My thoughts are not my own
We sit huddled being told what to do and what to believe by a mere box
I once had a thought but my individuality was squashed upon like every ant
America the shining emblem once filled with promise and truth and peace
now i see paved causeways dirty liars cheaters fathom plague
We seek to control all others of fear of becoming controlled ourselves
boys adn girls its happened your thoughts and existance is controlled by this imperialist weapon Fight for Freedom and fight for a non existant tomorrow, oh youll have there tomorrow iam sure of this but is it your tomorrow no YOU will BUY THIS KEEP THIS FIGHT AND DIE FOR THIS BELIEVE US IF YOU DONT YOU ARE A PROBLEM EASILY CORRECTED
I sit and cry not knowing why our country has been taken down this path
Liberals conservatives stupidest things ive ever heard it isnt those parties it is the socialist and neo corporate fascists that are in war
fight for us die for us why cant i live for me?
a lil critism would be nice
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romans,greeks,germans,russians all fell WOOT HERE COMES AMERICA
Last edited by brandino on Jan 31st, 2005 at 03:21 AM
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH
i know im right no your not yes iam no your not yes iam
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i know im right no your not yes iam no your not yes iam
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH
i know im right no your not yes iam no your not yes iam
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i know im right no your not yes iam no your not yes iam
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH
i know im right no your not yes iam no your not yes iam
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH
i know im right no your not yes iam no your not yes iam
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH
i know im right no your not yes iam no your not yes iam
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH
i know im right no your not yes iam no your not yes iam
BOOM
Gender: Female Location: every which way but loose
The first one is cool, but the second I guess you were aiming for something raw and effective but personally, you just missed your target. How about you actually write a different line between all the 'Blah blahs'? Just a thought