Liz: Jack, you have some serious explaining to do, blackbeard?? what in the world
Jack: umm it was a long time ago dear
Liz: I dont care if it was before I was born, It effects us now becuase he has Will
Jack: you act like you care about Wills Bloody mess
Liz: I do Care and you should as well, Will is our friend and it seems it may be YOUR fault he is in thi smess to begin with so start talking
Jackson: dad you have to tell her
Liz: so whats this Jackson knows of your dealings with Blackbeard in the past and I dont
Jack: its nothing really
Liz: well if its nothing really, why did he kidnapp the Govener of Port Royal!!!!
Jack: Ok LUV, Ill tell you, Long ago before I even met you and Will Turner, Blackbeard and I worked incahoots together to try and take down the Royal navy of Port Royal, so we could take over the city and make a Pirate port out of Port Royal I eneed up changing me mind and trying to get out of our agreement, I was not into killing innocent men much less killing anyone, so I abandoned ship one night while Blackbeard slept, it wasent tell the next moring he discovered I was missing, he sent word by messenger that he would never stop trying to hurt me or the people I care about for abandoning our agreement. he would hunt me and everyone that I loved down and stop at nothing untill I agree to finish what we started so many years ago. I am assuming this kidnapping of William, since he is the Govoner of Port Royal explains this promise Blackbeard made to me so may years ago
Kate : so thast what Blackbeard meant when he said, Captian Sparrow is the only one who can help your husband now Miss Turner
Liz: looks at Jack with tears in her eyes: Jack I cant believe you would keep something like this from me, did you not think I needed to know that I, we, our children could be in probable danger?? I thought I knew you
Jack: you do know me, I am sorry. My family means the most to me in this world
Liz: not ok jack, totally not ok, but right now all I care about is getting Will back and making sure he is safe from the harm you have bestowed upon all of us
Jack looks around the room and everyone is staring down at the floor, no one can look at him, they all thought he could be trusted, and why would he keep something like this from the people he just called part of his family
jack: If it is the last thing I do, I will beat Blackbeard and Gain all of your trust back, you all mean the world to me
liz: wont be so easy for me luv, youll have a lot of work to do to gain my trust back
Jack: Liz your pregnant, please try not to get so worked up, it could be bad for the baby
Liz: not half as bad as thinking you know someone and then feeling what it feels like to discover you were wrong
Liz turn and walks out the front dorr every one follows including Jackson, leaving Jack standing in the living room alone
Jackson runs up ahead of th eothers to catch up with Elizabeth
Jackson: mom do you really think you should have been that hard on him, it was a long time ago, you two have been through so much together, why are you this upset now?
Liz: Jackson, its not that I want to be angry at your father, I love him dearly, but when someone like Blackbeard makes a threat of that caliber, he should have told me, it just hurts my feelingfs thats all
jackson: mom, dad loves youso much, dont break his heart,
elizabeth stoppes and looks at Jackson
Liz: you are wise beyone your years son, and youhave the persuasion skills of your father, i am not trying to break your fathers heart, I am just, just
Jackson: being a b***h
Liz: looks at jackson, cracks a small smile and a little giggle and says, Aparetly so
Liz look sback at the house and realizes jackson is right, ABi, Alex, kate and Isabella stand in the background staring at liz, wondering what she plans to do
Liz starts walking back to the house,she plans to apoligize for being so hard on jack, she knows he only meant to protect his family and he would never do anything to jeaporidize their saftey, she smile as she walks into the house, Jack, jack where are you, she walks in to find Jack no where to be found , she rushes up the stairs enteres their bed room, no jack, she wet foot prints on the hard wood floors, and some of the furnature is knocked over,she relizes in horror, Blackbeard
She screams to everone, hes taken Jack, Blackbeard has taken Jack, to the pearl, we have to find jack, she runs to the pearl everyone follows including the crew, which whom was awakend by the screaming
Liz: Mr Gibbs, set sail for Port Royal with all haste
gibbs: yes mam
Liz staes out into the water, holding her belly, Jack I am so sorry, please be ok, a tear falls from her cheek
Jackson: mom, it will be ok, I promise, weve been through so many things, we can beat this, and put our family back together,
Liz: I am so sorry Jackson, for the way Ive behaved tonight
Jackson: Its ok mom, you need to go rest, I do not want anything happening to my brother or sister, go lie down, Ill take it from here
Liz nods and walks into the Captains Cabin, lies down on the bed and quickly falls asleep
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black: (rises from a chair in the cornor) jack , jack he croons long time no see eh. you broke a promise and i made one do you remember what that promise was?
