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Hay guys I am maybe making a fan film based on my Batman Escalation script, here is the trailer script for all of you. If you want to see more of the script then don`t be afraid to ask. I am open to criticism

Batman Escalation Teaser Trailer Script
Trailer opens up with Scarecrow in a strait jacket.
Lt James Gordon: Crane what do you know about this new killer?
Scarecrow: I just know he’s coming
Suddenly a huge explosion happens and we are taken to a scene where all the policeman are seen dead with grins on their face and Joker cards found near them.
Then we come to a scene where Mob Boss Copplepot is announcing something to his men.
Penguin: My friends it is time to take back what is ours, are you with me?
THIS SUMMER THE DARK KNIGHT FACES HIS GREATEST FOE!!!!
Joker: Wait till the real laugh Batman. HA HA HA HA!!!!!
Alfred: Master Bruce may I introduce to you Miss Selina Kyle.
Selina Kyle: Bruce Wayne your reputation proceeds you, lazy drunk playboy.
Bruce Wayne: Actually I am owner of Wayne industries.
Selina Kyle: Yeah and I have a night job.
Then switch to a shot where Catwoman jumps out of a window.
Lt James Gordon: Batman may I introduce you to...
Batman: Harvey Dent Junior DA.
Then switch to a shot with Rupert Thorn.
Rupert Thorn: Boys no more hiding in the shadows we are going to war and the air smells fresh.
The switch to a shot outside a burned house.
Black Mask: Thanks for the face lift Batman, because it has awakened a name of fear that in time every other Mob Boss in Gotham will call me by and the name is Black Mask. Watch out Gotham Black Mask is about to enter town.
Joker: The end is near for you my fellow Gothamites.
Then comes a Batman logo, the one used in Batman Begins followed by Batman Escalation and coming summer 2008.

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