bogen
Enough QQ more pew pew
Gender: Male Location: purgatory
peotry by the "b"
ok, enjoy my thread and whats in it.
feel free to give comments and suggestions, i welcome them.
OK, the first of many.
lady midnight comes and visits me.
we talk, we play. until im me
when im me we fight, we battle.
she knows im storng enough to make her rattle
but am i strong enough to let her win
i don't know you tell me?
she comes on rainy days tho te power of three
and makes me feel prehaps i should flee
i thought i knew her, thought i did
but she changes like the wind at sea
she sings me songs, all night long
i don't know why i just hear them ring
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Dec 24th, 2005 07:09 AM
Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: tired of being human...
You do need to work on your spelling and grammar some hmm? Otherwise I think it's a pretty good start.
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Dec 24th, 2005 07:17 AM
bogen
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Gender: Male Location: purgatory
ya damn right im shocking, insulting to my mother
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Dec 24th, 2005 07:18 AM
Coldfire
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quote: (post ) Originally posted by bogen
ya damn right im shocking, insulting to my mother
lol
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Dec 24th, 2005 07:39 AM
bogen
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Gender: Male Location: purgatory
true though, she used to give me a hard time but i think she just gave up, the poor thing
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Dec 24th, 2005 07:56 AM
bogen
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Gender: Male Location: purgatory
the trees are tall
but now it's the mall
we plunder and pilage, and wonder
why it is that the earths falling asunder
we've been trying to fix it
for at least ten times six
though i think i have to say
were getting better, much better at cleaning
but in fifty years time will it have any meaning?
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Dec 24th, 2005 10:07 AM
Coldfire
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true that, quite true
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Dec 27th, 2005 05:05 AM
Camille's_Death
Forever lost..lol..lamo!!
Gender: Female Location: Some where
like your pomes yea spelling and grammer really grammer becuase with out it you wont make sense
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Dec 27th, 2005 05:10 AM
bogen
Enough QQ more pew pew
Gender: Male Location: purgatory
im so sick of all the lies, of all the politics that i despice
all i want is the truth
it's simple, it's easy
it's better than all the shezy that makes me quezy.
im done
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Jan 13th, 2006 08:47 AM
Roulette
Freak
Gender: Female Location: Arkham Asylum
good job on your poems, I liked em ^-^
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Jan 13th, 2006 02:26 PM
bogen
Enough QQ more pew pew
Gender: Male Location: purgatory
why thank you, but i think im outa steam for poetry.writers block is killing me badly.
coolspark i.e. coldfire HELP!!!
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Jan 14th, 2006 06:23 AM
Roulette
Freak
Gender: Female Location: Arkham Asylum
no problamo^-^
lol...dw bout it..happens to a lot of writers
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Jan 14th, 2006 08:39 AM
bogen
Enough QQ more pew pew
Gender: Male Location: purgatory
so damn anoying everynight i get these great one linners, like really good rymes that i know i should post but never do.
and sometimes i get ideas for a huge saga poem like 1000 words long.
i just wish i could follow through on my ideas
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Jan 14th, 2006 03:32 PM
~Forever*Alone~
Empress
Gender: Female Location: EveryWhere And NoWhere
omg im like that too!!! i think about a great poem right when im falling asleep... it really sucks...
great poems, some were even awsome. i enjoyed that
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Jan 15th, 2006 04:07 AM
bogen
Enough QQ more pew pew
Gender: Male Location: purgatory
i thinks it's funny but SO sad at the same time im like, MY GENIOUS IS WASTING AWAY!!!! mums like " wat genious!??!"
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Jan 15th, 2006 05:20 AM
bogen
Enough QQ more pew pew
Gender: Male Location: purgatory
a motion so pure it's almost sweet
it darlin and strong, but o so weak
hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind
makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak
it gives me strength wen times are tough
ot makes me hard, it makes me rough
it is so soft and often so cold
but then how is it welcoming and really so bold
i fend it of with a mental bif
but it's to fast and far to swift
it covers me twice then once more times two
all i can do is pray to you
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Jan 15th, 2006 05:40 AM
Coldfire
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Gender: Female Location: tired of being human...
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Jan 15th, 2006 05:40 AM
bogen
Enough QQ more pew pew
Gender: Male Location: purgatory
ya poor me
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Jan 15th, 2006 06:21 AM
Roulette
Freak
Gender: Female Location: Arkham Asylum
quote: (post ) Originally posted by bogen
a motion so pure it's almost sweet
it darlin and strong, but o so weak
hard, unwaivering like steel
flows like water, blows like wind
makes me strong, makes me hard
makes me soft, makes me weak
it gives me strength wen times are tough
ot makes me hard, it makes me rough
it is so soft and often so cold
but then how is it welcoming and really so bold
i fend it of with a mental bif
but it's to fast and far to swift
it covers me twice then once more times two
all i can do is pray to you
wow, great job on that...I really loved it
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Jan 15th, 2006 06:26 AM
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