feltonfreak
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just tell me what you think:
so sad
so lost
i wander alone in a desert picking flowrers that turn to dust
my mind has gone
my soul lingers beyond my grasp
no where to go
no where to hide
now i'm scared
filled with hate
if i was a scale i would drop
having said this i am filled with nothing..................just space
*o and don't try to copy, i already entered it to books, and a poetry contest. sorry*
muahahaha jus telll me what ya think... please
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muahahahaha
Sep 5th, 2003 09:32 PM
Vetkin
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Its nice. Very sad yet romantic.
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Sep 5th, 2003 09:36 PM
DeNiro
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is that a song u r writing or a poem but very good
Sep 5th, 2003 09:41 PM
feltonfreak
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idk, i wrote it as a poem but i could make it into a song.
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muahahahaha
Sep 5th, 2003 09:47 PM
DeNiro
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look i gave insprational advice now why doesnt ne one ask for my advice on my thread i did so well i thought lol
Sep 5th, 2003 09:53 PM
Dexx
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"if i was a scale i would drop" omg....how....contemporan *hysterical giggle*
Sep 5th, 2003 10:14 PM
Fire
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quite good
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Sep 5th, 2003 10:17 PM
feltonfreak
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hahahahaha, very funny, and i must congrtulate you "dexx" becasue you have no sence of humor sorry.
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muahahahaha
Sep 5th, 2003 10:31 PM
feltonfreak
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actually scratch that
you did give you option
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muahahahaha
Sep 5th, 2003 10:32 PM
Dexx
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quote: Originally posted by feltonfreak
hahahahaha, very funny, and i must congrtulate you "dexx" becasue you have no sence of humor sorry.
no, i do. it's just more peculiar.
Sep 5th, 2003 10:33 PM
LindsIsSexyK
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I think its ok, could be longer and more detailed
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Sep 5th, 2003 10:43 PM
dublecee
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who watches invader zim
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Sep 29th, 2004 11:07 PM
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