jack:nods his head choking back tears
black: well to refresh your memory jack , i said i would hunt you and everyone that I loved down and stop at nothing until I agree to finish what we started so many years ago. do you agree Mr sparrow? your not really in the state to refuse right now are you
jack: ( You see the camera close up on the ropes the bind jack to the chair they are cut and jacks hands are free, he jumps up)you see blackbeard you forgot one very important thing I'm captain jack sparrow savvy.
black: I expected you would have a clever way to get yourself untied jack.
jack:yes yes you are correct now (he walks to will and begins uniting him) Now me and Mr turner will just be on our way. If you dont mind.
blackbeard laughs as he makes a hand motion, 20 or so men jump up from the dark corners of the room.
black:jack i knew this would happen.
as the men approach jack , we see him reach for his sword to find its not there
BACK ON PEARL
Liz is lieing motionless on the bed Jackson walks into the room
Jackson:mother , are you feeling alright?
After hearing no response Jackson walks to her side he pats her shes not breathing.
Jackson(quickly rushes out) Mr Gibbs , Abbi ,Alex, Bella help somebody mother is unconscious
Abi, Kate and Isabella run into the Captian's Cabin and see Elizabeth unconcious on the bed, kate checks her pule, she has a pulse it looks like shes is breathing slightly
Kate: she has a pulse!! she says loudly, dosent look slike shes breathing at all very well
Abi: THE BABY (she says in horror)
Isabella: well we cant just stand here, we have to do something!! what do we do???
Kate: looks at Elizabeth and realizes she is hemoraging, Oh my gosh, she says in shock there is a problem with the baby, we have got to get to shore!! MR GIBBS THE NEAREST PORT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE, ELIZABETH NEEDS A DOCTOR RIGHT AWAY!!!
Gibbs: what about Will and Jack?
Jackson: THEY CAN WAIT! next Port NOW, My Mothers and her childs lives are in Danger
Gibbs: Aye Sir, he says with a look of confusion and fear for Elizabeth and her baby in his eyes
Back on BlackBeards Ship, Jack and Will find themselves in a bit of a pickle, they have no weapons and about 20 men have gathers around them to basically kill them
Jack: wait wait wait, Blackbeard, I am having a thought here, you dont want to keep the Eunich do you? al though he does have a lovley singing voice, you should let him go, He is really of now value to you right? I mean Keep me in his place, Will looks at Jack and wonders what the hell Jack is up to,
Will: yes, (he says with a grin) you dont want to keep the Eunih do you ?
Jack looks at will its all he can do to not bust out laughing
BlackBeard: No I really do want to be keeping the Eunich he says with a big grin
Will: uh oh
Jack: Yea Uh oh( looks at will)Sorry Mate didnt know Black Beard was a eunich too! he says with a grin
Blackbeard: anyway Ill be keeping both of ya, Lock them in the Brig Boys, Jack Sparrow will come around to my side I know it, he wont be able to resist
Jack: Oh I can resit mate: I am NOT a Eunich!!!
Blackbeard : Not what I meant Sparrow,I meant when I have your entire FAMILY at mY MERCY! LOCK THEM IN THE BRIG, NOW
Jack and Will sit in the brig, trying to come up with a plan of action
Jack starts to feel weird, and gets a uneasy feeling
Will: Whats wrong?
Jack: Not sure,I am getting a awful feeling, something isnt right!
Will: well yea, were locked in the Brig and Thanks to you Blackbeard thinks I am a EUNICH
Jack: looks at Will with concern: no mate, somethings really bad wrong, I can feel it!! We have to get off of this ship and Find my family at once!!
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The next Morning, Elizabeth awakens to find heself in what appears to be a hospital room,
Elizabeth: where am I, whats going on, she begins to panic slightly
Jackson: Its ok Mother, I am here with you
Liz: son, whats happening?? Ill go get the Doctor for you, so he can explain
Doctor enters and looks at Liz: Mrs Sparrow
Liz enterupts befpre the doctor can say anything at all MY BABY
begins to cry, is my baby ok ?she says with fear
Doctor: for now mam
Liz: what do you mean
MD: mam, you have lost a lot of blood, your stress level is too dangerous to the health of your baby! You have to be on bed rest for the rest of your pregnancy if you want to save the life of your child
Liz: but what about Jack?? we have tyo find jack and Will, Looks at Jackson If I have to stay here, and I must, the pearl needs a Captian
Jackson, you have to take over and find your father! I am counting on you son, you are our only hope! Find Mr. Norrington, he can help you he knows these waters
Jackson: Mom, you can count on me, Promise me youll stay here and not try to come after father!
