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BLACKANGEL
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freddy vs shawdow cat3 the true action.
kitty open her eyes and saw freddy holding camela's hair and giving her cuts
camela: help me kitty
freddy turns around and looks at kitty.
freddy kreuger: well well well if it isnt the lilttle mutant.
freddy walks up to kitty.
freddy kreuger: look at your sister in pain.
he point at camela and camela started to scream.
kitty got mad. she grab freddy and slam him into the floor. she got on top of him.
kitty: you dont want to mess with a mutants sister. especially if the girl is my sister.
her eyes turn blue and her and freddy went right through the floor. they fell into the basement. then she pick up freddy and through him into the wall.
freddy kreuger: well i guess i got your attention. shall we dance.
freddy pick up sharp blades and through it at kitty. she use her powers so the blades could go right through.
freddy kreuger: nice power kitty
kitty: call me shawdowcat punk.
freddy kreuger: i like girls with attiude
shawdowcat: trust me you aint going to like this girl.
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HockeyFace
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Gender: Unspecified Location: My own little world |
Good so far!
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Nov 5th, 2003 02:54 AM |
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Dr. Leg Kick
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Gender: Male Location: Los Angeles |
nice. its good
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Nov 5th, 2003 05:02 AM |
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BLACKANGEL
boo ya
Gender: Female Location: New York |
freddy walk up to her
shawdowcat: be serious do you really think im just going to let you walk up to me.
she pick up a broken spear and threw it at him. he duck.
she ran to the wall and jump on it. her foot push her up and half her body went through the celling. then she made the top part of her body solid so the rest of her could go through the celling. in camela piont of view it look like shawdowcat is coming out from the floor.
camela: kitty he hurt me.
shawdowcat: camela youve have to wake up. please try to wake up.
shawdowcat had an idea. she act like she was about to hit camela and camela suprise and fear woke her up.
paul: camela are you alright? is kitty still in the dream world.
camela: yes she was fighting that scary man.
nancy: we have to help her. we have to take those pills to go to sleep.
paul and nancy took the pills. paul tells camela try not to fall asleep.
they fell asleep and found themself next to shawdowcat
shawdowcat: what are yall doing here? whos wacthing camela?
paul: dont worry camela is alright. we are here to help.
freddy kreuger: well more soul food for me.
nancy: your going down freddy.
freddy kreuger: oh no not me. please i could kill yall right now if i want to.
shawdowcat: your getting on my nerves.
freddy kreuger: and your not getting on mines. come here.
he wave his hand towards him and she flew over there and she had no control over it.
freddy kreuger: i could be a better boyfriend then him.
he point at paul. he started to lick her face. then he put his long tongue in her mouth. paul got mad.
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Nov 5th, 2003 09:30 PM |
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BLACKANGEL
boo ya
Gender: Female Location: New York |
paul pick up a blade and threw it at freddy. he miss and almost hit shadowcat.
freddy kreuger: miss me, miss me now SHE has to kiss me.
he was about to kiss her agian then right then and there she kick him
where the sun dont shine.
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Nov 14th, 2003 01:45 AM |
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BLACKANGEL
boo ya
Gender: Female Location: New York |
FREDDY GOT MAD AND SAID ITS TIME TO BRING IN ALITTLE BIT OF FRIENDS.
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Nov 18th, 2003 08:19 AM |
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Punker69
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Gender: Male Location: California |
Blach Angel I read you story and I thought it was cool.Quite a few spelling errors though.And in Part 2 when paul kissed kitty she didnt say any reactions or anything and you didnt even know that Paul liked her.And the phone call between Nancy and Kitty was really short you know with the death news that Nancy had and all it should have been longer and show more emotion.Other than that this story rocks and I cant wait for part 4.
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