KMC Forums - A quick poem i made

A lack of Fear

I fear no man
I fear no object
I am the blindspot, the oblivion of are creator
I am who I say i am

What i lack in brute
I compensate in brutality
Ill act on the spot
Ill kill on the spot

This is who i wish i am
If i continue to think this it will be who i am
Ill forget and abadon what i was
Become fearless, cowardless

If you can graspe the reason of life
Then it is not hard to become this way
This is your first and last life
What is the point of living it if you wont live its fullest potential

I'll never give myself a reason to regret
I wont ever look back
I live in the moment
I live here now, in the second, my existence is absolute

I am tommorows yesterday
I am yesterdays tommorow
I am todays today
Im now

In my opionon it needs a stronger structure and lacks orgainization. It wasnt something i spent alot of time on, and it wasnt something i just whipped together.

Constructive critisim appreciated