Liz: i promise! she says crying, this is all my fault, If I had not gotten so at jack, our baby would be safe
Jackson: Do not worry about anything, you need your rest, Please try and stay calm. I will bring father back safley
Jackosn reaches dow and kissed her, rubs her belly and says I love you both, see you soon mother
Liz: watching him walk out the door, the door closes and she begins to sob holding her pregnant belly she says, it ok baby, mommy will protect you , daddy will be home soon!
Gender: Female Location: 1431 Elm Street-in bed w/ Glen
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[In Blackbeard's Brig]
Will: Face it Jack, there's no way out.
Jack(trying to unlock the brig with a bone, sighs): There's always a way.
(One of blackbeard's crew comes down and seems to busy looking for something to even notice anything going around him, Jack and Will also see a ring of keys hanging from his pants)
(Jack looks back at Will and grins, then tosses him the bone)
Jack: Tell me salior-how's Blackbeard treatin' ya? Gettin' the gold you've always wanted? How about getting me out, and I will promise you all the treasure you've always wanted, what do you say to that?
Pirate: You're not getting out of there Sparrow. Blackbeard's got you for good.
Jack: I'm just saying...(while Jack continues to talk in a confusing way we see will reaching for the keys with the bone and sucessfully gets them and jack sees this)....you know when you're right, you're right. Blackbeard's got me.
Jack cant believe that Will has managed to get the keys
Jack: how in the world did you manage that! good work non the less
Will: ( looking really proud he gives a devilish grin) are you going to make me say it
Jack: say what? ( looking puzzeled)
Will : I am william Turner Savvy
Jack: not funny mate, ( lookinng un amused at Wills Mockeery)
Jack: whats your plan
Will: why is it me who always has to have a plan and usually I end up getting caught and you get away?
Jack: sounds good to me!! (unlocks the door to the brig and they both make their way out
Aboard the Black Peral
Jackson is standing at the top of the ship, looking through his fathers spy Glass
Gibbs: Land HO
Jackson: Isaballa, and Abi please come to shore with me, perhaps you can persuade Mr Norrington to coem and help us, the rest of you stay here and mind the boat
Jackson Knocks on the ddor of Norringtons mansion,
the door opens and we see Norrington
Jackson: Mr Norrington, we cam efor your help, mother and Father are both in danger
Isabell: Grandfather you have to help us
ABi: yes we desperatly need your help, you the only one who knows these waters
Norrie: where is Elizabeth, she knows them all the more better than I do
Jackson: looks down, shes in a hosptal in the next port over, she almost lost her baby, Doctors orders, she must stay there
Norrington, Ok I will help you
Jackson: I will fill you in on Blackbeard later
Norrie: BLACKBEARD, on no way, Ive changed me mind, I am NOT going after Blackbeard
isabella: looks at him with sad eyes, Grandfather please, we need your help
Norrie: sighs, alright, goes into to the house and bring with him, tons of weapons, were going to need these
(we see Elizabeth lying in the hospital bed, sleeping , when suddenly the window starts to raise up and a dark figure enetrs the room, the pirate grabs elizabeth frm behind , his hand over her mouth, she struggles,
Pirate : stay quiet missy or youll regret it
he pull sher out the window and thr dissapear into the darkness)
Elizabeth eyes pop open and shes panting for breath, she realizes it was all a dream, she look around her hospital room, grabs the candel next to her bed, puts on her robe
Elizabeth( rubs her pregnant tummy,) walks to the window and stares out into the sea
Elizabeth: looking out the window, Oh Jack, plese be alright, I so need you here with me right now. I know you will get out of this, I just hope you can forgive my behavior
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Jacky: Kate?? what on earth has happend to you, why are you here, where is Will
Kate: he was taken captive by Blackbeard and his crew,
Norrington: same for Jack as well I suppose?
