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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
 Gender: Male
Location: Kent, England |
Please read the original and post in any way that i could make it better ETC:
The Original Story
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Last edited by Crisis on Oct 9th, 2004 at 12:32 PM
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Oct 9th, 2004 12:29 PM |
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male
Location: Kent, England |
whooo at last the day has come! 
first part:
Jack started falling, everything around him started to move slowly. He looked down at the road and suddenly looked up when he heard a horn, a truck was speeding down the road towards him. It was getting close and closer and he was still falling, there was nothing he could do. Jack looked up at the truck again and was nearly blinded by the light that seeped his eyes.
Jack suddenly woke in his bed breathing heavily, he looked around realising it was only a dream, or was it, it seemed so real, as if he was really there.
A few hours later Jack went on to his computer.
"Welcome to AOL" the computer said. He clicked on to MSN Messager and typed in his username, Lance. A new screen came up with a message on it, hello lance. Jack looked around surprised. He typed a message back-
Who are you?
That is something I can not tell you at this time, the matrix has you, you must escape.
The matrix?
You will find out later.
The screen went blank.
Jack stood up and went to turn his computer back on, nothing happened. He was about to leave his bedroom when the screen flickered back on, he turned and looked at the screen, green binary code filled the screen which read
01001100011000010110111001100011011001010010000001
1101000110111100100000011001000110100101100101.
Jack looked at the code for about 30 seconds and then thought for a second,
“Yep, it’s binary alright, who knows what it says though”.
He got dressed for school and walked downstairs. Jack was 14 and lived in the south of England he was a normal boy, quite funny and laid back had a few friends. He looked quite old for his age. He had pale skin, short black hair and shiny blue eyes. Jack quickly ate his breakfast, grabbed his backpack and left for school.
The rain poured down as jack slowly walked to school. He was still confused about what had happened earlier on his computer. Jack walked over the bridge to school, he stop half way and looked down at the road below, and suddenly remembered his dream. He stood there for a minute thinking, could his dream be real? He heard the school bell in the distance, and quickly ran to school.
It was Lunch time, the rain had stopped, so Jack walked on to the field. His phone suddenly went off. He answered it...
" Hello Lance"
" Who are you and how do you know a mobile number?"
"I can not tell you, we are short on time, because you are in great danger. Look to the roof of the main building"
Jack looked up at the roof and then turned his head back to his phone.
" All I see is some guy in a suit with shades on"
" he is an agent, and if you don't want to find out what they are capable of, I suggest you run"
”right then, I’m not running, why should I?”
One of the agents walked over to Jack
“Mr.Reton?”
“Yes, you must be an agent, you don’t look very impressive”
The agent drew his desert eagle and press it against Jack’s forehead.
“but on the other hand you do look more impressive with a gun”
Jack dropped his phone and started to run. Another agent suddenly appeared from nowhere and fired shots at Jack which only just missed him, people all around started to scream and flea. Jack kept on running, bullets whizzed past him, he turned his head and saw the two agents drawing closer. He ran towards the main gate of the school. He was out of the school, he looked around, the road the road in front of him was to way to busy to cross. Jack turned around and saw the agent standing in front of him
"There is no point running Jack" the agent exclaimed.
Jack turn around and ran up the steps of the bridge, he was at the top. He looked in front of him, there was another agent on the other side of the bridge. With an agent in front and behind him Jack didn't know what to do. Jack slowly climbed of the railing of the bridge, he look down at the road.
The two agents pointed their guns and fired.
Jack took his hands off of the railing, he lent over, his feet were off the bridge, Jack started falling, everything around him started to move slowly. He looked down at the road and suddenly looked up when he heard a horn, a truck was speeding down the road towards him. It was getting close and closer and he was still falling, there was nothing he could do. Jack looked up at the truck again and was nearly blinded by the light that seeped his eyes.
He screamed out as the truck hit him, he was sent flying backwards. He hit the floor and everything went black.
His gravestone read " beloved son"
but this is only the end of the beginning…
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Oct 11th, 2004 05:17 AM |
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The Ones
Death Eater
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Location: UK |
well done matrix restarted se is much better than the 1st release (i thought it was impossible) just dont be like george lucas and screw it up. keep on this track and it will be great
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Oct 11th, 2004 08:12 PM |
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male
Location: Kent, England |
thanks dude  i'm gonna try and post the next bit tonight
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Oct 12th, 2004 05:34 AM |
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male
Location: Kent, England |
wait no, i can post the next part now:
Jack opened his eyes, he was on a bed surrounded by machinery. There were a load of screens in front of him all with binary running down them, he then looked the other direction and noticed a group of chairs all with strange needles beside them. A person walked up to the bed-
"Lance, your finally awake"
"What happened? And where am I?
