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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male Location: Kent, England |
The Matrix Restarted
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Jack- 14 year old school boy
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Jack started falling, everything around him was moving slowly. He looked down at the road and suddenly looked up when he heard a horn, a truck was coming. The truck was getting close and closer and he was still falling, there was nothing he could do. Jack looked up at the truck again and was nearly blinded by the light. Jack suddenly woke in his bed breathing heavliy, relising it was only a dream, or was it?
Some time later Jack got on to his computer.
"Welcome to AOL" the computer said. he clicked on to MSN Messager and typed in his username, Lance. A new screen came up with a message on it, hellow lance. Jack looked around surpised. He typed a message back-
Who are you?
That is somthing i can not tell you at this time, the matrix has you, you must escape.
The matrix?
You will find out later.
the screen went blank.
The rain poured down as jack walked to school. He was still confused about what had happened on his computer. Jack walked over the bridge to school , he looked down at the road below, and suddenly remebered his dream. He stood there for a mintue thinking, could his dream be real? He heard the school bell in the distance, he quickly ran to school .
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male Location: Kent, England |
please post comments, ideas, etc
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Jul 30th, 2003 08:13 AM |
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WillUEvrGiv^
Stealthing to you
Gender: Male Location: United Kingdom |
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Jul 30th, 2003 08:56 AM |
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male Location: Kent, England |
thanks ,
still got loads of more the story to do though
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Jul 30th, 2003 09:00 AM |
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Fu'Seth
master Jedi
Gender: Unspecified Location: United Kingdom |
I think its quite good!!! kepp working on it.
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Jul 30th, 2003 11:27 AM |
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male Location: Kent, England |
thanks, should have the second part finished later to day
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Jul 30th, 2003 11:31 AM |
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Bicnarok
From Ganymede
Gender: Male Location: Cydonia, Mars |
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male Location: Kent, England |
Next part of story, based on Kid's story off of the animatrix...
It was Lunch time, the rain had stopped, so Jack walked on to the field.His phone suddenly went off. He answered it...
" Hellow Lance"
" Who are you and how do you know a mobie number?"
"I can not tell you now because you are in geat danger. look to the roof of the main building"
Jack looked up at the roof and then turned his head back to his phone.
" All i see is some guy in a suit with shades on"
" he is an agent, and if you don't want to find out what they are capable of, i suggest you run"
Jack droped his phone and started to run towards the main gate of the school. He was out of the school, he looked around, the road was to busy to cross. Jack turned around and saw the agent standing in front of him
" Come quitely, and i will not hurt you" the agent exclaimed.
Jack turn around and ran up the steps of the bridge, he was at the top. he looked infront of him, there was another agent on the other side of the bridge. with an agent in front and behind him Jack didn't know what to do.Jack slowly climbed of the railing of the bridge, he look down at the road.
He took his hands off of the railing, he lent over, his feet were off the bridge, Jack started falling, everything around him was moving slowly. He looked down at the road and suddenly looked up when he heard a horn, a truck was coming. The truck was getting close and closer and he was still falling, there was nothing he could do. Jack looked up at the truck again and was nearly blinded by the light. He screamed out as the truck hit him, he was sent flying due to the force of the truck hitting him. he hit the floor and everything went black.
His gravestone read " beloved son"
but this is only the end of the beggining
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Jul 30th, 2003 06:16 PM |
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genral zink
Keeper of the Jello
Gender: Unspecified Location: on my big space ship |
End of the beginning eh? So you're going to post the beginning of the middle?
Good story. Imagine how scary it would be if you were only a kid, had no combat experience, and had to run from 2 Agents? Geez, I would freak out....
Good story so far AliasNeo.
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Jul 31st, 2003 12:58 AM |
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REXXXX
Networking
Gender: Male Location: San Diego Moderator |
Nice story, AliasNeo.
Bicnarok, this is not the place to post crackpot theories about us really being inside of the Matrix. That goes in the Matrix section.
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Jul 31st, 2003 01:04 AM |
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SalemKent
Restricted
Gender: Male Location: In Love With SlayerChick Account Restricted |
Awesome
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Jul 31st, 2003 07:54 PM |
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male Location: Kent, England |
Jack opened his eyes, he was on a bed surrounded by machinery. A person walked up to the bed-
"Lance, your finally awake"
"What happened? and where am I?
