Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
hahaha yeah, some christians here. can't always tell by my writings, which is my humanity taking over... nice to see a fellow servant though. good poem. hahah and FIF! sweet tunes. hahah!
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Sent from heaven to raise some hell.
Sounds like a KKK enrollment chant. Utterly disgusting.
__________________ Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.
Uff da! Hey, it's me again (its sorta been a WHILE), but here is a poem from me. Now, before you read it, I should let you know that I only write to please my God, the God of the Bible, and I know that not everyone agrees with me, and don't expect you to either. And I am fully aware that by putting my writings in view of the public it will be open to criticism, but I actually welcome it. I just started to do "creative wiriting", or at least try to, and I am very open to suggestions about improvements and so on. As for me, I try to do the same # of syllables for every line that rhymes, and that's about it, so here it is, enjoy!
How great is our God!
Who else is like our God?
Are you infinitely wise or
unconditionally loving?
Can you capture the colors of the sunset in a paint brush?
Can you create a masterpiece from a spec of dust?
Could you give the moon its majesty?
Or mold the clouds into a royal tapestry?
How great is our God!
Who else is like our God?
Do you have command over the seas?
Or tell the waves where they should go?
Do your whispers live in the breeze?
Or clothed in love always show?
How great is our God!
Who else is like our God?
Can you give the chord its note?
Could you envision the beauty in her eyes?
Can you tame the lightning bolt?
Or could you name all the stars in the sky?
How great is our God!
Who else is like our God?
Would you ever bleed for another?
Would you ever accept a stranger as a brother?
Can you give men pure words to say?
Or would your actions just lead them astray?
You think you are forever strong…
did you ever think you might be wrong?