Gender: Female Location: Reatred in my own little world
Princess Kuriko's Poems
This is a thread that I started for my poems and any one who likes them can say something and if you wanna have a one on one poetry competition to see if your better then me I'm down with that....
__________________ Sing the evil Sing the good.Join the battle join the blood.Run with the wild run with the wolves.I am a keeper of monsters and gools.Born human.Made a god.I am the gardian of all the land.That is what and who I am....
All of those who think there worthless, think again,you were made for a reason,
no matter what it is, you are great, you are special, and somewere in life some one needs you, so don't take the easy way out, for if you do you are the one who is selfish, not the rest of the world...........
Gender: Female Location: Reatred in my own little world
So I have started this series of poems for a book that I'm writing and Iwanna know if there any good.....
Fire
It's hot,and buetiful at the same time, it daces and licks at my skin,
I stare at it's mocking face, it tames my heart and makes me calm,
I reach for it, and it crawls onto my skin, it burns but i hold fast, I am not afraid of it, it starts to jump off, I smile at the word it wrote on my arm:The words FlameTamer was burned on my arm....
__________________ Sing the evil Sing the good.Join the battle join the blood.Run with the wild run with the wolves.I am a keeper of monsters and gools.Born human.Made a god.I am the gardian of all the land.That is what and who I am....
All of those who think there worthless, think again,you were made for a reason,
no matter what it is, you are great, you are special, and somewere in life some one needs you, so don't take the easy way out, for if you do you are the one who is selfish, not the rest of the world...........
Gender: Female Location: Reatred in my own little world
I don't have them...Go to Vampirefreaks.com and check out GothicFighterChick That's me!
I poems on there as well!
__________________ Sing the evil Sing the good.Join the battle join the blood.Run with the wild run with the wolves.I am a keeper of monsters and gools.Born human.Made a god.I am the gardian of all the land.That is what and who I am....
All of those who think there worthless, think again,you were made for a reason,
no matter what it is, you are great, you are special, and somewere in life some one needs you, so don't take the easy way out, for if you do you are the one who is selfish, not the rest of the world...........
Gender: Female Location: Reatred in my own little world
I have a friend named KrissGF on Vampirefreaks.com you can talk to him as well about poems....
He needs a few pointers....
__________________ Sing the evil Sing the good.Join the battle join the blood.Run with the wild run with the wolves.I am a keeper of monsters and gools.Born human.Made a god.I am the gardian of all the land.That is what and who I am....
All of those who think there worthless, think again,you were made for a reason,
no matter what it is, you are great, you are special, and somewere in life some one needs you, so don't take the easy way out, for if you do you are the one who is selfish, not the rest of the world...........
Gender: Female Location: every which way but loose
Hi, thanks for sharing your work
As Coldfire said, there are a few things that could be improved, such as spelling and punctuation. Have you thought about structuring your poems at all? It does help to give an air of professionalism, keep trying though. Hope to see more
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Mar 12th, 2006 11:51 AM
Love to see more from you 
Cool 
