Ego Failure
Flaming Homosexual
Gender: Unspecified Location: United States
The Poetry Thread
I'd love to read the written thoughts, emotions, and opinions of anyone who's willing to share their form of expression.
I'll begin by posting a poem I wrote several years ago while in high school.
Please feel free to add your own ..
Long ago I walked a leafy path,
within the dark, cold dawn;
my matching mood changed suddenly,
upon view of a posing fawn.
Her beauty was unimaginable,
her ears and eyes so soft;
along the path she stayed there standing,
as the darkness escaped aloft.
Like a child dining late at night,
or a Puritan enjoying song;
across the path i followed daily,
she did not at all belong.
The creature stood their standing,
as if it's purpose was for I;
for our souls knew one another,
and it cured my every sigh.
Beheld by such a marveled sight,
the word 'capure' entered mind;
for i could not begin to ponder,
my love taking off in stride.
I harnessed up my rope in hand,
its knot so tense and strong;
and threw my hopes around her neck,
her everlasting presense longed.
My darling answered with shrieks and cries,
how average she seemed when caged;
freedom was its beauty,
she flew, she sought, she grazed.
I flung the gate door open,
go off, be gone, be free!;
yet still wished more than ever,
she still belonged to me.
Mar 7th, 2004 07:57 AM
StinkFist462
Your Mom
Gender: Male Location: Minneapolis, MN
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Mar 7th, 2004 08:22 AM
dave123
Funny Boy
Gender: Female Location: Cactusland?
none of you are ready for my poetic genius
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Mar 7th, 2004 11:11 AM
furryman
honky
Gender: Male Location: Flying
I wouldn't be so sure
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Mar 7th, 2004 11:22 AM
Gaca
KATIUSHA
Gender: Unspecified Location:
poerty to fiction area!
Mar 7th, 2004 11:24 AM
dave123
Funny Boy
Gender: Female Location: Cactusland?
quote: Originally posted by burlyman
Maggie I have your shrine
Maggie will you be mine
Maggie lets cross the line
Maggie tonight we dine
Maggie what we'll do is not a crime
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Mar 7th, 2004 11:32 AM
furryman
honky
Gender: Male Location: Flying
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Mar 7th, 2004 11:33 AM
Ego Failure
Flaming Homosexual
Gender: Unspecified Location: United States
quote: Originally posted by burlyman
I wouldn't be so sure
Bring it on, baby!
Mar 8th, 2004 05:38 AM
Pantera
< insert random comment >
Gender: Male Location: North Carolina
How come you only get on late at night ego?
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Mar 8th, 2004 05:39 AM
Dr. Leg Kick
Aesculapius
Gender: Male Location: Los Angeles
once again ill just put down whatever comes to my mind
today a massacre of stupidity occured/
the BIIING era was pointless and handfuls of brain were overturned/
during the reign of nonsense, i felt like amputating my arms/
for good luck i caried several stolen Leprechuan lucky charms/
as for BIIING, for every action there is a reaction/
his result was getting banned for immediate human attractions/
as for me, you can find me fat and sleek, a true hog of Epicirus' herd/
BIING, GIIIANT or whatever u are, you will always remain a noobie turd/
alright good night everyone
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Last edited by Dr. Leg Kick on Mar 8th, 2004 at 06:31 AM
Mar 8th, 2004 06:26 AM
Strangelove
Misunderstood Genius
Gender: Male Location: The Transmogrifier
Here's a haiku I wrote for my Creative Writing class
The raven flies overhead
A crystal clear azure sky
frames shadowy wings
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Mar 8th, 2004 06:28 AM
Dr. Leg Kick
Aesculapius
Gender: Male Location: Los Angeles
not a fan of haiku but that was pretty good
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Life is short and the art long, the occasion instant, experiment perilous, decision difficult.
Mar 8th, 2004 06:30 AM
Strangelove
Misunderstood Genius
Gender: Male Location: The Transmogrifier
oh, and here's a single line of haiku, exactly 17 syllables:
Dead hands of trees burst from the earth, clawing the sky with fingers of bone
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Mar 8th, 2004 06:33 AM
Dr. Leg Kick
Aesculapius
Gender: Male Location: Los Angeles
good^
cmon more comments people
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Mar 8th, 2004 06:36 AM
Strangelove
Misunderstood Genius
Gender: Male Location: The Transmogrifier
Bleak Winter
An endless sea of white
In the icy cold of winter
the arctic wind throws
Specks of cloud in the air
Back to the heavens
The gray skies seethe over head
Rolling like iron waves
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Mar 8th, 2004 06:41 AM
Strangelove
Misunderstood Genius
Gender: Male Location: The Transmogrifier
Lonely Refuge
The blazing sun sets
on white towers
only to be replaced
by the guiding light at sea
The lonely refuge
rises high above the rocks
bringing its unwavering light
to those in peril
He looks down from his tower
to the sun setting
on the deep blue sea
He may be lonely
but he is never alone
-Inspired by Lighthouse Hill , by Edward Hopper
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Last edited by Strangelove on Mar 8th, 2004 at 06:50 AM
Mar 8th, 2004 06:46 AM
Ego Failure
Flaming Homosexual
Gender: Unspecified Location: United States
quote: Originally posted by leatherface12
How come you only get on late at night ego?
I'm awaken at nite, leather -- always been the late owl, type. Additionally, with school/work/etc .. this is when I have the time to mess around online ..
Mar 8th, 2004 06:47 AM
Pantera
< insert random comment >
Gender: Male Location: North Carolina
Oh ok.
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Mar 8th, 2004 06:52 AM
Roulette
Freak
Gender: Female Location: Arkham Asylum
So this darkness is my life,
these tears, my pain,
this blood, my freedom.
These bitter eyes that watch upon this broken dream.
Send me back into my world.
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Mar 8th, 2004 06:56 AM
dragonpisces272
got coffee?
Gender: Female Location: Where am I???
I like to write poetry, and had wrote so much before...if only I can remember where I put them...
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Mar 8th, 2004 09:13 AM
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