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Worried Starting on my new interest - poetry

Next week I have school holiday, so I will be able to write more poetry... I'm quite new to poetry, so hopefully I can get some comments on whether I am doing right or wrong..

[email protected] Philosophicus made me interested in poetry now... I feel like I can write about anything!!!


...Memories...

Memories of mine are everlasting,
Grave to the heart, so as to the mind,
Given time, hope and trust,
All that ever remains, will forever past...


By peterKSL


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...Heart to heart...

Heart to heart, mind to mind,
We connect each other with a bind.
Day by day we thought of each other,
How wonderful fate has brought us together...


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Old Post Feb 18th, 2005 12:21 AM
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...Familiarity...

People grow, and people age,
People learn and still make mistakes.
People think they know it all,
And till then, their head still aches.
But to me,
Familiarity is none,
But a wheel of fortune, that's all...

We often think that we know it all... but even the experience will tell you that you are still venturing in a superficial way of life... Everyone is eventually...

wheel of fortune - a circle where you can get rich easily and get broke easily... ; the life of fortune...


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Spiderman, my old friend, you have real talent!

Here's mine:

Quatromony

Ban those mad thoughts. Thrust them over
Mountains of our omnipotent
Ramblings in dreams. Don’t submit to
Cravings for sense. Spirals will dawn…

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Decode the below and you'll know who I am:

Sucihposolihp

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hmm.. this is your second account?? philo?


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...Insanity...

Butterflies everywhere,
But I can't find them anywhere.
What can I do,
To have me please,
So I won't go to moon to hunt for cheese..

Butterflies everywhere,
Closed my eyes and still see them.
What can I do,
To have me please,
So I won't wall-banging my head,
Just to have peace.


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...Misunderstanding...

What I think is there within,
But they who "thinks", thinks differently.
What can I do, to make me stand,
Just to make them misunderstand?


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...Her Birthday...

May each day be a good day,
To start my brand new day.
But what I wished everyday,
Was to celebrate her Birthday.
People dancing, singing and smiling that it was Chirstmas day,
But to me it's still her Birthday...


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...Lying...

Once I thought that people won't know,
Just to know that they do know.
What is best so that everyone knows,
That when people ask me if I know,
I wouldn't say NO.
Am I lying?


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...Courage...

What is courage,
When there is no barrage?
Is courage a heritage,
Or is it just my age?
Who can define courage,
When nobody has the courage?
You alone can trigger your courage...


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...Bring Me To My Grave...

Day is near dawn,
And I'm still holding on somehow,
Grasping for air, like a suffocated man,
Breathing wildly, that I might lose my life.

The room somehow has turned to mist,
Finding my way out of the mist, is just impossible.
Somehow I felt like I didn't have to breath anymore,
Relax is what I felt like doing,
And I laid back for eternal rest.


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hmm... I just knew that they have banned you philosophicus... sorry to hear that, but what they are doing SHOULD be temporary...


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Sorry, but all my poems are quite childish.. lol!!!

rolling on floor laughing I'll need to polish my english first... so if anyone wanted to laugh, just do it!!!


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...Facts of Life...

Elephants humongous, Lions roars.
What a person can do is just like a wh0r3.

People will do anything,
Just to reach their aim.
Consciously or sub-consciously is still their aim.
Destroying properties, or even
Eliminating their own kind.
These will always be the facts of life...


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I love writing poetry, i got a poem that i wrote recently published, the poem is called "My sqeaky friend kace" if anybody want to look at it, just email me at, [email protected]. Poetry rock my socks!!!!!!!!! Happy Dance

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Did Phil get banned again? Anyway, peter, your stuff is really good, keep it coming big grin


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thanks Syren... I thought it was childish.. I wanted to close this whole thread actually... lol..

About Phil.. that's last time..


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...Life of a lost hope...

Live my life, like none other way.
Thought to myself, that there should be a way.
I'm suffering everyday, even though time holds me back.
But then what is better, than just sit and lay back?

I've known few ways to conquer my depression,
But few leads to justification.
I live my life everyday, in one thought of lost hope.
Can I still be myself, even though "true life" has left me?

Time had come for me to say good-bye,
But I rejected it as time goes by.
I thought of a miracle, which I greatly longed for,
That I will find contentment in the future I hoped for.

What am I now? I utter to myself,
Am I just here, when there's no hope to regain what I lost?
To just sit back and wait for me to age?
Is there still hope, of bringing me back to life?

There could or not be an answer, but
If there's an answer - To that, I will have to regain some confidence...


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Those are some good poems peterKSL!! big grin


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...Heart to heart...

Heart to heart, mind to mind,
We connect each other with a bind.
Day by day we thought of each other,
How wonderful fate has brought us together...


I like this one...It reminds me strangely of 'Excalibur' by a certain David Brent:

I froze your tears and made a dagger,
and stabbed it in my cock forever.
It stays there like Excalibur,
Are you my Arthur?
Say you are.

Take this cool dark steeled blade,
Steal it, sheath it, in your lake.
I’d drown with you to be together.
Must you breathe? Cos I need Heaven.”


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Ou, Ou, Ou is all you Need...

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