KMC Forums - Terry's Poetry

Ummmm I'm new to poetry, and this is my first one. I would love it if people could tell me how it is. It is something I just whipped together without much thought.

Pain of Love

Another day of pain, another day of sorrow
as I sit alone in a dark cold room thinking to myself
of how I caused so much pain to you.
I know it means nothing, but I just got to say it.
It hurts me so that I had hurt you, even though I didn't mean to.
Tears fall from my eyes, as the pain in my heart grows.
Why couldn't I be strong, as strong as you?
I love you so, yet it is all gone, to late to go back.
No matter how much I want to, I know you don't care.

Another day of pain, another day of sorrow.
Not a day goes by, when I think of you.
It's all I can honestly do.
The touch of your gentle lips, pressing gently on mine.
And the beat of your heart is in sync with the beat of my own.
I can remember how it was, when it was just you and me all alone
With no one around, but us, and you say my name softly
making me feel all warm and fuzzy inside
yet I know it is too late to go back.
And I don't even know if you want me anymore.

Another day of pain, another day of sorrow.
It has been one year since I had hurt you
And the tears from my eyes haven't dried yet.
I do the same thing every night; I cry.
It feels like that it is my time to die
for I have hurt you, and I cannot live with myself.
I want things to go back to normal, but I know it cannot be
It is about time that I let you go, and set you free.
Giving you the chance to do what you and, and to see
to see the other things in life that you have missed.

Their is one thing I want you to know though;
the one thing that will never change at all.
I love you oh so much, and that I'm sorry.
I regret all the things I have done to you
and I just want you to know that.
No matter what happens, you will always be mine.
I will never love anyone else but you, so you know.
I will never forget about you, I will never forget about you.
You are the world to me, and I just want you to know that.

I am now moving along with life, dealing with the pain and sorrow I feel.
Not a day goes by, when the tears fall down from my cheeks, as I think about you.
When the sun goes down, I'm alone again in the dark cold room of mine.
It feels like that I've died, and lost faith in everything that I was taught.
I'm not as cheery as I use to be, I will never be the same as I once was.
Each day I feel pain, each day I feel sorrow.
I will never truly understand why I did those things to you
but I will always love you.

I will always love you, no matter what happens.

(Sorry I couldn't come up with a better ending.)

~Terry