I recently decided to write my own collection of short stories, I'm posting chapter 4 since it's not required to read the first 3 to read it, basically every 3 chapters is its own story:
Hope you guys like it. Do note that my story contains homosexual relationships, the first 3 chapters actually have that as its main focus, so would this one.
__________________ "Vader's pulse and breathing were machine-regulated, so they could not quicken; but something in his chest became more electric around his meetings with the Emperor; he could not say how. A feeling of fullness, of power, of dark and demon mastery -- of secret lusts, unrestrained passion, wild submission -- all these things were in Vader's heart as he neared his Emperor. These things and more."
Thanks for sharing it with us. You're a great writer and that was a very enjoyable story. I particularly liked Exar Kun unknowingly mocking the Death Star.
I love writing fanfiction for series I like although so far I've only written one story for Star Wars.
not to 'plug' or 'advertise' our site but we go some pretty good fanfic writers, Bantha and emperordmb are really excellent SW Fanfic writers you guys should check em out!
If they are such good writers why don't they ****ing have a deal with mother****ing disney mickeymouse club house Walt satan disney MOTHER****IN niqqas at get a muthaluvin contract wit darth Lucas and sell ur soul for a million bucks
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Registered: Mar 2014
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As Xtasy mentioned, I'm currently working on a fanfic, and I plan on starting the beginning of it this weekend.
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Shadilay my brothers and sisters. With any luck we will throw off the shackles of normie oppression. We have nothing to lose but our chains! Praise Kek!
THE MOTTO IS "IN KEK WE TRUST"
Yes, I'm planning to write another story that will continue on from this one. It won't be for a while yet, but I'll post a link here when I have it up.
I'm reading through WildBantha's Dark Necros thing right now. Just finished the first post.
I have a complaint about the forum though. On my phone, the colors are black on grey/white and are easy to read. On my PC though, the colors are white on black. The white on black strains my eyes. Even light-grey on dark-grey (like it is on this forum) would be better better than white on black.
Registered: Mar 2014
Location: The Proud Nation of Kekistan
I doubt you can change it even with an account. You could always copy it, and paste it into a white text file though.
I fully encourage making an account however.
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Shadilay my brothers and sisters. With any luck we will throw off the shackles of normie oppression. We have nothing to lose but our chains! Praise Kek!
THE MOTTO IS "IN KEK WE TRUST"
Registered: Mar 2014
Location: The Misty Mountains
Necros isn't finished yet and im taking a little hiatus to consider where I want the story to go from where it is but thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy
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I have some OC characters that my friends and I have created. Someday I will actually start writing short stories that feature the OCs we made. As you all can guess, Sadow is my OC.
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Just finished reading this one. I enjoyed it quite a bit. I like how you're keeping Kory from being overpowered. She's lifting pots and pebbles rather than having world-destroying TK. I imagine that she will slowly grow more powerful the farther along this gets.
The conflict between Kory and Ward was done well. The fight against the flesh-raiders was also good. My only complaint is that Kory seemed to breeze through her Hoth mission. Perhaps there should have been more of a struggle against Valon or the troops that tried to capture her. And perhaps she should have had a little more difficulty with keeping the Republic's morale from withering away.
Overall, great job. Can't wait to read the next chapter you posted!
Not sure on what era though, Vitiate's era has a lot to work with, but I like the idea of an undiscovered Sith sect during the Rebellion.
Not sure.
__________________ "Happiness is a lie. Life is horror. The light is always dying all across the universe. The last star will flicker out someday, when it does, all that remains is shadow. And I will be its king!"'-Amahl Farouk
It could be interesting. Lot's of EU and Canon characters to work with.
If I had enough free time and if I was a better writer, I would probably write a story taking place several centuries after Return of the Jedi. I'd like a clean slate rather than working within the framework of an era created by somebody else.
Jun 2nd, 2014 07:26 AM
