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Maynards "Little Black book with me poems in"
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Ax3l
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 Maynards "Little Black book with me poems in"

Well, thats it.. I just started to get into poetry, so heres some of my new/newbie stuff


I killed a man

Today was the day
that i killed a man.
The wrong place at the wrong
time.
He knew it was coming
I didn't.
I didn't.
Maybe there is something wrong with me
Maybe i'm perfectlly fine.
But today was the day
I killed a man



so yeah, i'm new to Poetry so, be gentle.


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funky... is my new word of the week... aplies here....


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Originally posted by Lovely Murder
funky... is my new word of the week... aplies here....
Funky meaning good

of funky meaning stinky?


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Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
Well, thats it.. I just started to get into poetry, so heres some of my new/newbie stuff


I killed a man

Today was the day
that i killed a man.
The wrong place at the wrong
time.
He knew it was coming
I didn't.
I didn't.
Maybe there is something wrong with me
Maybe i'm perfectlly fine.
But today was the day
I killed a man



so yeah, i'm new to Poetry so, be gentle.

Twas a pretty good my young poet stick out tongue happy


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new poem

Friends

Friends are what make you
Friends.
Friends are what may break you
Friends.
Friends change you like clay.
Friends.
Friends make you be what they want you to be
Friends.
Friends are more important than individuality.
Friends.


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Good stuff. happy
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funky as in good.... but you i dont like.... your poems are fine though....


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Originally posted by Lovely Murder
funky as in good.... but you i dont like.... your poems are fine though....
woah...that came out of left field
quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ladyluck
Good stuff. happy


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Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
woah...that came out of left field

How come I didn't get a batting eyelashes smilie??


stick out tongue


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How come I didn't get a batting eyelashes smilie??


stick out tongue


stick out tongue
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why would you do that? you hate me....


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Originally posted by Coldfire
Twas a pretty good my young poet stick out tongue happy
quote: (post)
Originally posted by Lovely Murder
why would you do that? you hate me....
why dont you like me?


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Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
why dont you like me?

yay hehe big grin Got some more??


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yay hehe big grin Got some more??


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laughing out loud well I meant poetry but those are good too wink


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i dont dislike you, you hate me


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Originally posted by Coldfire
laughing out loud well I meant poetry but those are good too wink
I know, i figured that after i posted it...but, meh.
quote: (post)
Originally posted by Lovely Murder
i dont dislike you, you hate me
confused since when?


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Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
I know, i figured that after i posted it...but, meh. confused since when?

So give us some more poetry stick out tongue


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Originally posted by Coldfire
So give us some more poetry stick out tongue
I've gotta think


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Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
I've gotta think


Think faster.

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