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Bitter Sweet Revenge
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Allor_Vader
Elven Warrior of the RP

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Bitter Sweet Revenge (VIOLENT)

"Bitter Sweet Revenge" has been editted due to violent content.

--Captain REX

[SPOILER - highlight to read]: Allor looked up at the stars. She wore her black cloak hood up, so no one could identify her. Tonight was the night. She would have her revenge on the Jedi that killed her mother. As the death played back in her head, Allor slipped into the small house. Jedi's weren't suppose to fall in love nor marry, but this one had secretly broke that rule without the council knowing. Not only a wife, but he had a son and daughter, the son seven and the girl one.

She walked up the stairs with her cat-like movements. Her shallow breathe didn't give her away. The woman would be first. Allor gently opened the door and ignited her lightsaber with a buzz. The woman woke. Allor quickly pressed her hand against the woman's face. She was horrified. The woman's name was Dorme. Dorme's brown hair fell in ripples of brown curls, and her big brown eyes were large with panic.

Allor smiled, 'stupid, ignorant woman.' Allor slid her lightsaber across the dainty neck. Dorme's makeup was still perfect. Now she was perfect...perfectly dead. Allor smiled. There wasn't blood. Emperor Palpatine said that if she truly wanted to enjoy her revenge, she had to see her victims bleed. She put her lightsaber up.

Allor backed out of the bed room. She needed something messy. She crept into the kitchen and grabbed a sharp roast knife. She then crept upto a door. It was painted blue and had stars on it. Allor gently opened the door. She found a bandanna and gagged the boy with it. She then used belts to tie him to the bed. She then gently shook him.

His blue eyes jerked open. His blonde hair was wet from sweat. He knew what this hooded figure was...a sith. His mother and father had both told him about them. He started to panic.

Last edited by REXXXX on Jul 12th, 2003 at 06:35 PM

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[SPOILER - highlight to read]: Allor smiled knowing the boy wouldn't see it. She held the knife above the boys finger an slowly cut it off. She did this to each finger. Then Allor cut off his wrist and arm. She did this to the other hand's fingers, wrist, and arm. The boy tried to scream, but couldn't. She slapped him. Tears formed in his eyes. They began to get red and puffy. He knew he was going to die. Allor then proceeded to the boy's toes, and ankles. She paused for a second and then cut his legs off. She then sat on the bed beside the little boy named Ben Jr. Allor promptly slice his neck. The blood splattered. It got on Allor's arm. Her eyes were wild. The little boy's eye's glazed over. His breathing stopped, and his heart be ceased to be.

Allor got up, put the knife in her pouch that hung around her waist, and went to the little girl's room. The crib and room was decorated in pink and white. Laces and ruffles were everywhere. Allor picked up the little girl. The baby looked up at Allor and started to cry. Allor lowered her hood and rocked the baby in her arms. The child fell back to sleep. She couldn't do it. Allor couldn't kill the baby. She pulled her hood on and brought the baby back to Mau. She would trained as a sith.

Allor informed Palpatine that the woman and small child were both dead. She presented the bundle to him. "When she grows up, I will be her master." Allor promised knowing that the emperor was contemplating the idea.

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[SPOILER - highlight to read]: "You are both softhearted but evil. Choosing which one you value the most will choose your path? He said. Allor nodded.

She had done it. Obi-wan has paid, but the lost of Allor's mother still pained her. All the killing did was make her more blood-thirsty. Was it good? Allor didn't know. All she could do was play over and over the memory of her mother's death in her head. Her anger grew, and it turned into hate. She had taken her first big step into the Sith world.

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(((a normal fanfic that I'd like opinions on)))

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