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Wonderer
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Gender: Male
Location: South Africa

Enlightenment

I see
the emptiness in the fullness of illusion;

I feel
the nothingness in nature's embrace,

I taste
the somethingness of selflessness
when you love me as part of you.

I smell
the fragrance of freedom from judgement
when you place me beside you.

I hear
the resonance of giving in your open voice.

I am aware
that all the world need is loving and kindness.

Nov 29th, 2005 08:05 AM

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XjainaX
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Gender: Female
Location: *nowhere*

I likes it, simple and powerful....

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Nov 29th, 2005 04:09 PM

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lil bitchiness
Your heart is my pinata

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Location: Old World

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Namaste Wonderer,

I like your poem and its strong referance to Buddhist ideology, but being one myself, this would make me a little bias.

Metta,
lil b

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Nov 29th, 2005 05:17 PM

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Wonderer
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Gender: Male
Location: South Africa

Thanks for the kind words. My poetry have become a lot simpler...and if I may, more striking than my previously all too convoluted and complex jumble of mere words(those poems under the name of Philosophicus).

Here's another one:

Inside the void
you will find yourself no self; you will not find yourself.

Through the misty void and beyond its continuum
there is only finding; then realising; then floating bliss.

Having become one with the rhythm
of the void of all being
there will be only being with no form; no dukkha

and we will be a possibility of purest peace

Dec 2nd, 2005 12:57 PM

bogen
Enough QQ more pew pew

Gender: Male
Location: purgatory

hey man good poetry, you should think about doing some ZEN, iv'e found it very good, i do a standing version in karate.
iv'e broadended my fields by employing still techniques.
i think is that what your talking about in the first, being so yourself that your aware of your own concionsness. sort of live watching yourself through the part of yorself you never knew you had.

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