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Rand al'Thor
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Someone please...

Ok am gonna be called a stupid noob for this thread...because first off its off topic so I am sure Ush is gonna be in here to shut it down...but anyways before that happenens can someone please visit this link!

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It leads to the first five chapters of the book I am working on and I need people to review it. I don't care if you say it sucks balls and should never be published...just tell me why it sucks. Constructive Critisim is crucial for any writer wether it be me or Tom Clancy.

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Does this have anything to do with Star Wars?

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Originally posted by Nactous
Does this have anything to do with Star Wars?

Nope nothing at all...thats why I said people were going to call me a noob.

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Well, from what I read, it sounds pretty interesting, could be a little more descriptive, epically during the slaughter.

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Closed, with an official warning to darthrevan69; continue deliberately and knowingly posting off-topic like that and you will be banned.

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