"You were released from the matrix and you are in the real world"
"The matrix? The real world?
"The matrix is, it’s a simulation of the world which almost every single person is plugged in to, it was built to blind them from the truth, the truth of the real world. The real world is now only a half destroyed planet controlled by the machines"
"Right" Jack said sarcastically" so who are you then?"
"I am Morpheus, captain of a ship called the Nebuchadnezzar, you did something which we didn’t think was possible, you ejected yourself from the matrix”
“And just where in the real world are we then?”
“We’re in Zion, the last human city”
Lance and Morpheus walked down the ramp off of the Nebuchadnezzar, out of the port and walked towards the main part of Zion.
“So what year is it?” Lance asked
“No one is quite sure, we think the year is about 2200”
Lance sat down at a table and looked down at the only available food, some white slop and bread. Lance pulled up his sleeve and noticed metal holes in his arms. Morpheus walked up and sat down next to Lance.
“That was how they plugged you into the Matrix”
“Just How many people are actually in the matrix?”
“About 7 and a half billion people”
“I am ever going to have to go back into the matrix?”
“We could go back in there right now, if you want? Or would you want to do training?
“Training!?”
“ We are about to enter construct, within there we can create anything from training programs, Weapons, cars and even cloths. Anything in particular that you would want do to?”
“Fighting and Weapons!”
“Ok”
Lance sat down in one of the chairs, Morpheus grabbed one of the needles and put it into Lance’s neck. He then walked over to one of the computers and inserted some disks.
“Are you ready?”
“Yes sure, let’s do this”
Lance opened his eyes and looked around. There was endless whiteness. Suddenly 5 swat team members appeared.
Lance ran forwards kicking one in the face, sending him flying to the ground he turned and blocked an attack from another swat, he jumped him and kick one span round and kicked the another. Two swat remand, they both drew nightsticks. Lance went to punch one, but before he knew what was going on, he was being pelted by nightsticks. Lance spin kicked and tripped up the two swat, before they even hit the ground, He jumped up and kick them forwards.
He got out his phone
“That was too easy”
“fine then”
Two mp5ks appeared in front of him, he picked them up and looked up again, everything had changed, the never ending whiteness had been replaced with a huge warehouse.
“He’s in here!”
“Go, go, go!”
Lance saw swat members flooding in through the doors and aiming their guns towards him. He jumped away from the hail of gun fire and on top of a huge container he ran forwards and fired down at the swat. He jumped down from atop of the container and ran towards a group of swat while firing behind him self at another group. He turned went he saw and swat member with an automatic shotgun run into the room and fired at Lance. Lance went to fire but he had used all his bullets. He dropped his guns and kicked an another gun that was on the floor into his hands and fired. He looked around and saw the carnage.
Lance got out his phone and tried to call the Nebuchadnezzar.
“The number you have dialled is currently on another line, please call back later”
Lance dropped his phone, and ran out of the warehouse,
In front of him, maybe 30 swat all piled out two swat vans.
“freeze!”
A huge helicopter flew past Lance. He looked up and saw and minigun being pulled towards the helicopter door. He quickly jumped backwards and back into the warehouse. He looked around the room again and noticed a katana, he picked it up and picked up another MP5k.
Lance ran though the door and towards the swat team, bullets flew past but none hit him. He fired a few rounds from the MP5k and then charged and started to fling the sword around. He could hear the sound of something spinning up in the distance. He jumped up into the air just before the minigun chopper fired down destroying everything on the ground. He aimed his gun, and fired one shot. The bullet flew forward and pierced the cockpit. The helicopter slowly started to fall. Lance watched it, as it dropped into the warehouse. A giant explosion suddenly filled the street.
He phone started to ring.
“Yes?”
“Lance! What the hell happened in their?”
“Nothing I couldn’t handle”
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Oct 12th, 2004 06:42 AM |
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male
Location: Kent, England |
Next part should be finished very soon.
A drawing to go with the last part of the story
 Attachment: levi0002.jpg
This has been downloaded 29 time(s).
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Nov 6th, 2004 11:28 AM |
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