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gls
Holy hell

Gender: Male
Location: in tule once again...:( away from m

my random poetry...

i'll post a poem every now and then here's one to start off...

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As I stand in the street
I think to my self in fear
If I died right now
Would anyone shed a tear?

As I walk on down the street
I say to myself silently,
“I don’t think anyone would”
And clench my hands tightly.

As I look up at the sky
I ask to anyone and to all
“Does anyone care?”
And to the ground I fall

As I lay there in the street
I listen for an answer
All I hear is screeching tires
And there I died, never getting an answer.


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Coldfire
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Oh that's sad!! But it's good... and I know that a lot of people think exactly that all the time.... unfortunately....


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gls
Holy hell

Gender: Male
Location: in tule once again...:( away from m

here's a lighter side of me...

in jus one hour
i had a crush
when i felt ur skin
i felt a rush

in jus two hours
i held u tight
when u smile
ur the perfect sight

in jus three hours
i fell in love
when u kiss me
i can't get enough

in jus this life
i will love you
when u are happy
or when u feel blue.
always here for you.


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Coldfire
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That one is so cute! love


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gls
Holy hell

Gender: Male
Location: in tule once again...:( away from m

hehe thank you i wrote that about my boyfriend jeremy (kanashimi here on kmc)..


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Coldfire
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Awwwwww love I hope he appreciates it!


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gls
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Gender: Male
Location: in tule once again...:( away from m

i hope so too.. stick out tongue

btw there's pics of him in my pics thread in artwork forum
and in the official members pics thread


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Coldfire
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Oh cool! I'll go check that out! big grin


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quote: (post)
Originally posted by gls
here's a lighter side of me...

in jus one hour
i had a crush
when i felt ur skin
i felt a rush

in jus two hours
i held u tight
when u smile
ur the perfect sight

in jus three hours
i fell in love
when u kiss me
i can't get enough

in jus this life
i will love you
when u are happy
or when u feel blue.
always here for you.


this one is a really good poem ... the rhyming and everything fits so well!


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gls
Holy hell

Gender: Male
Location: in tule once again...:( away from m

thank you!

here's another poem of mine..

The day is here and I can’t wait,
Anxious and excited its here,
Today’s the day of our very first date.

Evenings here and we’re together,
Lost in your eyes,
Losing you I could not bare.

The night is young and I’m in love,
Lucky and great full that you love me,
You are even more than I dreamed of.


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Originally posted by gls
i'll post a poem every now and then here's one to start off...

Questions

As I stand in the street
I think to my self in fear
If I died right now
Would anyone shed a tear?

As I walk on down the street
I say to myself silently,
“I don’t think anyone would”
And clench my hands tightly.

As I look up at the sky
I ask to anyone and to all
“Does anyone care?”
And to the ground I fall

As I lay there in the street
I listen for an answer
All I hear is screeching tires
And there I died, never getting an answer.


I really like this! wink

The second one's also lovely. smile

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Coldfire
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Location: Vancouver, Canada

love Can I like cry now?? That was so sweet!! love


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gls
Holy hell

Gender: Male
Location: in tule once again...:( away from m

lol thanks for likin them!


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Coldfire
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Location: Vancouver, Canada

No problem! Thanks for posting them!! big grin


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AWWWWWWWWW to all of them! Sooooo good! big grin

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Miss_Faye
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Location: Hollyweird, California

I like big grin


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gls
Holy hell

Gender: Male
Location: in tule once again...:( away from m

thank you everybody! embarrasment


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gls
Holy hell

Gender: Male
Location: in tule once again...:( away from m

here's one of my fav's

The Day of Reckoning

The day of reckoning is here,
I walk down the hall,
Others run screaming in fear.

Blood drips from my arms,
The knife still clenched,
The blood keeping the blade warm.

Their bodies still lying on the floor,
But I had reasons to do this,
They hurt and angered me to my core.

I used to be the fly and they the spider,
But things have changed now,
Somebody’s paying the pied piper.


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Coldfire
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Location: Vancouver, Canada

Ooooooo... that one IS good!! It is very descriptive! big grin


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peterKSL
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ehehehe.... I'm the spider big grin


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