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critias
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Location: United States

poetry by a male

poem written for a crush

Your eyes are so pretty,
Im sure your smart,
I won't forget the day that you
stole my heart,
I knew someday I would find a girl,
Who's eyes remind me of the prettiest
pearl,
And today I think I have truly found,
An angel who walks upon the ground.

by: Michael

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Jul 28th, 2005 06:45 AM

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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

Awww that's cute hun happy

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Jul 28th, 2005 07:24 AM

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DarkDethbringer
Kakow how you like me now

Gender: Male
Location: I cant come up with anything clever

lol is that TeenTitans if so nerd.....

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Alas I have Returned

well for now at least,

I'm unsure if i will stay for too long

Jul 28th, 2005 08:56 AM

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General_Iroh
White Guy

Gender: Male
Location: raxacoricofallapatorius

no he's not a nerd he's a super nerd

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Jul 28th, 2005 09:16 AM

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Lord Follen
Lord of Azarathian Elves

Gender: Male
Location: In a dream in a dream

god you people are so mean i liked it critias

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love D_A_R_E love I MISS YOU!!!!!! sad
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Jul 28th, 2005 02:51 PM

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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by DarkDethbringer
lol is that TeenTitans if so nerd.....

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Originally posted by GGgrievous725
no he's not a nerd he's a super nerd

Ummm excuse me, but that is none of your concern. It doesn't matter if he likes Teen Titans or not, because that's not what this thread is about. It's about his POEM, so if you have nothing to say about it, then please don't say anything at all. And if you two want to diss it, then use CONSTRUCTIVE critism thanks.

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Jul 28th, 2005 04:30 PM

critias
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Location: United States

Jul 28th, 2005 05:47 PM

critias
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Gender:
Location: United States

any 1 here?

Jul 28th, 2005 07:30 PM

critias
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Location: United States

Jul 28th, 2005 07:32 PM

critias
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Location: United States

My life is like a cold damp cave,
I really hate it all,
I'm sick of being treated like a slave,
I'm on the edge about to fall,

I'm sick of all that's happening,
My life really does suck,
My girlfriend tossed away her ring,
And now I'm out of luck,

I really can't go on like this,
My heart can't take the pain,
My love I'll never miss,
And I'll walk down Shadow Lane,

Now I can see,
That there is only one person
to trust,
and to say it I must,
That person is me.

by:
Michael

Jul 28th, 2005 08:29 PM

critias
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Location: United States

any 1 here?

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Jul 28th, 2005 08:48 PM

Cornilna
Dark Angel

Gender: Female
Location: Hetherfield

I loved them critias keep up the good work
~Winery~

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Great beast of the sky hear my cry
transform thyself from orb of light and bring me victory in this fight envelop the desert with your glow and cast your rage upon my foe unlock your hidden powers within so that together we may win apear in the shadow realm as I call your name THE WINGED DRAGON OF RA!!!!

Jul 28th, 2005 09:00 PM

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mewzoey
David's babe Kikyo 4ever

Gender: Female
Location: Fudel Japan (Inuyasha's world)

so did I do what u want and work hard and someday ppl will see
~Kikyo~

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Jul 28th, 2005 09:04 PM

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critias
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u girls still here?

Jul 28th, 2005 09:08 PM

Cornilna
Dark Angel

Gender: Female
Location: Hetherfield

I am but my sis had to go to work but she'll be back at 10:00pm my time

Jul 28th, 2005 09:13 PM

critias
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Location: United States

do u like yu gi oh because that saying at the bottom of your words are from

Jul 28th, 2005 09:25 PM

Cornilna
Dark Angel

Gender: Female
Location: Hetherfield

yes I do but my sister's sig is right my isn't and I have the WINGED DRAGON OF RA but Kikyo has all 3 gods she's so luckey

Jul 28th, 2005 09:36 PM

critias
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Location: United States

Someday the skies will burn,
And it will rain fire,
At that time we all will learn,
That the temerature will get higher
and higher,

Some people will walk into flames,
And some might even die,
Some might even go crazy,
And then the birds won't fly,

Then a light will shine down on us,
And the fire will disapear,
Campers will leave their campus,
One more thing will disapear,
And that is all the Fear.

by:michael

Jul 28th, 2005 09:42 PM