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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
 Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
A Poem For a Lady
See the sapphires roll down her cheek,
See the warrior humble and meek,
See him leave her week upon week,
See him find the battles he'd seek,
Watch the Lady cry out in pain,
Watch her hold back and refrain,
Watch her wait again and again,
Watching for him in freezing rain.
Fearing the day he will not return,
Fearing his flag on the field will burn,
Fearing he will lose the loving yearn,
Fearing all she'll have is his urn.
He knows she needs not fear his life,
He knows he pledged long ago to his wife,
He know her turmoil and her strife,
He know he'll return to his fife.
She'll be waiting out in the rain,
She'll be standing in the snow again,
She'll never become too plain,
She'll be all he desires, no different, the same.
Just a quickie I wrote umm, like a few minutes ago. Hope you enjoy.
Copyright Sir William Mauz, 2005
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Jan 14th, 2005 09:53 PM |
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Trickster
True KMC Jester
 Gender: Male
Location: United Kingdom |
I like the repetition. 
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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
Death only gives another set of choices.
He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.
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Jan 15th, 2005 07:44 PM |
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Syren
dreaming
 Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose |
Yeah, I agree, I think your poem has a very strong sense of rhythm and unity.... I use that structure in my work quite a lot Well written.
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Jan 17th, 2005 08:40 AM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
danke. i try to do a little of all types of poems, this one just flows together in my head well enough to use this style.
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Jan 17th, 2005 07:29 PM |
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Syren
dreaming
Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose |
It's a comfortable style isn't it? I find myself at ease when using repetition, I can concentrate more closely on my vocabulary that way 
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Jan 17th, 2005 07:50 PM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
Ja, eet ees gut. ha ha ha.
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Jan 18th, 2005 04:20 AM |
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Syren
dreaming
Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose |
Das ist sehr gut, Ja? 
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Jan 18th, 2005 08:45 AM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
Ja. Ich bein gut. Wundebar! heh heh. Sprechen so little Deutche. oi... I can mostly just get around a biergarten, not much else. hahaha.
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Jan 18th, 2005 06:39 PM |
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Syren
dreaming
Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose |
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Jan 19th, 2005 08:28 AM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
Hahaha, 1st gen amaerican, but soooo close to being born in Das Fuherlund, sans Fuher. fascism bad. ehh, but my cool family is German, so i like them better.
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Jan 19th, 2005 10:06 PM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
Love the movie quotes, btw. ( not all of us think through our collective genetilia. just most. )
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Jan 19th, 2005 10:09 PM |
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Syren
dreaming
Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose |
My family are a weird mixture of Romany gypsy and northerners  I'm a mutt 
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Jan 20th, 2005 09:57 AM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
hahahahah. yeah, the best kind of person. haha.
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Jan 20th, 2005 05:46 PM |
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Trickster
True KMC Jester
Gender: Male
Location: United Kingdom |
Nein... Syren, wo kommst du? In England? Hast du ein Hause in Northumberland?
Dunno if that's the correct structure for the last sentence... 
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"If clowns warred on monkeys, and the monkeys had guns, and were trained to use them, who would win?"
Death only gives another set of choices.
He who dies with the most toys. Still dies.
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Jan 20th, 2005 05:51 PM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
Lucky You. haha.
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Jan 26th, 2005 06:12 PM |
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justjakk
Evil Bunny
 Gender: Male
Location: In written pages |
yea, Dreamin' hear is just a goof from somewhere. Just so happens to live in Alabama. Hey Willie Mul, make sure your get linked to someones internet. That way i can pick on you online and you cant come over to the house and whollop me. hehehehe.
Waiting for my aunt to get home so i can borrow her E version of xp so i can fix that pc you gave me. When thats dont, i will have two pcs to play around with. Get both hooked with dsl so i can switch back and forth. Then when i get up the cash, i can send you a letter and we can make plans for me to come to dall too.
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Jan 31st, 2005 01:01 AM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
Das ist gut, mein hund. Although, JJ, i will DESTROY YOU!!!!! mwahhahahahahahahahah!!!!! 
You cannot escape the madness I bring,
Nor find any shelter on which to cling,
I spread my chaos through the centuries,
Like the most virulent destructive disease,
My insanity draws you nearer still,
As you sense the biting chill,
My mind swallows you up wholly afraid,
No time to rethink the choice you have made,
Welcome to the ride of your life for eternity,
You'll soon laugh along maniacally with me.
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Jan 31st, 2005 06:17 PM |
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
 Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada |
I like your poems DreamingWarrior!! They're good!
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Apr 10th, 2005 06:49 AM |
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go! |
gratze cold. is nice to be appreciated.
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