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My Rock lyrics!?
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The Infekted
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My Rock lyrics!?

don't know if this wonder be considered rock or Emo.anywayz I made these lyrics. I've gotten attached to rock songs like AFI, 30 seconds to mars, Cold war kids,etc.

So im asking you r these lyrics good? Maybe it sounds more like a poem?!

Windowed Heart

Open the window
Can you im vulnerable?
It doesn't take a rocket scientist to know.
Like people say you reap what you sew

And if you attack my heart and you'll know
So...
Don't break the window(x2)
Please(x3)
You'll knock out the glass and let my heart bleed

Cause your the bad seed
With a tempting need to hurt the innocent
Then again my heart isn't for sale
Its mine so..

Don't break my window(x2)
Please(x3)
Other wise my heart will bleed
Do something for a start and protect the windowed heart.

It might sound kinda gay but I don't so thats why I asked you all.
What genre would this fit under anywayz?

Jun 19th, 2007 05:25 AM

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Solo
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Not emo, not good. You won't get anywhere being another AFI fan, learn something about music.

Jun 19th, 2007 06:36 AM

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The Infekted
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So it sucks??? Well im glad to have your honest feedback.

Jun 20th, 2007 03:39 AM

manorastroman
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woof.

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ESB -1138
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Not so good lyrics.

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Jun 20th, 2007 02:19 PM

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Solo
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Bizzy Bullet
So it sucks??? Well im glad to have your honest feedback.

i could try to guide you in the right direction, as far as music goes, if you were so inclined. all depends what type of genre you're going for, man i am drunk

Last edited by Solo on Jun 22nd, 2007 at 02:45 AM

Jun 22nd, 2007 02:42 AM

chillmeistergen
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Basically, don't aim for a genre. Don't take advice, as to which genre you should go for either. It should be about what you feel, not, what genre you feel it should be in.

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Bardock42
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Bizzy Bullet
don't know if this wonder be considered rock or Emo.anywayz I made these lyrics. I've gotten attached to rock songs like AFI, 30 seconds to mars, Cold war kids,etc.

So im asking you r these lyrics good? Maybe it sounds more like a poem?!

Windowed Heart

Open the window
Can you im vulnerable?
It doesn't take a rocket scientist to know.
Like people say you reap what you sew

And if you attack my heart and you'll know
So...
Don't break the window(x2)
Please(x3)
You'll knock out the glass and let my heart bleed

Cause your the bad seed
With a tempting need to hurt the innocent
Then again my heart isn't for sale
Its mine so..

Don't break my window(x2)
Please(x3)
Other wise my heart will bleed
Do something for a start and protect the windowed heart.

It might sound kinda gay but I don't so thats why I asked you all.
What genre would this fit under anywayz?

Oh, dude, incredibly bad.

And "what you reap is what you sew" ...ouch.

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Jun 22nd, 2007 03:21 AM

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Disturbed Angel
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Hm.... You tried. I'll give you that. You gotta refine it. You can check out my stuff in the poetry forum if you want an example

......tho only one person seems to like it.......

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Azure
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it was...kinda...bleh...but I like the "window" concept. got anything else?

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Solo
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Originally posted by Bardock42
Oh, dude, incredibly bad.

And "what you reap is what you sew" ...ouch.

im dtrunk right now but im rpettyy sure theres a lou reed songs that has that xact line

Jun 22nd, 2007 08:49 AM

ESB -1138
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Bardock42
Oh, dude, incredibly bad.

And "what you reap is what you sew" ...ouch.

I think it is an actually saying that was horribly, horribly deformed during the transaction from mind to computer.

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Jun 22nd, 2007 09:34 AM

Bardock42
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Solo
im dtrunk right now but im rpettyy sure theres a lou reed songs that has that xact line

Not in this particular line up.

There's also a RATM song that has the famous biblical quote "What you reap is what you sow", but the sew thing is incredibly amusing...picturing it.

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Originally posted by ESB -1138
I think it is an actually saying that was horribly, horribly deformed during the transaction from mind to computer.

Y-yes....lets assume for a moment that I am not an idiot.

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Jun 22nd, 2007 11:11 AM

ESB -1138
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Originally posted by Bardock42
Y-yes....lets assume for a moment that I am not an idiot.

Will do. WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
EEEEEE!! Happy Dance

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Jun 22nd, 2007 11:26 AM

Solo
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by Bardock42
Not in this particular line up.

There's also a RATM song that has the famous biblical quote "What you reap is what you sow", but the sew thing is incredibly amusing...picturing it.

Y-yes....lets assume for a moment that I am not an idiot.

Haha! I didn't even realize he spelled it wrong.

Jun 22nd, 2007 03:54 PM

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You should try not to rhyme so much.

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ESB -1138
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Turn Turn Turn by the Byrds

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Jun 22nd, 2007 05:56 PM

Slay
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''Can you im vulnerable?'' ?

As in vulnerably instant messaging or a typo?

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The Infekted
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Stone Samurai

Im unbreakable,I fight with passion
Take down my rival in a orderly and mannerable fashion
blood covers the battle field of the enemies I've slain
They all died by the sword I weild

(Chorus)
Im headstrong from time on
Survive the screams of the dead from now on
I can't pray to the shooting star to take back what I've done

The evil beast enters my soul
I wanna beg for my LIFE!
But too bad the poison took its toll
Somehow my trial will unfold and expose my past

(Chorus)
Headstrong from time on
Survive the screams of the dead from now on
I can't wish upon a star to stop what I've done

How about this one???

Jul 4th, 2007 04:26 AM