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Slowpoke
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Registered: Jun 2012
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Try to improve Anakin/Padme romance story
I think Padme should play a bigger role in EP I, to trust Anakin when others don't to form a special bond. Shmi's death could have been moved to EP I.
Then EP II's main blast could be with Anakin/Padme instead of Shmi's death.
EP III should have been more about Anakin/Padme rather than Anakin/Obi Wan.
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Oct 20th, 2019 08:41 PM |
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Sith Master X
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Registered: Apr 2004
Location: The Empire
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Honestly, I think EP III was more about Anakin and Padme.
After about 50 minutes into ROTS, Anakin and Obi-wan have a nice conversation ending with "may the force be with you."
We then don't see them together again for nearly an hour, and the next time they meet they are sworn enemies.
I mean it didn't ruin the movie or anything, but I think some better plot devices could have been explored here.
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Oct 21st, 2019 03:49 AM |
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Lord Lucien
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There's no improving their story without scrapping the prequel's entire screenplay and rebuilding it from the ground up; new writers, new directors, new actors, the works. It has everything wrong with it.
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Oct 22nd, 2019 03:43 AM |
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relentless1
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Registered: Aug 2014
Location: Your Moms house
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make it a love triangle between obi, ani and padme.
Padme and ani are the same age, obis a bit older as he is Anakins master after all
Padme has moments with both throughout the trilogy but her feelings for Anakin are stronger and they get together, have Anakins turn happen a lot sooner and part of the reason he turns is he thinks Obi and Padme are having an affair when in actuality they are just close friends, then when Anakin chokes padme out later on it'll have much more meaning,
Kenobis guilt over how the situation played out will be a much better reason for him to exile himself and watch their kid also
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Nov 8th, 2019 03:12 AM |
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Putinbot1
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I don't think Anakin should have raped her. That's a romance killer usually.
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Jan 27th, 2020 08:54 PM |
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Lord Lucien
Lets all love Lain
Registered: Jul 2005
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ALLEGEDLY raped her.
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Jan 28th, 2020 02:33 AM |
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Muchislover
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May 7th, 2020 10:10 AM |
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Blakemore
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Registered: May 2019
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Episode 1, Queen Amidalla is under threat by a corrupt government and her people are suffering. She escapes into some kind of hiding.
Some knights (who are very intelligent or some kind of badass mutherfuqer) are sent to investigate the matter on the side of the government and a rebel character happens to bandwagon on the way (maybe someone like rentboy from Trainspotting)
Rentboy discovers new things on this planet and sees the Queen, falls in love with her and learns the ways of the Force.
The two knights discover this rogue, who is supposed to be on their side is actually working against them, and arrest him. He teaches them the force so they let him free.
One of the knights is then seduced by the dark side of the force and impregnates Amidalla with the force like some kind of religious thing. (Spoiler, Qui-Gon or Mace Windu becomes Darth Vader.)
Episode 2: Fighting and arguing between Obi-wan and the corrupt government with a light side of the force and a dark side of the force. Clone wars happen, the Empire wins and Amidalla dies in childbirth.
Episode 3: Tattooine is now a desert wasteland open to aliens from all over the galaxy. As obiwan gets older, Leia starts to rebel against her father and creates some plans to destroy the death star. Obiwan monitors over her and saves her life on multiple occasions. By the end, the rebellion is safe but at the expense of Obiwan, idk, maybe he got old man disease.
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