KMC Forums - the matrix reprogramed

i have copyed the tread for one reason i dont think the original story was good so i have alterd the story a little so can someon please close the orginal thread down please. heres part 1:

Agent Tompson clenched his earpiece. �He�s coming� Tompson exclaimed. �Here� another agent asks. We hear a gun shot as Agent Tompson falls to the ground. The 2 other agents stare blankly at the dead agent which suddenly turns into a dead child. �That was unexpected� Jackson says . �Look-out� Johnson shouts as he takes his gun and shoots neo who dodges the bullets as he runs to engage combat with the agents. �Link I need a weapon drop� neo shouts hoping link will hear. Just as a sword was appearing in Neos hand the 2 agents laughed �you are no match for us� as neo chops both there heads off �who�s laughing now� asked neo as the agents continued laughing �well you but I still win� said neo but unexpectedly the agents stood up and both duplicated countless times (all with heads) and ran towards neo. Neo put his hand up and electricity shot out of his palm and hit the agents making them � well� dead. Neo realised there code was becoming different to other agents and not hanging about to see what was wrong, he runs out of the building to get a good phone reception. He was outside and his phone started ringing � its Link get�� said link � wait I need an exit� said neo interrupting �if you don�t do something the time you got to live is exactly 5 seconds� yelled link � why� asked neo �Because I�m here� quoted a voice behind him. Neo tuned to see agent smith behind him who immediately stabbed him fist into Neos stomach �this time you wont escape� smith laughed in a menacing sort of way as green fluid began to cover neo. �Holy shit he�s not going to get out this time� Link says worryingly. The fluid dropped back into smiths hand when it was complete leaving neo another smith