silver_tears
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Don't Drink and Drive
Near to the door,
he paused to stand,
as he took his class ring,
off her hand.
All who were watching,
did not speak,
as a silent tear,
ran down his cheek.
And through his mind,
the memories ran,
of the moments they walked,
and ran in the sand (hand and hand).
But now her eyes were so terribly cold,
for he would never again,
have her to hold.
They watched in silence,
as he bent near,
and whispered the words......
I LOVE YOU" in her ear.
He touched her face and started to cry,
as he put on his ring and wanted to die,
and just then the wind began to blow,
as they lowered her casket,
into the snow....
This is what happens,
to men alive.....
when friends let friends....
drink and drive.
Don't drink and drive!
Oct 23rd, 2004 04:58 AM
Pantera
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Wow
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Oct 23rd, 2004 05:00 AM
silver_tears
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I do too
It's well written.
Oct 23rd, 2004 05:00 AM
Spearhead
Prophet
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like i needed more of a reason not to...
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Oct 23rd, 2004 05:00 AM
silver_tears
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I got that as an email
Oct 23rd, 2004 05:01 AM
misha
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its giving me goosbumps and sending shivers to me on a 30 degree (celcius) day
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Oct 23rd, 2004 05:01 AM
Sweet Escape
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That was amazing
Oct 23rd, 2004 05:05 AM
silver_tears
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I think so
Feb 21st, 2005 05:38 PM
Ms Chelle
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it reminds me of the on i posted in the poetry forum. this one gave me chills as the other one did.
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Feb 21st, 2005 05:40 PM
BDTnRDE
Army Of One
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don't drink and drive, you might hit a bump and spill your drink
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Feb 21st, 2005 05:47 PM
SIC_666
You Made Me....
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Feb 21st, 2005 05:47 PM
BDTnRDE
Army Of One
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i am pretty freaking hilarious
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Feb 21st, 2005 05:50 PM
SIC_666
You Made Me....
Gender: Male Location: Oblivion
Yea
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Feb 21st, 2005 05:52 PM
BDTnRDE
Army Of One
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what was this thread about again sorry
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Feb 21st, 2005 05:53 PM
lil bitchiness
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Oh my god. Some people, seriously...
Nice thread, Irene.
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Feb 21st, 2005 05:59 PM
silver_tears
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quote: Originally posted by shellie
it reminds me of the on i posted in the poetry forum. this one gave me chills as the other one did.
link please
Feb 21st, 2005 06:04 PM
Korri
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Yeah it makes you think
Feb 21st, 2005 06:05 PM
Ms Chelle
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Feb 21st, 2005 06:06 PM
lil bitchiness
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Wow, thats beautiful.
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في هذا العالم ثلاثة أشخاص أفسدوا البشرية : راعي غنم , طبيب و راكب الجمال , و راكب الجمال هو أسوأ نشال و أسوأ مشعوذ بين الثلاثة
Feb 21st, 2005 06:10 PM
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