KMC Forums - I finally wrote a song...

keeping in the vein i wrote a song something like this, and its prolly my best

election time, time to vite again,
negative policies with a positive spin,
political promises, cardinal sin,
i really didn't think that john howard would win,
but they proved me wrong on that one,
never realised the australian public could be so dumb,
still i didn't exspect george bush to be back,
thought they'd figured hom out,
but really, the results arn't worth writing hmoe about,
after watching the iraqis be liberated,
and bush's responcibilty delegated,
dosn't wanna be the one to explain,
tells us osama is the one to blame,
because of two towers, and two planes,
but you can wash away the blood, sweat and tears,
now you've voted Bus in for four more years,
but hes gone in two thousand and eight,
but we can only pray that its not to late,
because when Uma killed Bill, we wished it was bush,
if he stood on the edge, i'de have to say push,
watch an arab village go under a daisy cutter,
do the world a favour, indite the mother ****er,
cos their may have been monica for president bill,
but the thought of george and johny makes me physiclly ill,
both spoke out on gay marrige sooner or later,
now they have to sneak kisses in the elevator,
because new things are something that they seem to fear,
so they speak out against gays so not see seem queer,
johnnys inablility to say sorry divided a nation,
but some bondage with george seems ike a good invitation,
and before America has a chance to cope,
he tells us we support terror, when we buy dope,
but heres something on which you can bank,
your deffinatly supporting terror when you fill up your petrol tank,
because oils what this war is all about,
and behind georges intention there can be no doubt,
because without oil there'd be no war at all,
and george tells us about how the evil axis is going to fall,
because americas becoming the worlds war whore,
who dosn't get the worlds respect anymore,
but if you say you do it for god then its all ok,
the same validation for hating people who are gay,
but allahs ok is just not enough,
showing your fairth with dynamite is incredibly tough,
and the public rely on the red white and blue,
in a case where they just dont know what to do,
because through CNN and FOX they only see one side,
while behind the government briefing is where the truth lyes,
and they worry about Chingy and the state of his bling,
while the intelliget people worry about relevent things,
like a war that has children getting blown apart,
and women getting killed in strip bomb attacks,
so dont buy into this war on another mans faith,
before geroge pushes the button and we all meet the wraith
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not so much a song as a rap i wrote for some friends who want to rap but havn't had a chance to write....so what do you think?

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I am aware that "your" should be "you're," and while I know I should change it as not to offend the grammar fans around the boards, school always said not to bow to peer pressure so it stays as it is