Jackson: yes, Ill explain over some rum
Abi: no you wont young man, just becouse your parents are not here do not think you can drink al the rum you want
Jackson: (Sighs) looks at abi and grins Well it was worth a try
Norrington, Jacky and Jackson, head into the Captains cabin where Jackson begins to fill them in of the situation
we see the Black pearl swiftly skimming across the open sea and all of a sudden we hear cannon fire
Jackson , Norrington Abi, Jacky Alex and Isabella run out of the Captains Cabin to see Blackbeards ship firring upon them
Jackson: MR GIBBS
Gibbs: aye
Jackson: prepare the crew were going to fight back
Norrington: whats your plan
Jackson: huh what ? dont have much of one, just fight back
Norrie: uh you sound just like your father, we have to try and rescue your father and the Govener
Jackson: what about this, you take the long boat, row over, find Will and my father, rescue them and come back here to the Black pearl , here take my sword and gun incase you need extra help
Norrie: looking at Jackson, are you mad? thats a death trap for me, you seriously are just like your father
Isabella: we all fight, thats enough you two !!!! you are acting like children, people we care about are in danger , GET SERIOUS!!!!
everyone including the crew stands in shock that isabella had even raised her voice. she looks around at the crew
Isabella: DID YOU HEAR ME, LOAD THE CANNONS.
Gibbs: Aye sir, I mean mam
Jack and Will are in the process of tryin to come up with an escape plan when the notice that Blackbeard 's ship is firing upon the Black Pearl
Jack: this is great
Will: what how is this great they are firing at the pearl???
Jack: we can escpae unseen if all the crew is busy, quick, lets go
they Dive into the ocean and make way for the pearl
will: Damn this water is cold
Jack: such a wimp, swim Govener Eunich
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Jack and Will have now made it over to the BlackPearl and have begun to climb aboard from the back end of the ship. the entire crew is shhoting cannons, and firing guns at Blackbeards ship Including the wemon
Gibbs: this is mad, were firing and Jack and Will are in there
Jackson: I know but we have to do something!
Norrington: they will be fine, they can hold their own
Jack walks up behind the three of them soaking wet and says
Jack: fortunatly Mr Gibbs hes right
Jackson: Father, your ok!!
Jack: yes I am fine, Jack and Jackson hug and Jack feels so good to back with his family
Kate: Will!! They run into each others arms and embrace
Will: so good to be back in your arms, I missed you so much
Jack: yes he couldnt stop talking about you, even when Blackbeard was propositioning him
Kate: what?
Will: Nevermind, its just Jack being Jack
Jack: where is my wife, I need to see her
everyone looks down, Jackson steps forward with a sad look upon his face
Jack: what , whats wrong with Elizabeth,
Jackson: she is in a hospital, she almost lost the baby, she was so stressed over fighting with you, and then loosing you, she started hemoraging and almost lost the baby
Jack: you have to take me to her, Please take me to her, I have got to see her
Gibbs: right away sir
Jack walks intothe Captains Cabin, jackson follows
Jackson: father are you going to be ok
Jack: looks up at Jackson , I shouldnt have kept anything from her, its all my fault this happend to her
Jackson: I am sorry father, she will be ok , and so will the baby
Jack: I hope your right son, now if you don't mind Id like to be alone
Jackson: sure father, Ill be just out here if you need me
Jack: thnak you son
Jackson leaves and Jack begins to sob uncontrolably when he is left alone
Elizabeth sits alone in her hospital room, quite some time has passed since all of this began she is about 6 and a half months preganat now and she is really tired of being in the hospital room, and really worried about Jack, she hasent heard a word about him at all
Nurse: Ms. Sparrow, its time for your medicine
Liz: sure, she takes her medicine and looks up at the nurse
if my baby were born now would it survive?
Nurse: there is a great chance that he or she would, but there is also great chance that he or she wouldnt.
Liz: I see, thank you
Nurse leaves and Elizabeth lies down in the bed, Its been three months and I havent heard anything, I dont know what to do, should I leave and try to fibd them, or should I stay. she gets up and looks out the window, its a beautiful day and the sun is shinning bringht
Liz: oh jack, I ma so sorry, i love you so much, I wish you kew how much
Jack: I do know how much
Liz: JACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Liz turns around swiftly only to see Jack standing in her doorway, he runs to her and grabs her tightly and kisses her for what seems like an eternity
Jack: I am so sorry, I promise to always be here for you, I will never keep anythiing from you again
Liz: I am so sorry too, I have been so worried, I was just about to make a escape attempt to try and find you myself
both of them are crying, they are so happy to be wih each other again
Jack: come on lets get you home mrs. Sparrow
Liz: Gladly Mr Sparrow
they begin to pack her things
Liz: what about blackbeard?
Jack: we escaped, he is sure to be after me again soon I am sure
Liz: do you really think its safe for us to go home then?
Jack: where else can we go luv
Liz: England? Only for a while
Jack: we cant run from him luv, I will have to face him one day soon and I will have to fight... lets go home and get you some lunch
Jack and liz exit the room and head for the Pearl.
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Oct 18th, 2006 04:30 PM
you sound just like your father, we have to try and rescue your father and the Govener
