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Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams

Gender: Male
Location: Camden Town, UK

Hallucination

Frozen music,
A moving photograph,
Something seems wrong
Something is not right

Memories come to life,
From the ashes, from the dead
Motionless is the fire
Like a simple mistake

The eyes flutter, expressionless
Secrets come unshaped
Lingering still is the darkness
Daylight seems forgotten

Honest words bathe in lies
Your voice, whispering riddles,
Unreal moonlight cries,
With the sweetness enslaved

Travelling back in time,
Seeking comfort in tension
Something is not right
In this silently dying obsession


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bordom
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*shivers* eek! AGAIN! you keep makin me shiver! stick out tongue great job!

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Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams

Gender: Male
Location: Camden Town, UK

Lol, I'm into Dark Poetry basically.


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shoe-freak
Jish!!

Gender: Male
Location: fighting bees in da toilet!

i thought so, you made me shiver!


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Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams

Gender: Male
Location: Camden Town, UK

Heh..


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bordom
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by shoe-freak
i thought so, you made me shiver!

see I'm not the only one stick out tongue
quote: (post)
Originally posted by Disturbing13
Lol, I'm into Dark Poetry basically.

I like dark poetry stick out tongue so mysterious

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Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams

Gender: Male
Location: Camden Town, UK

I'm into Love Poetry too. But I don't write alot of Love Poems. I've had to many Relationships and be heartbroken to write any love poems.


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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

That's dark, and disturbing... but really well written

Also, would you mind consolidating your work so it's all in one thread?


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snehin
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Location: bangalore,India

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Disturbing13
Frozen music,
A moving photograph,
Something seems wrong
Something is not right

Memories come to life,
From the ashes, from the dead
Motionless is the fire
Like a simple mistake

The eyes flutter, expressionless
Secrets come unshaped
Lingering still is the darkness
Daylight seems forgotten

Honest words bathe in lies
Your voice, whispering riddles,
Unreal moonlight cries,
With the sweetness enslaved

Travelling back in time,
Seeking comfort in tension
Something is not right
In this silently dying obsession
kool


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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

I missed that one.... it like gave me shivers too


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Angelina_Taylor
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Gender: Unspecified
Location: Canada

Thanks for plagiarizing my poem. It makes me feel special.

Oh. And by the way. Your stupid site won't even let me post the link to the original poem I wrote. In this case:

Please go to poems-and-quotes.com and search for "Angelina Taylor". The title should come up, it's "Hallucinations".

Don't ever steal from me again. It pissed the **** out of me.

Cheers,

Taylor``

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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Angelina_Taylor
Thanks for plagiarizing my poem. It makes me feel special.

Oh. And by the way. Your stupid site won't even let me post the link to the original poem I wrote. In this case:

Please go to poems-and-quotes.com and search for "Angelina Taylor". The title should come up, it's "Hallucinations".

Don't ever steal from me again. It pissed the **** out of me.

Cheers,

Taylor``

WHAAAAAAAAT?!? You're saying this is your poem??? Oh boy....


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Angelina_Taylor
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Location: Canada

Yes, it is. I can finally upload a link here. What the hell is it with new people not being able to post links?!

Check out the ****ing posting dates.

Good day.

Taylor``

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dar...s.php?id=466397

Last edited by Angelina_Taylor on Oct 17th, 2005 at 11:18 AM

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Ya Krunk'd Floo
Moving with the swell.

Gender: Male
Location: West of the Sun.

Oh, man...That's funny! Some people are such sad-sacks...


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Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.

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NunYahBidness
You can stop looking, now

Gender: Male
Location: ...cause I'm right here yo!!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Can anyone say, DORK??!!

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Angelina_Taylor
Junior Member

Gender: Unspecified
Location: Canada

Hmmmmm.. I hope you aren't talking about me :P

Taylor``

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Angelina_Taylor
Junior Member

Gender: Unspecified
Location: Canada

By the way.

Will the moderators or admins ever delete this? It's still here, and it bothers me.

Please.

Taylor``

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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant

Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

welll, i was gonna say good poem, but dude, you are an ahole for stealing that poem. stay in brittania.


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Angelina_Taylor
Junior Member

Gender: Unspecified
Location: Canada

Do you even HAVE moderators for these discussion forums?!?!?!

Because really, this site needs them.

Taylor``

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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

Yeah there are mods here... if you want it taken, then PM lilbitchiness about it, cuz she doesn't have time to check every little thread smile


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