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my random poetry...
i'll post a poem every now and then here's one to start off...
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As I stand in the street
I think to my self in fear
If I died right now
Would anyone shed a tear?
As I walk on down the street
I say to myself silently,
“I don’t think anyone would”
And clench my hands tightly.
As I look up at the sky
I ask to anyone and to all
“Does anyone care?”
And to the ground I fall
As I lay there in the street
I listen for an answer
All I hear is screeching tires
And there I died, never getting an answer.
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Coldfire
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Oh that's sad!! But it's good... and I know that a lot of people think exactly that all the time.... unfortunately....
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Apr 10th, 2005 07:26 AM |
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here's a lighter side of me...
in jus one hour
i had a crush
when i felt ur skin
i felt a rush
in jus two hours
i held u tight
when u smile
ur the perfect sight
in jus three hours
i fell in love
when u kiss me
i can't get enough
in jus this life
i will love you
when u are happy
or when u feel blue.
always here for you.
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Apr 10th, 2005 07:32 AM |
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Coldfire
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That one is so cute!
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Apr 10th, 2005 07:36 AM |
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Gender: Male Location: in tule once again...:( away from m |
hehe thank you i wrote that about my boyfriend jeremy (kanashimi here on kmc)..
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Apr 10th, 2005 07:41 AM |
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Coldfire
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Awwwwww I hope he appreciates it!
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Apr 10th, 2005 07:43 AM |
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i hope so too..
btw there's pics of him in my pics thread in artwork forum
and in the official members pics thread
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Apr 10th, 2005 07:45 AM |
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Coldfire
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Oh cool! I'll go check that out!
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Apr 10th, 2005 07:52 AM |
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misha
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this one is a really good poem ... the rhyming and everything fits so well!
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Apr 10th, 2005 02:11 PM |
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gls
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Gender: Male Location: in tule once again...:( away from m |
thank you!
here's another poem of mine..
The day is here and I can’t wait,
Anxious and excited its here,
Today’s the day of our very first date.
Evenings here and we’re together,
Lost in your eyes,
Losing you I could not bare.
The night is young and I’m in love,
Lucky and great full that you love me,
You are even more than I dreamed of.
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Apr 11th, 2005 01:05 AM |
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I really like this!
The second one's also lovely.
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Apr 11th, 2005 02:33 AM |
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Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada |
Can I like cry now?? That was so sweet!!
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Apr 11th, 2005 02:34 AM |
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lol thanks for likin them!
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Apr 11th, 2005 02:36 AM |
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Coldfire
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No problem! Thanks for posting them!!
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Apr 11th, 2005 02:37 AM |
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bordom
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AWWWWWWWWW to all of them! Sooooo good!
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Apr 12th, 2005 08:09 PM |
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Miss_Faye
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I like
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gls
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thank you everybody!
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Apr 12th, 2005 08:27 PM |
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gls
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Gender: Male Location: in tule once again...:( away from m |
here's one of my fav's
The Day of Reckoning
The day of reckoning is here,
I walk down the hall,
Others run screaming in fear.
Blood drips from my arms,
The knife still clenched,
The blood keeping the blade warm.
Their bodies still lying on the floor,
But I had reasons to do this,
They hurt and angered me to my core.
I used to be the fly and they the spider,
But things have changed now,
Somebody’s paying the pied piper.
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Apr 13th, 2005 04:17 AM |
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Coldfire
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Ooooooo... that one IS good!! It is very descriptive!
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Apr 14th, 2005 03:11 AM |
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peterKSL
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ehehehe.... I'm the spider
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