting close and closer and he was still falling, there was nothing he could do. Jack looked up at the truck again and was nearly blinded by the light. Jack suddenly woke in his bed breathing heavliy, relising it was only a dream, or was it?

Some time later Jack got on to his computer.
"Welcome to AOL" the computer said. he clicked on to MSN Messager and typed in his username, Lance. A new screen came up with a message on it, hellow lance. Jack looked around surpised. He typed a message back-
Who are you?
That is somthing i can not tell you at this time, the matrix has you, you must escape.
The matrix?
You will find out later.
the screen went blank.

The rain poured down as jack walked to school. He was still confused about what had happened on his computer. Jack walked over the bridge to school , he looked down at the road below, and suddenly remebered his dream. He stood there for a mintue thinking, could his dream be real? He heard the school bell in the distance, he quickly ran to school .

Alias Neo
please post comments, ideas, etc

Will
cool story stick out tongue rock big grin smile

Alias Neo
thanks big grin ,
still got loads of more the story to do though

Fu'Seth
I think its quite good!!! kepp working on it.

Alias Neo
thanks, should have the second part finished later to day

Bicnarok
EDIT

Alias Neo
Next part of story, based on Kid's story off of the animatrix...

It was Lunch time, the rain had stopped, so Jack walked on to the field.His phone suddenly went off. He answered it...
" Hellow Lance"
" Who are you and how do you know a mobie number?"
"I can not tell you now because you are in geat danger. look to the roof of the main building"
Jack looked up at the roof and then turned his head back to his phone.
" All i see is some guy in a suit with shades on"
" he is an agent, and if you don't want to find out what they are capable of, i suggest you run"

Jack droped his phone and started to run towards the main gate of the school. He was out of the school, he looked around, the road was to busy to cross. Jack turned around and saw the agent standing in front of him
" Come quitely, and i will not hurt you" the agent exclaimed.
Jack turn around and ran up the steps of the bridge, he was at the top. he looked infront of him, there was another agent on the other side of the bridge. with an agent in front and behind him Jack didn't know what to do.Jack slowly climbed of the railing of the bridge, he look down at the road.
He took his hands off of the railing, he lent over, his feet were off the bridge, Jack started falling, everything around him was moving slowly. He looked down at the road and suddenly looked up when he heard a horn, a truck was coming. The truck was getting close and closer and he was still falling, there was nothing he could do. Jack looked up at the truck again and was nearly blinded by the light. He screamed out as the truck hit him, he was sent flying due to the force of the truck hitting him. he hit the floor and everything went black.

His gravestone read " beloved son"
but this is only the end of the beggining

genral zink
End of the beginning eh? So you're going to post the beginning of the middle?

Good story. Imagine how scary it would be if you were only a kid, had no combat experience, and had to run from 2 Agents? Geez, I would freak out.... eek!

Good story so far AliasNeo.

Captain REX
Nice story, AliasNeo. smile

Bicnarok, this is not the place to post crackpot theories about us really being inside of the Matrix. That goes in the Matrix section.

ElmStreetFan01
Awesome rock

Alias Neo
Jack opened his eyes, he was on a bed surrounded by machinery. A person walked up to the bed-
"Lance, your finally awake"
"What happened? and where am I?
"You were released from the matrix and you are in the real world"
"The matrix? the real world?
"The matrix is a simulation of the world which almost every single person is plugged in to, it was build to blind them from the truth, the truth of the real world.The real world is now only a half destroyed planet controlled by robots"
"Right" Jack said sarcastically" so who are you then?"
"I am Morpheus, captain of the Nebuchadnezzar

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2 DAYS LATER|Jack is now called Lance| This story is set in between in the first and second movie| Moupheus still beleives the propercy|
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"Lance, there is someone i would like you to meet" Moupheus called out to Lance. Lance walked up over to Moupheus "Lance, this is Neo, the one"
"Hellow Lance. Moupheus has Lance had the training disks?"
"Yes,"
"Maybe he can get away from agents but how good will he do against me"

The city was quite as Neo and Lance stood there ready to fight.

Anarion
Hmm... rad. I'm looking forward to the next part..

Alias Neo
Neo walked over to Lance
"Ready?" Neo asked.
"Bring it on" Lance answered.
Lance jump back, dodging Neo's sudden kicks. Lance ran forward, bringing his hand back, he suddenly jumped forward, throwing punches at Neo. As Neo went to block the punchs, Lance suddenly raised his leg kicking Neo in the stomach. Neo stood up after being flung back by the kick " This is too easy for you", Neo got out his phone, "Link, load up the weapons"

Neo and Lance, now armed with a sword each were ready to fight, again. Lance ran forward, slashing the sword around. Neo steped back then did a front flip over Lance, then in the middle of his flip, he brought the sword down, just above lance's head. Lance quickly turned and blocked the attcked. Neo's phone went off. Neo landed and took the phone out of pocket...
"Yes?"
"Neo, its trinity, she was in the matrix, then some how, some agents got her, they got her prisoner"....................

Anarion
Interesting.

Alias Neo

Setokaiba900
EDIT

Captain REX
Completely irrevelavant, Setokaiba.

Alias Neo
Link stepped towards morpheus, lance and neo " for neo it's going to be easy he can just fly to the building. But Lance and Morpheus the nearest place to the building i can drop you is about 50 miles away..."
"50!" Lance exclaimed
"....You and morpheus will have to go on a train, then when you get to the station there will be a car which you take to get to the building, in the back of the car there are weapons if you need them. Oh ya, Lance, one more thing if you see an agent don't fight him just run, neo is the only one who can fight agents and surive"

masterofmatrix
we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!

Alias Neo

masterofmatrix
we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!

Korri
Alias Neo> this is some good stuff eek!

Alias Neo
thanks big grin

Alias Neo

Korri
this is really good u should be a writer

Alias Neo
i'm thinking of sending the story to the Wachowski bros

Korri
kewl!! u must!!!!!

Alias Neo
they could make it into a movie (day dreams)

Korri
ohhhhh i should send my script laughing out loud

Alias Neo
(still day dreaming)

Korri
me too lol

Alias Neo
rite now , as i speak i am writing the next part of the story

Korri
kewl wink

masterofmatrix
ok 1 we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!

2. how can you contact to wachowski bros. ive tried to contct them for months

masterofmatrix
hello im waiting here

Alias Neo
READ!

masterofmatrix
where is the next part

Alias Neo

masterofmatrix
what time

Alias Neo
?

masterofmatrix
ok can you give some spoilers on whats going to happen please

Alias Neo
ok then,
BIG gun fight in the eagle skyscaper
Lance and Neo fight lots of agents on the rooftop of 'The Eagles Skyscaper'
Lance finds out that he has powers greater than neo's.
there is going to be a 2 story after this one.

Captain REX
(Alrighty, Lance having powers greater than Neo's seems a little farfetched, don't you think?)

masterofmatrix
no need to be a fuss pot but i am waiting alias neo

masterofmatrix
whats a 2 story to u

Captain REX
2nd story.

masterofmatrix
alias what is the 2nd story called

Alias Neo

masterofmatrix
ok alias would i be able to write the 2nd story and email it to you to put it on or can i atleast think of the title

Korri
Alias> this stuff is brilliant!! eek!

Alias Neo
thank you

(bowls)

masterofmatrix
whats the next story called

Captain REX
Good work, Alias. smile

Wait till my stuff comes out... evil face

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