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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood
 Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus... |
Dreams
I'm going to make up a poem... jsut to see how long it takes... you'll all be able to see it develop...
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Sep 14th, 2003 11:22 AM |
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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood
Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus... |
I dreamed a dream of you last night.
As the cloud embraced my mind,
I saw you leaving me to die.
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Sep 14th, 2003 11:24 AM |
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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood
Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus... |
I felt the pain as I reached out.
You didn't take my hand.
I cried for you, as I travelled far,
without ever leaving my bed
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Sep 14th, 2003 11:25 AM |
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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood
Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus... |
I screamed a scream for you last night,
but you didn't turn to see.
My soul left me with you last night,
and I no longer feel.
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Sep 14th, 2003 11:26 AM |
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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood
Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus... |
ok, so this is it so far....
I dreamed a dream of you last night.
As the cloud embraced my mind,
I saw you leaving me to die.
I felt the pain as I reached out.
You didn't take my hand.
I cried for you, as I travelled far,
without ever leaving my bed
I screamed a scream for you last night,
but you didn't turn to see.
My soul left me with you last night,
and I no longer feel.
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Sep 14th, 2003 11:28 AM |
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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood
Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus... |
I don't like the first verse...
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Sep 14th, 2003 11:28 AM |
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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood
Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus... |
I dreamed a dream of you last night,
I smiled to see your face.
As the cloud embraced my mind,
I saw you turn to leave
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Sep 14th, 2003 11:29 AM |
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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood
Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus... |
this is it so far... what do you think?
I dreamed a dream of you last night,
I smiled to see your face.
As the cloud embraced my mind,
I saw you turn to leave
I felt the pain as I reached out.
You didn't take my hand.
I cried for you, as I travelled far,
without ever leaving my bed
I screamed a scream for you last night,
but you didn't turn to see.
My soul left me with you last night,
and I no longer feel.
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Sep 14th, 2003 11:30 AM |
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PiratePrincess
Johnny's secret lover!!
 Gender: Female
Location: Kissing Mr Depp in France |
I am luvin this poem so far, Phoe!! Well done  I wish i could write as well as you!!
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"Elizabeth is safe, like I promised. She's going to marry the commadore, like she promised. And you are going to die for her, like you promised. So we're all men of our words, except for Elizabeth, who is, in fact, a woman"
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