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TigerEyes
Immortal soldier

Gender: Female
Location: Canada.

Immortal Being

(once again comes a morbid sort of story from the mind of Tiger! Enjoy and please comment!)

I pushed his limp body to the ground, hearing the crash of skull to cement tile. The scratching noise I detested so very much. I looked down into the blank eyes of the blond boy, whose life I had just taken. He had been smiling and laughing only seconds ago and now he lay lifeless. A wave of satisfaction took over me; I could once again feel the heat coursing through my veins and body.
It was a harsh reality; I took lives in order to keep myself alive. Yet I wasn’t alive, I was the same dark haired, pale skinned, skinny, dorky sixteen year old girl I had been for over fifty years. The very same morbid mind frame controlled me as it did then, and it seemed to make this new life easier. If I had been anything like the other children, I’d be dead myself by now.
I broke the contact with the boy’s eyes and turned away from him slowly making my way back into the darkness, my hair blowing around wildly, hitting me in the face. I left the corpse to rot in the empty alley way until found several days from now, by then my mark will have disappeared , leaving nothing for police to suspect anything.
My life was an art. I dance between the shadows, staying out of mortal eyes and I seduced them to make my kill. Over the years, I had learned to paint over my envy for them. It was true, that I envied them, they were able to walk in daylight, feel love and comfort and most important they were able to die, to take that last breath before leaving this world. I was bound to this earth, unable to die, unable to love and unable to see the sunrise. I am alone in my very thought, action and word.
I am a vampire, the immortal being of loneliness.


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derrick666
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Gender: Male
Location: In the in between...

I like it, very wickedly dark and poetic.

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TigerEyes
Immortal soldier

Gender: Female
Location: Canada.

thanks...i was trying a different writting style...but yah my stories are very dark and usually more morbid.


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