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The Marvels

Introduction:On Jan 1,1990 five kids where born across the town of Lodi.They all where born with superpowers.They all where friends and they became aware of each others abilites at 10 years old.Now there 13 and they fight villians for a living.The only people that know about there abilities are there parents.Max can have lazers coming from his fingertips.Eric can teleport.Donna can morph.Ross has super powerful hands.And Amy can freeze time.They think there mutants and they want to go to this special school for mutants they`ve been hearing about.But there parents dont want to send them away.So for now they fight crime and call themselves The Marvles.

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Post your thoughts on how good this part of the story is and if I should write more.

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i think it sounds cool... but i dont get Ross's powers. super-powerful hands???


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YUP what dont you get?

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well... wut do super-powerful hands do? is like super strength or sumthin?


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yup.

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Is this going to be a story? If not, I'll lock it.


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What do you mean?

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