People gotta prey cause if I'm goin all out,
I'll beat the shit from them in the bout,
born & raised in da hood, don't waste my time
mother****in' looser, I'm gonna make da businesss work and shut down every dork who's gonna cross my path,
trust me it's gonna be a bloodbath.
Every cop in the hood will be me don't shoot,
so mercyfuly I'll kick them with my timberland boot,
Run for your life when da gangsta comes you
man I gotta a bullet with your name on it,
show respect you don't know who you're ****in with
don't mess with me or i'll mess with ya, believe me,
i'll make capone looking like a priest when i'll make ya
taste my fist you'll pray me to let ya go away.
Payback time, victory is mine, I own da hood and other
gangsta are dog food.
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To be honest, I find it not that great, for one it doesn't rhyme properly at all...not that this is always necessary but it can be useful. Then I think the Theme is rather dull, kind of basic gangsta rap. Pretty much everyone attempting at rap says the same things, nowadays (the amateurs I mean). I am not that knowledgable about all forms of Rap and I am sure there are great lyrics, but that whole "**** with me I'll kill you" attitude is nothing special anymore. Maybe you should write about how you feel or something meaningful.
Yo, dude, it's like this and like that yo' rhymes are wack,
If I was yo' momma it'd be to school yo' go back,
'Cos you be foolin' no fool with your dribble attack,
It's intelligence, rhymes, ill-skillz, you lack,
In time it may come, as your ballz drop to the mat,
As it is was now, no-one's gonna have time for your tack.
So ends lesson one of my no-frills rap-ap.
__________________ Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.
I feel i must say that your rap is dated
Yes its true I did Hate it
There's something wrong with your rythm and rhyme
I gotta say you're wasting your time/
you didn't really say much...actually you didn't say anything in this entire verse...just for us to believe that u are unstoppable...yet you haven't proven that in your rhymes...
cliche many mc's fall under...
__________________
Life is short and the art long, the occasion instant, experiment perilous, decision difficult.
Gangsta stopped being original and meaningful a long time ago. That verse sounds more like a lame battle rap than a song. We know you're not a gangsta and you didn't grow up in the hood. Quit frontin' you damn fool!
Fools who think they're Ice T should never pick up the mic
Rhyme that shit in Compton and you'll get put out like a light
my advice: get some serus Bling, shawty, and get some hoes up on dat *****, then a candycoated lexus, wit 50 inch rims, and we gon be bawlin yo!!!!! ohh shit, lean wit, rock wit it!!!! sanp ya fingaz *****, whats happenin, was up.
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Feb 10th, 2006 11:35 AM
Thanks, I love Internally Bleeding. Its wicked.
When did this happen? Wow, I missed a lot.
Quit frontin' you damn fool!
