Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams
Gender: Male Location: Camden Town, UK
Hallucination
Frozen music,
A moving photograph,
Something seems wrong
Something is not right
Memories come to life,
From the ashes, from the dead
Motionless is the fire
Like a simple mistake
The eyes flutter, expressionless
Secrets come unshaped
Lingering still is the darkness
Daylight seems forgotten
Honest words bathe in lies
Your voice, whispering riddles,
Unreal moonlight cries,
With the sweetness enslaved
Travelling back in time,
Seeking comfort in tension
Something is not right
In this silently dying obsession
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Aug 23rd, 2005 07:56 PM
bordom
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location:
*shivers* AGAIN! you keep makin me shiver! great job!
Aug 23rd, 2005 08:02 PM
Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams
Gender: Male Location: Camden Town, UK
Lol, I'm into Dark Poetry basically.
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Aug 23rd, 2005 08:03 PM
shoe-freak
Jish!!
Gender: Male Location: fighting bees in da toilet!
i thought so, you made me shiver!
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King Jish
Aug 23rd, 2005 08:06 PM
Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams
Gender: Male Location: Camden Town, UK
Heh..
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Aug 23rd, 2005 08:07 PM
bordom
Senior Member
Gender: Female Location:
quote: (post ) Originally posted by shoe-freak
i thought so, you made me shiver!
see I'm not the only one
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Disturbing13
Lol, I'm into Dark Poetry basically.
I like dark poetry so mysterious
Aug 23rd, 2005 08:08 PM
Blood_Flower
Everything Inside Screams
Gender: Male Location: Camden Town, UK
I'm into Love Poetry too. But I don't write alot of Love Poems. I've had to many Relationships and be heartbroken to write any love poems.
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Aug 23rd, 2005 09:02 PM
Syren
dreaming
Gender: Female Location: every which way but loose
That's dark, and disturbing... but really well written
Also, would you mind consolidating your work so it's all in one thread?
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ThorinWoofer
Aug 25th, 2005 01:59 PM
snehin
Darth wolf
Gender: Male Location: bangalore,India
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Disturbing13
Frozen music,
A moving photograph,
Something seems wrong
Something is not right
Memories come to life,
From the ashes, from the dead
Motionless is the fire
Like a simple mistake
The eyes flutter, expressionless
Secrets come unshaped
Lingering still is the darkness
Daylight seems forgotten
Honest words bathe in lies
Your voice, whispering riddles,
Unreal moonlight cries,
With the sweetness enslaved
Travelling back in time,
Seeking comfort in tension
Something is not right
In this silently dying obsession
kool
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Aug 25th, 2005 03:24 PM
Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
I missed that one.... it like gave me shivers too
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Aug 25th, 2005 05:41 PM
Angelina_Taylor
Junior Member
Gender: Unspecified Location: Canada
Thanks for plagiarizing my poem. It makes me feel special.
Oh. And by the way. Your stupid site won't even let me post the link to the original poem I wrote. In this case:
Please go to poems-and-quotes.com and search for "Angelina Taylor". The title should come up, it's "Hallucinations".
Don't ever steal from me again. It pissed the **** out of me.
Cheers,
Taylor``
Oct 17th, 2005 03:55 AM
Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
quote: (post ) Originally posted by Angelina_Taylor
Thanks for plagiarizing my poem. It makes me feel special.
Oh. And by the way. Your stupid site won't even let me post the link to the original poem I wrote. In this case:
Please go to poems-and-quotes.com and search for "Angelina Taylor". The title should come up, it's "Hallucinations".
Don't ever steal from me again. It pissed the **** out of me.
Cheers,
Taylor``
WHAAAAAAAAT?!? You're saying this is your poem??? Oh boy....
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Oct 17th, 2005 07:24 AM
Angelina_Taylor
Junior Member
Gender: Unspecified Location: Canada
Last edited by Angelina_Taylor on Oct 17th, 2005 at 11:18 AM
Oct 17th, 2005 11:15 AM
Ya Krunk'd Floo
Moving with the swell.
Gender: Male Location: West of the Sun.
Oh, man...That's funny! Some people are such sad-sacks...
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Full fathom five thy father lies;
Of his bones are coral made;
Those are pearls that were his eyes:
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange.
Oct 17th, 2005 12:23 PM
NunYahBidness
You can stop looking, now
Gender: Male Location: ...cause I'm right here yo!!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Can anyone say, DORK??!!
Oct 17th, 2005 03:03 PM
Angelina_Taylor
Junior Member
Gender: Unspecified Location: Canada
Hmmmmm.. I hope you aren't talking about me :P
Taylor``
Oct 18th, 2005 01:40 AM
Angelina_Taylor
Junior Member
Gender: Unspecified Location: Canada
By the way.
Will the moderators or admins ever delete this? It's still here, and it bothers me.
Please.
Taylor``
Oct 18th, 2005 03:15 AM
DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant
Gender: Male Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!
welll, i was gonna say good poem, but dude, you are an ahole for stealing that poem. stay in brittania.
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Sent from heaven to raise some hell.
Oct 23rd, 2005 08:00 PM
Angelina_Taylor
Junior Member
Gender: Unspecified Location: Canada
Do you even HAVE moderators for these discussion forums?!?!?!
Because really, this site needs them.
Taylor``
Oct 25th, 2005 01:56 AM
Coldfire
<3 <3 <3
Gender: Female Location: Vancouver, Canada
Yeah there are mods here... if you want it taken, then PM lilbitchiness about it, cuz she doesn't have time to check every little thread
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Oct 25th, 2005 02:28 AM
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