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H. S. 6
Approaching the End
 Gender: Male
Location: Ministry of Magic |
 Black Stealth
This is a story I was making up a character on www.heromachine.com. It's a dark story about a superhero named Black Stealth who can sink into Darkness. A little confusing, but you'll understand more as you go along. This is a prologue I just made up today.
What does the dark conceal?
Many people ask this question, children mostly. What exactly hides in the black? Monsters and faries? Demons and Angels?
It’s a good question, really. Nobody can see through black. Nobody can see through a complete darkness.
Except me.
Everyone, adults included, get a chill when they enter a darkness so complete, so real, that they question themselves if they exist in the black.
The answer is: they don’t.
The dark is a whole other world. A world where nobody feels safe. The dark is no one’s home.
Except mine.
Imagine this. Monsters and faries lurk in this darkness. But once the Light comes, they run. They hide. They disappear. They vanish. What if this was true? Then the question would be posed.
What does the dark conceal?
As far as anyone knows, the dark holds no secrets. As far as anyone knows, the dark tells no lies. What you see, or don’t see, is what you get.
Of course, that’s as far as anyone knows. I am beyond what anyone knows.
You ask yourself, what does the dark conceal?
I am the only one with the answer to this question.
The dark conceals me.
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Oct 8th, 2004 04:09 PM |
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H. S. 6
Approaching the End
Gender: Male
Location: Ministry of Magic |
anyone???
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Oct 10th, 2004 11:43 PM |
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H. S. 6
Approaching the End
Gender: Male
Location: Ministry of Magic |
dont make me beg
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Oct 18th, 2004 11:52 PM |
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DarkC
-KMC THREAD KILLER-
 Gender: Male
Location: Cacapoopoopeepeeshire. |
Good intro...lets see about the rest. I'm not a fan of first-person, though.
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Oct 19th, 2004 02:24 PM |
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DanZeke25
You can't beat me.
 Gender: Male
Location: New Jersey |
its pretty good... keep going
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Nov 9th, 2004 09:39 PM |
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Trickster
True KMC Jester
 Gender: Male
Location: United Kingdom |
I like it. Like dark I'm not a big 1st-person person, but it's forming up well.
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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
Death only gives another set of choices.
He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.
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Nov 9th, 2004 10:14 PM |
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Stealth Agent
Screen Writer
 Gender: Male
Location: |
im interested keep going
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Nov 10th, 2004 01:11 AM |
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chilled monkey
Senior Member
Gender: Male
Location: United Kingdom |
Very good beginning. Please continue.
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Nov 11th, 2004 10:55 AM |
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H. S. 6
Approaching the End
Gender: Male
Location: Ministry of Magic |
so wait stealth... is that supposed to mean bad or good?
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Nov 12th, 2004 01:23 AM |
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Stealth Agent
Screen Writer
Gender: Male
Location: |
maybe you should re-read what i said, god are you slow???? 
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Nov 13th, 2004 11:20 PM |
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H. S. 6
Approaching the End
Gender: Male
Location: Ministry of Magic |
okay.. bad but funny? or its so bad that its funny? u have people laughing....
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Nov 13th, 2004 11:54 PM |
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Stealth Agent
Screen Writer
Gender: Male
Location: |
Sike hotsauce im just playin keep going. post more i like it. I also like the title alot it sounds so........ cool 
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Nov 14th, 2004 10:48 PM |
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H. S. 6
Approaching the End
Gender: Male
Location: Ministry of Magic |
okay good... i was getting jus a bit confused...
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Nov 15th, 2004 01:13 AM |
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DarkC
-KMC THREAD KILLER-
Gender: Male
Location: Cacapoopoopeepeeshire. |
Good. Keep going.
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Nov 15th, 2004 03:21 PM |
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