"You were released from the matrix and you are in the real world"
"The matrix? the real world?
"The matrix is a simulation of the world which almost every single person is plugged in to, it was build to blind them from the truth, the truth of the real world.The real world is now only a half destroyed planet controlled by robots"
"Right" Jack said sarcastically" so who are you then?"
"I am Morpheus, captain of the Nebuchadnezzar
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2 DAYS LATER|Jack is now called Lance| This story is set in between in the first and second movie| Moupheus still beleives the propercy|
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"Lance, there is someone i would like you to meet" Moupheus called out to Lance. Lance walked up over to Moupheus "Lance, this is Neo, the one"
"Hellow Lance. Moupheus has Lance had the training disks?"
"Yes,"
"Maybe he can get away from agents but how good will he do against me"
The city was quite as Neo and Lance stood there ready to fight.
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Aug 1st, 2003 06:36 AM |
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Anarion
J.
Gender: Unspecified Location: Home |
Hmm... rad. I'm looking forward to the next part..
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"The sword must be used to protect the people and not to kill...."
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Aug 2nd, 2003 05:31 PM |
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male Location: Kent, England |
Neo walked over to Lance
"Ready?" Neo asked.
"Bring it on" Lance answered.
Lance jump back, dodging Neo's sudden kicks. Lance ran forward, bringing his hand back, he suddenly jumped forward, throwing punches at Neo. As Neo went to block the punchs, Lance suddenly raised his leg kicking Neo in the stomach. Neo stood up after being flung back by the kick " This is too easy for you", Neo got out his phone, "Link, load up the weapons"
Neo and Lance, now armed with a sword each were ready to fight, again. Lance ran forward, slashing the sword around. Neo steped back then did a front flip over Lance, then in the middle of his flip, he brought the sword down, just above lance's head. Lance quickly turned and blocked the attcked. Neo's phone went off. Neo landed and took the phone out of pocket...
"Yes?"
"Neo, its trinity, she was in the matrix, then some how, some agents got her, they got her prisoner"....................
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Aug 2nd, 2003 07:09 PM |
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Anarion
J.
Gender: Unspecified Location: Home |
Interesting.
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"The sword must be used to protect the people and not to kill...."
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Aug 3rd, 2003 11:01 AM |
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male Location: Kent, England |
Neo and Lance opened their eyes and get out of their chairs. Neo walked over to Link
"Where have the agents kept her?"
"it’s exactly like when they captured morpheus, big building, big lobby. One difference though instead of a tiny force of guards, theres about one hundred swat guarding every floor, your good Neo, but your not that good."
"We'll need help"
The Nebuchadnezzar, the Hammer, the Icarus and the Osiris flew to the meeting point. Morpheus walked down the gang plank to meet the others.
"Morpheus, why have you brought us here?" Thaddeus exclaimed
"To save Trinity.” Morpheus said back
“So why do you need us”
“Trintiy is held in a building, this building is 56 floors high. There is 100 swat on every floor, that’s 5600 swat all together. Trinity is on the top floor, so there’s no way we could get up there without your help”
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Setokaiba900
Junior Member
Gender: Male Location: United States |
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REXXXX
Networking
Gender: Male Location: San Diego Moderator |
Completely irrevelavant, Setokaiba.
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Aug 16th, 2003 01:47 AM |
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Crisis
Mr.Keanu Dude
Gender: Male Location: Kent, England |
Link stepped towards morpheus, lance and neo " for neo it's going to be easy he can just fly to the building. But Lance and Morpheus the nearest place to the building i can drop you is about 50 miles away..."
"50!" Lance exclaimed
"....You and morpheus will have to go on a train, then when you get to the station there will be a car which you take to get to the building, in the back of the car there are weapons if you need them. Oh ya, Lance, one more thing if you see an agent don't fight him just run, neo is the only one who can fight agents and surive"
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Aug 29th, 2003 06:08 AM |
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masterofmatrix
Matrix Geezer
Gender: Unspecified Location: The Real World |
we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!we want more!!
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"It Ends In November"
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