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Punker69
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The Marvels
Introduction:On Jan 1,1990 five kids where born across the town of Lodi.They all where born with superpowers.They all where friends and they became aware of each others abilites at 10 years old.Now there 13 and they fight villians for a living.The only people that know about there abilities are there parents.Max can have lazers coming from his fingertips.Eric can teleport.Donna can morph.Ross has super powerful hands.And Amy can freeze time.They think there mutants and they want to go to this special school for mutants they`ve been hearing about.But there parents dont want to send them away.So for now they fight crime and call themselves The Marvles.
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Dec 6th, 2003 07:52 AM |
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Punker69
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Gender: Male Location: California |
Post your thoughts on how good this part of the story is and if I should write more.
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Dec 6th, 2003 07:53 AM |
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H. S. 6
Approaching the End
Gender: Male Location: Ministry of Magic |
i think it sounds cool... but i dont get Ross's powers. super-powerful hands???
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Dec 6th, 2003 01:46 PM |
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Punker69
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Gender: Male Location: California |
YUP what dont you get?
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Dec 6th, 2003 08:15 PM |
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H. S. 6
Approaching the End
Gender: Male Location: Ministry of Magic |
well... wut do super-powerful hands do? is like super strength or sumthin?
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Dec 7th, 2003 04:04 PM |
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Punker69
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Gender: Male Location: California |
yup.
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Dec 8th, 2003 02:02 AM |
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REXXXX
Networking
Gender: Male Location: San Diego Moderator |
Is this going to be a story? If not, I'll lock it.
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Dec 8th, 2003 06:16 AM |
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Punker69
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Gender: Male Location: California |
What do you mean?
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Dec 9th, 2003 02:24 AM |
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